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Subject: Halo 3 Epilogue Story (Introduction and Part One)
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Wow...i used to follow this but it disapeared for a while. Can someone sup up part 5 - end in a paragraph?

  • 01.30.2009 6:19 AM PDT

Part five?? Dude just go read it, its SO worth the time.

  • 01.30.2009 2:20 PM PDT

This is my Battle Rifle there are many like it, but this one is mine.

Posted by: beta 276 kills
Wow...i used to follow this but it disapeared for a while. Can someone sup up part 5 - end in a paragraph?


some stuff happens, then mc shoots something, then some other stuff happens, brutes die, and then there's some talking. You dont need to read because thats what happens so just post every once in a while and ill update u again...... : )

  • 01.30.2009 10:24 PM PDT

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Wow...i used to follow this but it disapeared for a while. Can someone sup up part 5 - end in a paragraph?

Click

  • 01.31.2009 1:05 PM PDT

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Justin Bieber sounds like two high-pitched walruses engaging in sex.

this is so epic, i need to eat popcorn with it...




*munch munch*

  • 01.31.2009 7:27 PM PDT

I think Bungie needs to consider hiring Max to write the story-line for the next Master Chief game. All of this is well fleshed out, it could pass as a Bungie game easily in my opinion.

  • 02.01.2009 12:52 AM PDT

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Posted by: Dr indiana
I think Bungie needs to consider hiring Max to write the story-line for the next Master Chief game. All of this is well fleshed out, it could pass as a Bungie game easily in my opinion.

Not so much a game... but it is a great read.

  • 02.01.2009 11:17 AM PDT

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Posted by: Dr indiana
I think Bungie needs to consider hiring Max to write the story-line for the next Master Chief game. All of this is well fleshed out, it could pass as a Bungie game easily in my opinion.

Not so much a game... but it is a great read.


Definitely thorough enough to make into a book though

  • 02.01.2009 12:07 PM PDT

I'm back.

  • 02.01.2009 3:17 PM PDT

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Posted by: MaxRealflugel
I'm back.

Awesome!

  • 02.01.2009 6:23 PM PDT

Part Twenty was great, keep up the great work.

  • 02.02.2009 12:36 AM PDT

This is my Battle Rifle there are many like it, but this one is mine.

Posted by: MaxRealflugel
I'm dying to get some sort of response from someone that works for Bungie. What do Bungie think of this story?
Do they like it? Is it a load of rubbish? Is it way off track? does it adhere to Halo canon?
It would just be nice to know what the Bungie family thinks of this fanfic, and what they think of other fanfics.


Please...someone...anyone from Bungie. Answer my call.


someone must have saw it because it got pinned in the gallery forum. but as far as feedback from bungie goes, I hope you get some eventually

  • 02.02.2009 9:52 AM PDT

this is an incredible piece of writing. i never read fan fiction but for some reason i cant stop reading this. ive read all the novels and thats what i feel like im doing when i read your stuff. the part where lord hood saw MC and cortana on the screen actually gave me chills. i dont know how you accomplished that bc im pretty sure thats never happened to me when reading any of the books. excellent job. im looking forward to reading whatever else you have in store for us.

  • 02.03.2009 9:15 PM PDT

Cheers Nuns. Much appreciated.

  • 02.04.2009 2:33 AM PDT

Everyone, and I mean everyone, submit news about this to Bungie as soon as you read this message. In other words, do it, and do it now!

  • 02.04.2009 5:21 AM PDT
Subject: Halo 3 Epilogue Story (Part Twenty Now In) see page 35

one of the problems i have tho is that "The Enemy" is kind of a corny name for...the enemy. in the part where they encounter the Chief, they seem really awesome, and it doesn't sound like their name fits them. it doesnt sound like you put much thought into it. it doesnt fit among titles like Forerunner and Precursor. just a thought

  • 02.04.2009 8:31 AM PDT

They do have a proper name, but that will be revealed later on. Cortana misunderstood the data that she had access to.

Lost in translation you could say.

  • 02.04.2009 9:20 AM PDT

i had a feeling it was something along those lines. sorry i doubted you there.

  • 02.04.2009 12:25 PM PDT

By the power of truth, I, while living, have conquered the universe.

Well let's see if the Cheif and the other Spartans have it in themselves to grade 'em and smite 'em!

[Edited on 02.04.2009 1:54 PM PST]

  • 02.04.2009 1:11 PM PDT
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One day... I am gonna grow wings... A chemical reaction... Hysterical and useless... hystecial and let down and hanging around... crushed like a bug in the ground.

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Well let's see if the Cheif and the other Spartans have it in themselves to grad 'em and smite 'em!


wat

  • 02.04.2009 1:52 PM PDT

By the power of truth, I, while living, have conquered the universe.

The Enemy.

  • 02.04.2009 1:53 PM PDT

Cheers Hal0man

C'mon Bungie, do the decent thing and read my story.

  • 02.05.2009 2:52 AM PDT

Posted by: MaxRealflugel
Cheers Hal0man

C'mon Bungie, do the decent thing and read my story.


i love your story and i dont mean to bring you down but i dont think bungie would have an interest in this. i think if they have any plan to carry on the story after halo 3, they already have a set idea of what they want to happen to the chief and cortana and the other spartans. dont let that discourage you from writing. its clear that a lot of people on hear enjoy this story, and hey, maybe im wrong, maybe bungie is looking for a writer. and in that case i think you'd be in luck. maybe not for the continuation of the halo trilogy but who knows.

  • 02.05.2009 5:08 AM PDT

I submitted this thread as news yesterday, but to no avail. Sorry.

  • 02.05.2009 5:13 AM PDT