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Subject: Halo 3 Epilogue Story (Part Three)
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Best thread ive seen on bungie.net in a while.
keep it goin and cant wait for part 4.
One more thing U SHOULD BECOME A WRITTER.
Can i go on ur freindslist?
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  • 05.02.2008 7:41 AM PDT

RedFangKnight-Check your messages

  • 05.02.2008 7:53 AM PDT
Subject: Halo 3 Epilogue Story (Introduction and Part One)
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Very nicely written man! So is this leading to a post apocolyptic Earth which the Covenant had again turned on. Or the discobery of an outerworld outpost in need of much needed help defending themselves from a now power hungry USNC faction which have begun utilizing Covenant type te4chnology.

  • 05.02.2008 7:56 AM PDT

You'll just have to wait and find out. But many things will happen.

  • 05.02.2008 7:59 AM PDT
Subject: Halo 3 Epilogue Story (Part Three)

How about, at the end of ghosts of onyx, when they go through the portal, they gop forward into time, but are still on a forruner-repaired onyx. Chief lands there, but cortana thinks it is nowhere near earth because the forunner used a lot of weird new tech, and it interferred with cortana's status report.

  • 05.02.2008 8:32 AM PDT

Onyx isn't an actual planet, it's a micro-Dyson sphere. The planet that's in this story is an actual planet, or is it?

  • 05.02.2008 8:48 AM PDT

Posted by: MaxRealflugel
Onyx isn't an actual planet, it's a micro-Dyson sphere. The planet that's in this story is an actual planet, or is it? DUN DUN DUUUUUUN!
u forgot the dun dun duuun! so i fixed : )

  • 05.02.2008 8:56 AM PDT

Answers are coming...

Will John and Cortana get back to Earth?

Is John the last surviving Spartan?

Will Doncaster Rovers beat Cheltenham tomorrow and be promoted into the Championship?

  • 05.02.2008 9:00 AM PDT

We need answers....

  • 05.02.2008 9:07 AM PDT
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This is so epic!

  • 05.02.2008 6:17 PM PDT

Oh
Em
Gee.

This is one of the best fanfics I have seen.
Like, evar.
Looks like a lot of work put into it, and I'll commend you for that.
And the storyline is epic too.
The only thing I can comment on negatively is the grammar, which isn't even that bad.
I mean, if you fixerized the grammarz, and wrote a lot more, I would buy it.
Good job, and I hope you continue to do more.

  • 05.02.2008 6:30 PM PDT
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Posted by: DK daze
Dude I don't care and my grammer is perfect.I used "Big", as you recall it to mak is specific."to not do...",is incorrect beause "do" is present tense/perfect(or future) when it was a past tense.

I want part four more than recon right now. CAN I HAZ PART FOURZZZZZZ?????

  • 05.02.2008 6:33 PM PDT

Posted by: Ushan
Because Muslims surgically implant organic bombs in their testicles, which in turn will be injected into women during sex, which will grow into BABY BOMBS!

My only issue is the 314 yrs in cryo stasis thing. Its too long and everyone would be dead, unless of course maybe the other spartans survived somehow in the micro dyson sphere(AKA Onyx)! DUN DUN DUUUN!!

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  • 05.02.2008 6:37 PM PDT
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Hey Tucker.

  • 05.02.2008 6:59 PM PDT
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314 years in Cryo is way too long for anyone the Chief knew is still alive. Unless the other Spartans were frozn in cryo as well....

  • 05.02.2008 7:00 PM PDT

My gun goes PewPewPew!

Absolutly beautiful story you have going here.

  • 05.02.2008 7:00 PM PDT

Posted by: Ushan
Because Muslims surgically implant organic bombs in their testicles, which in turn will be injected into women during sex, which will grow into BABY BOMBS!

Sup chris the story is epic

  • 05.02.2008 7:02 PM PDT
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Should be playing soon, my power cable been away for a nearly a week. (TO TUCKER) THIS STORY IS ABSOLUTELY AWESOmE I WANT PART 4 MORE THAN RECON! CAN I HAZ PART 4! (I'M NOT ON THE LIST NOW AM I????)

  • 05.02.2008 7:05 PM PDT

Posted by: Ushan
Because Muslims surgically implant organic bombs in their testicles, which in turn will be injected into women during sex, which will grow into BABY BOMBS!

Posted by: CRIS N CHIPS
314 years in Cryo is way too long for anyone the Chief knew is still alive. Unless the other Spartans were frozn in cryo as well....


yeah this was my only problem with the story too.

  • 05.02.2008 7:06 PM PDT

Amazing, story superbly written. That was just what I needed.

*Super Saves Thread

  • 05.02.2008 8:13 PM PDT
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You should become an author.

SUPER SAVED THREAD
PIN THIS THREAD BUNGIE!

  • 05.02.2008 8:15 PM PDT
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The Forum needs more threads like this. Worthwhile stuff to read that is interesting and actually relevant.

  • 05.02.2008 8:16 PM PDT
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Posted by: Sp4rt4n119
Thank you sir, that was an epic rendition of this topic.


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and how!

>/Save Thread
>/Working...
>/Operation Complete
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>/Sudden Program Halt\Suspected Transmission Error
>/Ending Program

  • 05.02.2008 8:50 PM PDT

Thanks everyone, i really do appreciate the comments both good and bad as long as the bad is constructive.

  • 05.03.2008 3:07 AM PDT
Subject: Halo 3 Epilogue Story (Introduction and Part One)

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Very nice and well written

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  • 05.03.2008 3:39 AM PDT