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Subject: Halo 3 Epilogue Story (Introduction and Part One)

I have a feeling that the enemy are lurking in the tunnels.....

  • 01.20.2009 8:51 AM PDT

Posted by: Mero90
Um, Gauss is magnetically operated, not gas powered, like a MAC, and it also fires a slug, not a dart.

And to the oh so polite "Stig", I'm helping him out i could have been very rude. Dont jump to conclusions.

Oh sorry dude my b i thought you were being a prick lol

  • 01.20.2009 11:25 AM PDT
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Vive la canadienne!

Np, all is forgiven, and in relation to the story, do a quick search on halopedia/wikipedia, or on google and youll find a simple, or complex explanation of how they work

  • 01.20.2009 12:09 PM PDT
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One day... I am gonna grow wings... A chemical reaction... Hysterical and useless... hystecial and let down and hanging around... crushed like a bug in the ground.

I really liked that part.

You Kinda Captured the Characters Really Well From Eric Nylunds Novel's

Although MC wouldnt do that to a General lol. (Yes I Can See He's Angry About Cortana)

I like the way you captured Fred as a Tough but Friendly Guy. (Dom From GOW)
I also like the way you did Kelly as a Uneasy Woman that had a personality that was kinda "Off" for a Spartan.

Lol I still dont understand why John grabbed Moore by the Neck though.

Oh and what happned to Tom and Lucy

  • 01.20.2009 12:40 PM PDT

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" The Grunt " - Death Served on A Screaming Platter!
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Justin Bieber sounds like two high-pitched walruses engaging in sex.

cool gun! this should be published into a real book! Great job, for the 19th time :D


EDIT: yeah guy above me is right. At the end, Kurt threw Tom and Lucy through the hole to save themselves. What had happened to them?

[Edited on 01.20.2009 1:53 PM PST]

  • 01.20.2009 1:52 PM PDT
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I love the complainers that complain about the complainers complaining.

Frickin sweet! I thought all the Brutes were dead or left Earth. Please hurry for Part 20 before I piss my pants!

  • 01.20.2009 7:32 PM PDT
Subject: Halo 3 Epilogue Story (Part Nineteen Now In) see page 33

very entertaining, great job

  • 01.21.2009 3:56 PM PDT
Subject: Halo 3 Epilogue Story (Introduction and Part One)

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Posted by: Matt Eddy
dont forget about team gladius the spartan IIIs i the stasis pods

He's right...

  • 01.21.2009 5:28 PM PDT

-eddy!
huh! What? It was the other guy, honest! ;)
'it was a sniper!' looks down at my sniper
uhh yeah? hes got one too. XD

Posted by: Dexomega
Posted by: Matt Eddy
dont forget about team gladius the spartan IIIs i the stasis pods

He's right...


hes right sorry couldnt resist lol
oh and i think there are some technicians in the stasis pods too, and a spartan III from a diferent squad, the one with the 'dead' flag on him

[Edited on 01.21.2009 11:34 PM PST]

  • 01.21.2009 11:33 PM PDT
Subject: Halo 3 Epilogue Story (Part Three)
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GREAT STORY KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK

  • 01.22.2009 12:28 AM PDT

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He said the weapon was gas loaded, not gas fired.
This just means insteadof being loaded by a spining barrel thing like the gauss cannon, pressurised gas pushes the next round into the barrel.
The dart also discard a cover after it leaves the gun, like the sniper bullet, which would be made of a ferrous metal, and so be pushed along by the magnets.
Clear?

  • 01.22.2009 11:49 AM PDT

Thanks for that tibbit of information. *Goes off to play 3 ball*

  • 01.22.2009 11:55 AM PDT
Subject: Halo 3 Epilogue Story (Introduction and Part One)

Posted by: Dropship dude
No, acnboy. Spartain Ken 15 is a lesser being. Much like the bacteria that lives in your shi­t.
Posted by: mike120593
My shi­t bacteria takes offense to that comparison.

Don't make me lel. You won't like me when I lel.

Nice work. As always.

  • 01.22.2009 9:49 PM PDT

*Comes back from 3 ball, dissapointed by the lag*

I think we should all stop arguing about the gun, it's his story, and he can write it how he wants. I really liked the part where he picked up the General. If only he did that in the games........

  • 01.22.2009 10:29 PM PDT
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Good job Max! I'm looking forward to part 20!

  • 01.23.2009 4:00 PM PDT

Posted by: Dropship dude
No, acnboy. Spartain Ken 15 is a lesser being. Much like the bacteria that lives in your shi­t.
Posted by: mike120593
My shi­t bacteria takes offense to that comparison.

Don't make me lel. You won't like me when I lel.

C'mon Max! Give us a time!


Oh and I'm sure the readers want some extremely violent descriptions of what the Gauss guns do to the Brutes. And where is that epic space battle you promised?

