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Subject: Halo 3 Epilogue Story (Introduction and Part One)
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awesome, bring on part four!

  • 04.30.2008 3:32 AM PDT

Patience , patience...it'll come

Please make this a stickie...

  • 04.30.2008 7:37 AM PDT

Where's my -blam!- cheeseburger!?

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That is a fair point. P'raps she inherited some part of GM... God knows how many points you could make for it... And also... WRITE FASTER! :D I'm addicted to this story now! I hope your happy!?

[Edited on 04.30.2008 8:59 PM PDT]

  • 04.30.2008 8:58 PM PDT

I'm glad you like it Kristov and that many others do as well. I started writing this story as a means to quench my thirst for answers which, I'm afraid, Halo 3 left a lot of unanswered.
Bungie must know that many of us do want to see the chief reunited with the rest of the Spartans and Dr. Hasley. In addition to the long list of questions concerning the Forerunners.

  • 05.02.2008 12:22 AM PDT

Where's my -blam!- cheeseburger!?

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Damn straight! Bloody good way to show your theories aswell.

  • 05.02.2008 2:12 AM PDT
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wow, thats really interesting and well written, i am definately looking forawdto the bext 1>

  • 05.02.2008 2:37 AM PDT

One of the main things that i was hoping to see, besides MC & the other Spartans back together, was what the Forerunners looked like. I also wanted to know where their homeworld is, if it still exists and what their relation to Humanity is.

The Halo games have been amazing. They have great graphics, great gameplay and a compelling storyline, but there are too many unanswered questions Bungie. I know it's the end of the war, but where does that leave us now?

I'll probably edit the stories so they are all together to make it easier to read.

  • 05.02.2008 3:20 AM PDT
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That wa epic, cant wait for the next bit.

  • 05.02.2008 3:29 AM PDT
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F*&(ing EPIc! BUNGIE MAKE HALO $ ON THIS!

  • 05.02.2008 3:31 AM PDT

I'd just like the thread to be pinned.

  • 05.02.2008 3:39 AM PDT
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Oh it will be pinned! Going to 1 million posts .... maybe...

  • 05.02.2008 3:41 AM PDT

I'd better cross all of my fingers and toes then and hope for the best. 1 million here we come!

  • 05.02.2008 4:23 AM PDT

Posted by: Ushan
Because Muslims surgically implant organic bombs in their testicles, which in turn will be injected into women during sex, which will grow into BABY BOMBS!

Great story keep writing. I also want to know more about the forerunners and Dr Halsey as i have read the books but i still want to know more.

  • 05.02.2008 4:52 AM PDT

Me too. if only Bungie would put us out of our misery and say if they are making another game with the chief in it.

  • 05.02.2008 4:56 AM PDT

Posted by: Ushan
Because Muslims surgically implant organic bombs in their testicles, which in turn will be injected into women during sex, which will grow into BABY BOMBS!

No offense or anything but i think the fact that the chief is in cryo stasis for a 314 years is a bit lame but other than that its a good story.

  • 05.02.2008 5:19 AM PDT

In what way? Too long, too short?

  • 05.02.2008 6:04 AM PDT
Subject: Halo 3 Epilogue Story (Part Three)

Best. Epilogue. Ever. I can't wait to read more! Keep up the good work.

  • 05.02.2008 6:13 AM PDT

Cheers!

I'm in the process of editing the story so it will be easier to read and will make more sense.

  • 05.02.2008 6:16 AM PDT
Subject: Halo 3 Epilogue Story (Introduction and Part One)

Just message me on live.

We demand more!

  • 05.02.2008 6:44 AM PDT
Subject: Halo 3 Epilogue Story (Part Three)

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I love it, send a PM to a ninja to see if oyu can get it pinned.(well, maybe not he might ban you, maybe ill ask him for you). only one thing, i don't want to ruin the story, ( if you already had it planned). The last time i read the halo books was a while, but when kelly and everyone goes into the shield world/portal, thing, i remember them bringing some people in "pods" were they dead? or just in cryo sleep? I couldn't have done bette myself. only thing is in part one there is a few times when cortana goes like

"bluagh bluagh bluagh..." she stated"

it should either be like "exclaimed" or something, or there is nothing wrong with not saying like,

"said the chief, yelled cortana, howled the grunt". you can just leave it out, as i was taught "your reader is intelligent, but ignorant. means that they are smart enough to figure out that if somebody goes, " your time is running out chief" it is definatly not sam.(who died.=(

just lopok at a book that is already published, and pay attention to tha and youll get a good feeling when to say "said cortona" and when to just say
"message"

otherwise great writing!thread saved!

love it, send it to bungie when your done.

  • 05.02.2008 6:46 AM PDT

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ohh wait i forgot

so the 314 years DOES sound childesh-ish. but only becasue of the way you said it when i came accros it, first thingi thought was, "somestupid child going 314 million billion zillion years!!". NOTE:i dont think you really are

so i dont know find a way to make it sound like, "his face fell like the[insert similie here], 314 years, he whispered to himsellf, kelly, Jhonson, even the arbitar, gone".

i dont know that was crud but hey i did say, "i couldnt do better".

but thats all, im sorry i have no clue HOW you should change that sentence, but you just kinda should, but that is all i can come up with except a little

"im not worthy" feeling.

but no seriously thats all

  • 05.02.2008 6:50 AM PDT

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so here it goes:

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naw i was joking,

bump

  • 05.02.2008 7:16 AM PDT

very good
very good
only one thing, at the leg-ending the planet's surface looks like the outside of a halo, not grass and desert. im sure you've got somthing up your sleave like they have landed on the otherside or somthing.
very very good though

  • 05.02.2008 7:27 AM PDT

I'm in the process of editing the thread with a bit more detail, so don't worry about the odd mistake. But what you must understand is that punctuation in the United States is done slightly different to that in the United Kingdom, the same goes for spelling as well.

color-US
colour-UK

center-US
centre-UK

The revised version will be inserted into the first page, although i may need to move it to the end if there are quite a lot of parts to the story.

  • 05.02.2008 7:32 AM PDT

In answer to Astrogenesis

If you look closely the surface actually seems to be covered in terrain found in a temperate climate, such as woodland and grass plains and lakes. In addition to this is the supposed Marathon symbol.

But thanks for your positive comments, they are all welcome.

  • 05.02.2008 7:36 AM PDT