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TL;DR
Just kidding, I think its very well written, but unfortunately I'm not a fan of modern poetry. Just my opinion. I liked the first chapter and a bit that I read though, was very well written (yes, I said it twice, wanna fight about it?).
I think you're clever =]
[Edited on 11.15.2008 3:12 PM PST]