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Subject: My new video, it owns newbs
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I'm a brigadier grade 3 lvl 46

Overkills, rampage, untouchable, 3rd person sniping view dodging headshots and all with music :).

Please rate my video well, the last 7 I put up people didn't watch or rate its lame.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5xE1r_6_qDU&fmt=18

  • 11.06.2008 6:13 PM PDT

Please go here:
http://www.refresheverything.com/heatherscamp
and vote.
Foman banned me for asking people to vote. DO NOT STOP VOTING!

That is a very nice video.

Please, though, don't call them names, they try hard at what they do.

  • 11.06.2008 6:30 PM PDT
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haha yeah I know, I dont go to a newb and call them a newb I just leave thier party or win the game against them.

  • 11.06.2008 7:37 PM PDT

My Youtube Channel. For Gameplays and Montages.

Some nice clips in there but there is a whole lot of unnecessary footage. I will offer you some criticism to help your future montages. If you aren't interested in a montage and just wanted to throw some of your favorite clips together then disregard the criticism.

You have a lot of dead space in this montage that makes it incredibly long and somewhat boring as well. You could shorten up some of your clips by cutting unnecessary footage.
-For instance, don't show the entire untouchable just show the last few kills or even just the last kill.
-If it's a multikill just show the multikill don't show the kills before or after it.

You could also do some editing with your clips as well. If you got a sick noscope that is hard to see, use some slo mo on it or get a second angle on it.

Also, some vehicular stuff is cool if you're getting killtaks and whatnot (like your gauss clip) but showing double kills in a tank isn't very impressive and kind of bores the audience.

Just a few thoughts. Not meant to bring you down. I got tons of criticism on my montages and I used it to get better each time.

Check out my montages for more tips and tricks. Feel free to ask about any help or anything.
Here is the thread with my stuff.

Rhymetactics Quality Montages

  • 11.07.2008 2:18 PM PDT
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thanks man, i tried cutting some stuff out of the video between the big gaps in my video but clip by clip stuff didnt give very good feedback in my previous videos.

very good criticism thx because people are usually just like trash talking me lol

  • 11.07.2008 6:30 PM PDT