NOTE: I noticed you spelled Court martial wrong, Sorry, but some people will pick up on these things.

[Edited on 01.23.2009 7:19 PM PST]

  • 01.23.2009 7:18 PM PDT
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Posted by: random no337
C'mon Max! Give us a time!


Oh and I'm sure the readers want some extremely violent descriptions of what the Gauss guns do to the Brutes. And where is that epic space battle you promised?

NOTE: I noticed you spelled Court martial wrong, Sorry, but some people will pick up on these things.


ok, how about this,


chief raised the gauss rifle to the brute, and fired a white hot, titanim slug at the brute, it hit the brute right across the chest, ripping him in half, both sides spinning threw the air as purple blood spatterd across the cave.

  • 01.23.2009 9:52 PM PDT

-eddy!
huh! What? It was the other guy, honest! ;)
'it was a sniper!' looks down at my sniper
uhh yeah? hes got one too. XD

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Posted by: random no337
C'mon Max! Give us a time!


Oh and I'm sure the readers want some extremely violent descriptions of what the Gauss guns do to the Brutes. And where is that epic space battle you promised?

NOTE: I noticed you spelled Court martial wrong, Sorry, but some people will pick up on these things.



ok, how about this,


chief raised the gauss rifle to the brute, and fired a white hot, titanim slug at the brute, it hit the brute right across the chest, ripping him in half, both sides spinning threw the air as purple blood spatterd across the cave.


its red i think, grunts bleed blue, elites purple, hunters orange, and the brutes red

[Edited on 01.24.2009 9:38 AM PST]

  • 01.24.2009 9:37 AM PDT

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rofl.

here.

The guass rifle fired a tantalizing shot, ripping through the air, the brute could only stare in horror as the blue beam came towards his face, his angry face turned to suprise as his head was ripped tendon by tendon from his neck. he gave a final roar as his head went flying through the air, and his dead body slumped to the ground. his stump neck still spewing hot, sticky, oozing blood, the MC kicked his body over the edge of the abyss. "A fitting grave" John thought.
As a last horrah, since this would be the last brute he would fight, he removed his helmet and spat after its body.

Edit:~ XD

[Edited on 01.24.2009 9:46 AM PST]

  • 01.24.2009 9:45 AM PDT

Awesome!

  • 01.24.2009 4:47 PM PDT

Posted by: Dropship dude
No, acnboy. Spartain Ken 15 is a lesser being. Much like the bacteria that lives in your shi­t.
Posted by: mike120593
My shi­t bacteria takes offense to that comparison.

Don't make me lel. You won't like me when I lel.

Posted by: frogspartain
Posted by: random no337
C'mon Max! Give us a time!


Oh and I'm sure the readers want some extremely violent descriptions of what the Gauss guns do to the Brutes. And where is that epic space battle you promised?

NOTE: I noticed you spelled Court martial wrong, Sorry, but some people will pick up on these things.


ok, how about this,


chief raised the gauss rifle to the brute, and fired a white hot, titanim slug at the brute, it hit the brute right across the chest, ripping him in half, both sides spinning threw the air as purple blood spatterd across the cave.
HA! GREAT! Are you there Max? We want this!

  • 01.24.2009 8:44 PM PDT

Posted by: Dropship dude
No, acnboy. Spartain Ken 15 is a lesser being. Much like the bacteria that lives in your shi­t.
Posted by: mike120593
My shi­t bacteria takes offense to that comparison.

Don't make me lel. You won't like me when I lel.

Posted by: MasterofPenguin
rofl.

here.

The guass rifle fired a tantalizing shot, ripping through the air, the brute could only stare in horror as the blue beam came towards his face, his angry face turned to suprise as his head was ripped tendon by tendon from his neck. he gave a final roar as his head went flying through the air, and his dead body slumped to the ground. his stump neck still spewing hot, sticky, oozing blood, the MC kicked his body over the edge of the abyss. "A fitting grave" John thought.
As a last horrah, since this would be the last brute he would fight, he removed his helmet and spat after its body.

Edit:~ XD
HAHA! Yay for extreme violence!

  • 01.24.2009 8:45 PM PDT
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One day... I am gonna grow wings... A chemical reaction... Hysterical and useless... hystecial and let down and hanging around... crushed like a bug in the ground.

Is Max Still Active On BNet

  • 01.25.2009 6:05 PM PDT
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One day... I am gonna grow wings... A chemical reaction... Hysterical and useless... hystecial and let down and hanging around... crushed like a bug in the ground.

Fred pulled out his combat knife and did a full ark with it, slitting two brutes necks. He then fired his gauss rifle staraight through anothers chest sending organs flying into Kellys faceplate.

  • 01.25.2009 6:57 PM PDT
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Very nice. You do a good job at keeping the story mildly suspenseful. I just wish that there was a way for everything to put together so we didn't have to flip through the pages.

5/5

  • 01.25.2009 7:18 PM PDT