Posted by: Manbearpig0
Brilliant work. Fantastic work. INCREDIBLE work for a young lad. I have enjoyed this story so far as much as any of the official Halo novels. But there is just one thing that ruins it. One thing that has the potential to utterly destroy everything you hope to achieve... Doctor f**king annoying-b*tch Halsey! I HATE her!! She's always straightening her pissing skirt and drinking seemingly limitless styrofoam cups of coffee!! I hate her! I hate her!!!!! Honestly, she is without a doubt the most annoying character I have ever read about... I don't even know why. All I know is that she pisses me off to the core. I hope she gets killed.
Lol, seriously though. Despite the fact that I cannot stand the good Doctor, this is still one of the best stories i've ever read. And that includes actual money-making novels. You are definitley going somwhere with this. Keep it up!
You hate her because she drinks coffee and fixes her skirt? Your a tad nuts there, buddy.