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Subject: so back to the omaha beach question

I'll be on my own side.

it was in Fall of Reach??

OH right when Sam blows the doors off the rebel base right???

[Edited on 7/4/2004 1:51:05 PM]

  • 07.04.2004 1:50 PM PDT
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Right, massive explosion. More firepower to the troops is how I see it.

  • 07.04.2004 1:51 PM PDT

I'll be on my own side.

yeah but the Fury-Tac nukes are up to the task.

  • 07.04.2004 1:52 PM PDT
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i still dont see how it matters
they still go BOOOOOOOM

  • 07.04.2004 1:52 PM PDT
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way cool story, but we have already done this in the game, but on a much much smaller scale, the silent cartographer begins with you forming a beachhead.
(dunno why people are discussing lil ol' me, i didnt know i created such an impact)



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  • 07.04.2004 1:54 PM PDT
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hahah tru enuff

  • 07.04.2004 1:55 PM PDT
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Posted by: elmicker
way cool story, (dunno why people are discussing lil ol' me, i didnt know i created such an impact)


funny

  • 07.04.2004 1:55 PM PDT

I'll be on my own side.

im gonna put this on HBO once i edit some things. any suggestions Hikaru??

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  • 07.04.2004 1:56 PM PDT
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intresting

  • 07.04.2004 1:59 PM PDT

I'll be on my own side.

somebody give me an idea for an awesome level or battle in Halo 2,and ill have a story by tomorrow.

  • 07.04.2004 2:02 PM PDT
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Posted by: Nedus
im gonna put this on HBO once i edit some things. any suggestions Hikaru??


Yes. I have a few.

First off make mulitple paragraphs. People will complain about it being one paragraph, and many won't even read it.

Secondly make it longer with more battle field detail. Here is an example that I like using.

" The medic rushed over to the wounded soldier that was on the ground. There was a small pool of blood that was on and around the ash stained soldier. A smell of rotting decay was heavy in the air around the injured man. The medic immediately found the wound. There was a large spot of burnt flesh with thick red blood pouring out of it.

He applied presure and the wounded marine screamed in pain. The medic kept applying presure with one hand as he tried to grab a canister of biofoam. His hands were slick with red blood and began to shake against the fidgeting marine. He popped the top off of the biofoam canister and forced it into the wound. "

Stuff like that. The readers want a vivd description of what's going on. And make sure you run a spell checker before hand as well. I aslo recommend using the HTML HBO uses.

  • 07.04.2004 2:02 PM PDT

I'll be on my own side.

yeah i know about the paragraph thing. ive submitted fan fic to HBO. dont you have the same name on HBO,because i think you posted a comment on it.

  • 07.04.2004 2:05 PM PDT
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I have the same name everywhere.

  • 07.04.2004 2:09 PM PDT

I'll be on my own side.

yeah i thought so.

  • 07.04.2004 2:11 PM PDT

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