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Subject: OK Let me have your honest opinions.
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That was great although I was kinda pulling for the elite...

  • 07.07.2004 11:02 AM PDT

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To tell you the truth, I actually kinda was too. It's wierd but I already got attached to KhePal. And this was just an experiment!!!

  • 07.07.2004 11:40 AM PDT
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Yeah, got to say, well done on the story, it was great. You know you could've probably fitted each section into one post, but I also see where that couldv'e caused problems.

You have inspired me to write my own Halo stories. Instead of putting them on a website, I will probably just post them on this forum.

I will use the same kinda of approach as you did, where Cortana isn't too involved in the storyline of things and everything is in a vague timeframe so it can relate to any part of the storyline (on the Halo of Halo:CE, Earth or another Halo installation).

  • 07.07.2004 3:02 PM PDT
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love the ending, hunting trip lol, make sure u post it with a name we'll kno is from u, like, give me ur honest oppinion part 2

  • 07.07.2004 4:52 PM PDT

[color=white]Great experiment! I enjoyed the ending very much.
I'll be looking for another experiment in the future. Have you thought about posting these on halo.bungie.org, too?[/color]

  • 07.07.2004 5:53 PM PDT
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thanks for the story!!! i really liked it! hope you make a new one just as good if not better soon!

  • 07.07.2004 6:38 PM PDT

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You know I had not thought of putting it on HBO, but those guys are usually way, way better than me. HBO is where I lurk, but the Big Dogs play there. Still if the suggestion is there, I just may...

  • 07.07.2004 7:22 PM PDT
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this has given me an idea to write one of my own, but im new at this whole thing
what would be the best way to post it?

  • 07.07.2004 8:47 PM PDT

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I used my chapters articles section and linked from the forum to there. You are welcome to use it if you do not have a chapter of your own, I have an Articles section for Public use. No joining necessary. Good luck with your story!!!

  • 07.07.2004 9:55 PM PDT
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can i have a web address for that articles section?
im ignorant, so none of that helped me

  • 07.07.2004 10:04 PM PDT
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Great story! Sounds like part of the book. Keep on writing.

  • 07.07.2004 10:05 PM PDT

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Just click on the Link in my signature, then click on the Public Articles Database on the sidebar. It should be just under Revitalization.

  • 07.07.2004 10:06 PM PDT
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k i got it. this is my first story ive ever written, and i didnt spend too much time on it, but hey might as well post it and see what ppl think

http://seventhcolumn.bungie.net/perlbin/blam.pl?file=/fanclub /10877/databases/view_article.html&dbid=38473&arid=0C EEE8B0-EA58-4F82-A967-3D1428D8DDB9&page=1&rowsperpage =20

  • 07.07.2004 10:18 PM PDT
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did it work? i think i did the link wrong

  • 07.07.2004 10:22 PM PDT

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When you are going to make a link, just follow the instructions on the right hand side of the screen..

  • 07.08.2004 8:00 PM PDT
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oh


My story

  • 07.08.2004 8:25 PM PDT
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I've began writing my own Halo story, I'm on part 3 at the moment. Here's parts 1 and 2:
Rescue of a Special Cargo (Part 1)
Rescue of a Special Cargo (Part 2)

Please tell me your opinions on this story so far.

  • 07.09.2004 2:48 AM PDT

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Not bad guys, I am still trying to figure out exactly what(or who) the cargo is, but don't tell me.

And Kreppins reminds me of my grandfather.

  • 07.09.2004 7:43 AM PDT
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Wow, your grandad kicks ass!

  • 07.09.2004 9:26 AM PDT

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I have the utmost respect for him.
He is Navy through and through, but not the image that many people get nowadays, He's SCARY if he's mad, and he works as Security at NAS Jax now.. He said he likes it cuz he can tell the Admirals what to do!!!

He messed me up in school a bit when I was little though, he told me that 7 goes into 28 , 13 times, then he proved it.

. . 13
. 7|28
. - 7
. 21
It works a lot better if someone is explaining it to you. Does 7 go into 2, no seven go into 8 yes, 1 time, bring it down and subtract, 7 into 2 no, 7 into 1, no. 7 into 21 yes 3 times.

It's done in unit form, and you add the units to get the "true" answer. so 13 = 1+3 = 4

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  • 07.09.2004 9:44 AM PDT
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Think its time to write the remainder of the my story (Rescue of a Special Cargo). If you haven't read parts 1 and 2, links in my signiture will take you there. I'll reply again soon with part 3 (and maybe 4, which will probably conclude the story. If not part 5 definately will).

  • 07.10.2004 4:12 AM PDT

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It's well written Spartan, but it hangs oddly at the end. Still, a good read, very action packed.

  • 07.10.2004 2:21 PM PDT
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The Story.....IS FINISHED!

Here's the link to each part of the saga (Rescue of a Special Cargo):
Part 1
Part 2
Part 3
Part 4
The Final Chapter

Enjoy, feel free to rate it on Literature review part of Ikari Tenshi or private message me on what you think.

  • 07.11.2004 10:28 AM PDT
Subject: A new story...

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Tale of the Grunt (part 1)

I wanted to try it again, this time I have a bit more confidence I think. Part one is subtitled : Student

Happy Reading!

  • 07.13.2004 7:03 PM PDT
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Good story, but I didnt quite get the ending, where did Orapa go?

  • 07.13.2004 7:42 PM PDT

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