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Whens the next part coming out? So glad I found this. I have been reading a different one by Ghost45. But yours is a lot more thought out. I think you should of put more detail into the forunner. Right now I see them as like a different colored Covenent. So yea what do they actually look like. In your view I mean. Realistically in the actualy Story line they are of course a mystery.

I love the part when Cortana is figuring out everything that happened, when she is scanning the library that is. And how you explained the whole "The Enemy" thing. Really nice keep doing what your doing here Max.

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  • 06.23.2008 5:29 AM PDT

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Posted by: DemonicToastx7x
Dude seriously you have very good potential. I believe you just wrote out Halo 4. I know there is not going to be one. Its almost as if thats what actually happened. I am seriously believing this is what happens, if Bungie does not fill us in that is.

Thats how good this is.

10/10

Only one thing I hope you do not take in offense, but I sort of skip the parts where you talk about the past, just not as interesting. I will read it if anything important happens in those parts. Only read a little bit of those parts. So sorry.

Thankyou very much for writing this.


i don't read those parts either

  • 06.23.2008 5:31 AM PDT
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I though I was the only one. Yea I mean I do not even really know about any of the other Spartans. I just read it glad I did too. Cannot wait till some real action happens. Love the part when all of the Sentinels are coming at Chief. And then their like old so their easy to kill, unlike the shield ones. I hate them >.<

This deserves to get stickied. Why a Bungie Employee has no even posted in here shocks me.

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  • 06.23.2008 5:34 AM PDT

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this would be awesome if it became bungies next project,"the forunners".

[Edited on 06.23.2008 5:36 AM PDT]

  • 06.23.2008 5:36 AM PDT

Or maybe it could be called "The Enemy", part 8 is currently being written so it should be out in the next few days. I'll try and get it out before i go on holiday/Vacation.

  • 06.23.2008 5:48 AM PDT

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Posted by: MaxRealflugel
Or maybe it could be called "The Enemy", part 8 is currently being written so it should be out in the next few days. I'll try and get it out before i go on holiday/Vacation.


ya, the enemy, of the forunners or sheild world

  • 06.23.2008 5:57 AM PDT

Monkey see, Monkey shoot.

Terry Pratchet - The Best.

Ditto, this is epic on a huge scale. This does feel like the new story for the next halo trilogy, are you sure you arn't hacking Bungie's scriptrwriting files, and again why does it say the time is 2888 even though 24 days have passed.

  • 06.23.2008 6:02 AM PDT

Ahh i forgot about that, glad you pointed it out I'll amend the thread when i can.

Cheers!

And no I'm not a Hacker.

  • 06.23.2008 6:07 AM PDT

There are those who said this day would never come, what have they to say now? --Truth

This story is just epic, it feels like I'm reading one of the books, its that well written

  • 06.23.2008 10:34 AM PDT

There are those who said this day would never come, what have they to say now? --Truth

This story is just epic, it feels like I'm reading one of the books, its that well written

  • 06.23.2008 10:35 AM PDT

It must be good, you said it twice.

  • 06.24.2008 2:17 AM PDT
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Posted by: MaxRealflugel
It must be good, you said it twice.
Its damn good when can we see part 8?

  • 06.24.2008 2:23 AM PDT

wheres part 8

  • 06.24.2008 9:12 AM PDT
Subject: Halo 3 Epilogue Story (Part Seven) see page 12

-eddy!
huh! What? It was the other guy, honest! ;)
'it was a sniper!' looks down at my sniper
uhh yeah? hes got one too. XD

Just linked it to my group links, got to show this to people,
yes i know its a small group most people left

  • 06.24.2008 1:31 PM PDT
Subject: Halo 3 Epilogue Story (Introduction and Part One)

Posted by: The Truth 1521
This story is just epic, it feels like I'm reading one of the books, its that well written
it feels like im watching a movie...



...with subtitles.

  • 06.27.2008 11:03 AM PDT
Subject: Halo 3 Epilogue Story (Part Seven) see page 12
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hey you should put them all together on like a webpage or something man

  • 06.28.2008 12:14 PM PDT
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So long, Halo. Megszakad a szívem

part 8 please

  • 06.30.2008 10:18 AM PDT
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indeed part 8.

still i think i have an ideal of where this story is going...
i wont tell incase its what the author is really planning on writing.

  • 06.30.2008 1:53 PM PDT
Subject: Halo 3 Epilogue Story (Introduction and Part One)

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  • 06.30.2008 5:53 PM PDT
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Hello just an idea for you. Can you like do something special for bungie day? With your story that is. You know like make the next part the comes out on the 7th very long and awesome! Do not get me wrong its all awesome but we need more >.<

  • 06.30.2008 11:57 PM PDT

Sorry everyone but I'm on holiday for the next two weeks, but i have the laptop with me so I'll try my best to write the next part and put it up.

  • 07.01.2008 2:14 PM PDT

-eddy!
huh! What? It was the other guy, honest! ;)
'it was a sniper!' looks down at my sniper
uhh yeah? hes got one too. XD

Please hurry, i want to read part eight

  • 07.02.2008 1:48 AM PDT

Very great story, I love reading this. One thing though: The Forerunners did not create the Covenant. The Covenant are not reclaimers. Only humans. In fact, we're not quite sure if the Forerunners created us!

  • 07.03.2008 6:11 PM PDT

Posted by: JimboMonkey1234
Very great story, I love reading this. One thing though: The Forerunners did not create the Covenant. The Covenant are not reclaimers. Only humans. In fact, we're not quite sure if the Forerunners created us!


This a fan-fic

  • 07.05.2008 7:06 PM PDT

This is the best fan-fic i have ever read. Keep up the exellent work man. can't wait for part 8!!!!

  • 07.05.2008 8:16 PM PDT