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Posted by: Max2107
It's pretty good, there are some points of criticism I would like to bring to your attention. First, I would suggest possibly using the standard 8.5 x 11 format, it's just easier, in my opinion. Second, perhaps you shouldn't use the same size image for every "box," per se, vary it a little throw in a panoramic across the middle, for example. Third, since you obviously have basic image editing talents, I would suggest possibly enhancing certain image to possibly capture a certain mood that you are trying to achieve, and I don't mean just throwing on a filter.
What program are you using to edit this? Photoshop/MS Paint? There is a program out there that I have played around with called "Comic Life," that is basically a comic creator that comes with different templates, fonts, etc. and can be saved as .pdf file if you ever want to print it out.
Other than that it's very well done!
Thanks for the input. I actually don't just use a simple filter, since it's already used (Ex: Reclaimer) and I do intend on using more effects in the future, especially for action scenes. I like the HD format, and over time once I get more familiar with the program I'm using I'll start mixing it up, I'm sorry for making it a little bland and hope to soon change that. The program I'm currently using is Adobe Photoshop Elements 6.0, and it's fun to use...however slightly on the frustrating side (not easily able to make shapes with borders, ect.), I'll look into Comic Life though, maybe it'll be easier to use.
Thanks again for the input, I'll try my hardest at improving over time, and also releasing frequently, as in hopefully every other day.
It'd be cool to see this go mainstream, but I guess that just depends on my work on it.
Note: Oops! I left out a panel on page two! It's not too entirely vital, however I'll try to get in soon, sorry!
[Edited on 11.11.2008 6:19 PM PST]