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Now that was stunning. Truly extravagant. Keep it up you might get somewhere with writing like that.

  • 11.14.2008 5:16 PM PDT

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Why thank you. BTW, it's 27 chapters long, so there's plenty more of it. Enjoy.

  • 11.14.2008 5:35 PM PDT
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Man im done with Chapter 3 now im savin the first link so I can finish It up later. Very very good.

  • 11.14.2008 5:48 PM PDT

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Thanks. :)

I always appreciate feedback.

Glad you like it so far.

  • 11.14.2008 6:09 PM PDT
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Read the first two chapters, that is a great fan-fic, I saved the link so I can finish, but that is a lot to read all at once. Great job!

  • 11.14.2008 6:20 PM PDT
Subject: A Fanfic Epic

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Hello again,

I wish to share a fanfiction of mine with you. I began this story in late February of 2007 and completed it roughly four months later. It's been very well-received where it was posted, and I've recently begun an exciting push towards a trilogy.

I hope you enjoy. Feedback of any kind is welcomed. Link below.

Alone

[Edited on 11.14.2008 5:05 PM PST]

  • 11.14.2008 5:04 PM PDT

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Cool! Thanks!

Yeah, it's probably best to pace it out. It's over 70,000 words.

Thanks for the reviews, you two. Keep them coming if you don't mind.

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Shishka: What the hell? It wasn't 1994 when I woke up this morning... Shouldn't you be watching recorded episodes of Yo! MTV Raps?

Definitely do a Trilogy, just started onto Chapter 5, it's really good.

  • 11.15.2008 9:56 AM PDT
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TL;DR

Just kidding, I think its very well written, but unfortunately I'm not a fan of modern poetry. Just my opinion. I liked the first chapter and a bit that I read though, was very well written (yes, I said it twice, wanna fight about it?).

I think you're clever =]

[Edited on 11.15.2008 3:12 PM PST]

  • 11.15.2008 2:40 PM PDT

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Well, thanks much. Glad you like it so far.

I'm working on the second part of a trilogy for this story. It's kind of in limbo right now though, so I've got other stories I'm writing. They are all there on that site under my profile "Electromotive Force".

BTW, what does TLDR stand for?

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Shishka: What the hell? It wasn't 1994 when I woke up this morning... Shouldn't you be watching recorded episodes of Yo! MTV Raps?

Just finished chapter 20, this is really an amazing story!

  • 11.17.2008 1:42 PM PDT

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Hey, thanks. And I saw the review you left...thank you!

I have to agree that the story needs a lot of cleaning up, from little spelling mistakes to fixing my use of present-tense wording. I think I've corrected about 75% of all the chapters, and I plan to go back and fix the uncorrected ones soon.

But I'm really glad you liked it, and thanks again for the awesome review you left on that hosting site.

If you're interested, check out my other works. The main one I'm working now is called Underworld. It's a lot cleaner than Alone because I've really taken my time with it.

Enjoy, and see you around.

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Shishka: What the hell? It wasn't 1994 when I woke up this morning... Shouldn't you be watching recorded episodes of Yo! MTV Raps?

Hey, no problem about the review, and if you can remember try to PM me when part two of Alone comes out, that was a really good story but there were a couple loose ends that left me wondering. Well, I'll go check out your other works :-)

Edit: Oh wait a minute, is Alone-The Straight Path part 2?

[Edited on 11.17.2008 7:17 PM PST]

  • 11.17.2008 7:14 PM PDT

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Yeah, TSP is part two, still under construction. I don't think I'll resume the sequel until I finish Underworld, which shouldn't be too much longer.

  • 11.17.2008 8:46 PM PDT

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Hey, just wanted to give an update on this:

Underworld is nearing completion, which means that Alone: The Straight Path will resume progress. And on that note, I'm creating another story, which should be quite an interesting piece in the grand, HALO-verse scheme of things. I'll be calling it Acquiescence. It should be good. Trust me.

So, I'm guessing another two chapters until Underworld is done.

Take care, and Happy New Year!

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