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Subject: Halo 3 Epilogue Story (Part Eleven) see page 19

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" The Grunt " - Death Served on A Screaming Platter!
You lack the majestic curves of a ripe banana! YOU SIR ARE A PINEAPPLE
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Justin Bieber sounds like two high-pitched walruses engaging in sex.

i think that you (max) should write either one or a half more episodes with the arbiter to conclude the arbiter thing, then move back to the spartans

  • 09.20.2008 6:17 PM PDT
Subject: Halo 3 Epilogue Story (Introduction and Part One)

Pass the controller bro

I think that was really exciting the fact that chief has been in stasis for 314 years. I mean lame? how?

  • 09.21.2008 6:23 AM PDT

“If I had more skill in what I'm attempting, I wouldn't need so much courage”

MaxRealflugel, if it were not for money and me not being a publisher, i would publish this for you as an off shoot of the HALO series. By far, this is one of the most intriguing and exciting fanfics out there. You and YOU alone are keeping the HALO series alive for us until the release of the next chapter in the HALO series.

As for the rest of the boneheads that are getting you down with questions and the occasional nit-picking, I have just one thing to say about that... JEALOUSLY. They are jealous at the fact that they are not the ones taking credit for the immagination and foresight that it takes to create such an interesting work of art.

May your mind never rest and carpal tunnel syndrome not set in.

KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!!!

Simply great.

  • 09.21.2008 7:54 AM PDT

Max you amaze me once again. I see big checks for you in the future.

  • 09.21.2008 3:19 PM PDT

I laugh at your pitifall attempts to defeat me!

I'm just amazed people can find words to say. I'm speechless. Just....speechless.
After reading a hell of a lot of it in one go, all I can say (again) is that I'm truly inspired. Anything else I do say will be an understatement.

I look forward to your next part.

  • 09.21.2008 7:57 PM PDT

Posted by: Dropship dude
No, acnboy. Spartain Ken 15 is a lesser being. Much like the bacteria that lives in your shi­t.
Posted by: mike120593
My shi­t bacteria takes offense to that comparison.

Don't make me lel. You won't like me when I lel.

Posted by: Kristov
Like Matthew Reilly?
love his books, the jack west ones (seven ancient wonders, six sacred stones) are the best

  • 09.21.2008 10:11 PM PDT

Thanks again.

  • 09.22.2008 4:54 AM PDT
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Part 13, we want part 13!

  • 09.22.2008 4:55 AM PDT
Subject: Halo 3 Epilogue Story (Part Three)

If you would like to hear the list of the ways technologies have failed to make life easier, press 3

Bungie gave us an ending, but nothing close to a conclusion......

  • 09.22.2008 5:48 AM PDT
Subject: Halo 3 Epilogue Story (Introduction and Part One)

Vijay is a common given name for males in India. The word Vijay is derived from Vijaya, meaning "victorious". It is another name for Arjuna, the hero of the great Hindu epic, the Mahabharata.
The word Vijay is similar in meaning to Jai, although there is a small difference. Vijay indicates being victorious while trying to conquer, Jai indicates victorious while trying to defend.

Awesome!! Although you do write more than I write in a week!

  • 09.22.2008 5:49 AM PDT

If you would like to hear the list of the ways technologies have failed to make life easier, press 3

i'm still trying to pick up my jaw from the ground

this story is absolutely beautiful.

  • 09.22.2008 6:06 AM PDT

If you would like to hear the list of the ways technologies have failed to make life easier, press 3

why aren't you a millionaire?

screw JK Rowling,

we've got MAX!!!!

  • 09.22.2008 6:44 AM PDT
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WOW!

  • 09.22.2008 3:28 PM PDT
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blah when's part 13 comin D:!

  • 09.22.2008 4:08 PM PDT
Subject: Halo 3 Epilogue Story (Part Eleven) see page 19

Posted by: MaxRealflugel
Don't worry about the MC and Dr Halsey they'll be along soon. The part with the Covenant and the Elites is essential to the story. But It'll all come together.


fine you are the genious behind it im just a fan who thinks you should get recon for it

  • 09.22.2008 4:10 PM PDT

I'm a specialist. One of the best. Your either with me, or against me. You better choose fast, I'm wondering how your emblem would look on the side of my rifle.

this is the freaking -blam!-! i love this! i want you to join my clan just becuase your awesome

(saves thread)

  • 09.22.2008 4:27 PM PDT

1600/1750 gamerscore in Halo 3
My YouTube Channel

Awesome

  • 09.22.2008 4:28 PM PDT

Thanks once again everyone. You can all relax now; I'm half way through Part 13.

  • 09.24.2008 1:12 AM PDT

I laugh at your pitifall attempts to defeat me!

When I saw your name I thought it was the next part, lol.

I've actually begun reading the books now, so I shall better understand your story. I'll go through it all again to catch all the references and better immerse myself. That, and because it's just such a pleasure to read.

  • 09.24.2008 6:24 PM PDT

Part 13


Inside the Loyalist cruiser of Malicious Intent.

Grek a prominent and distinguished Ultra ranked Captain, was one of many Jiralhanae that had achieved their position through the deposition of others. Sometimes these “Others” were similarly ranked soldiers with an equal share of determination and ambition, but most of the time it was an unwitting warrior of senior rank with little knowledge of their impending retirement from command.
Some other races in the Covenant had deemed their way of promotion something more akin to treachery or deception: the Sangheili in particular. But Grek knew his own position was far from an assured means of commanding those around him. Since the Great Schism no less than nine of his own bodyguard had personally challenged him. All of them were now floating somewhere deep inside covenant space; minus their own heads. It was not so much command. It was more like control.

Grek peered from the safety of his armoured bulk at the separatists at the far end of the corridor, who were now charging into the wall of shields on the second position. At the forefront of their advance was the unmistakable silhouette of the Arbiter. The very sight of the Sangheili warrior caused Grek’s matted fur on the back of his neck to stand on end. He felt like charging the insubordinate scum from where he stood, but another few volleys of carbine fire changed his now agitated mind.
Grek turned in foolish anger towards the nearest Mgelekgolo and ordered the armoured monster to target the second position. “Don’t stop firing until everything there is on fire!”
Several of his own bodyguard shot him a look of distaste before resuming their own chorus of fire on the second position.
The second Mgelekgolo also joined in on the carnage, targeting the broad band of shields and charging Sangheili.
The first giant bolt of green iridescent fire was slightly wide of its mark. Several of the Kig-yar turned around in shock and panic, realising that they had quickly become expendable. The Jiralhanae Captain of the group turned sharply towards Grek, a look of disbelief and anger on his face. He immediately began cursing through the thunderous fire around, oblivious of the situation or simply unconcerned.
The second round from the fuel rod cannon hit the barricade dead square in the centre of the line of squabbling Kig-yar, incinerating half of them and throwing the rest across the corridor.
Grek suddenly realised that he had made a serious tactical error by succumbing to his own impatience.

With the shield wall in disarray the Arbiter, Rtas and the rest of the boarding party swept into the despondent line of Jiralhanae. Several of the lower ranked minors were killed with their backs turned, looking at their own Captain Ultra in betrayed disbelief. The rest attempted to fight back before they were overwhelmed.
Rtas killed two minors and a wounded stalker whilst the Arbiter killed a further three minors and squared up against the captain.
The Jiralhanae captain was filled with rage; his recent betrayal by the commanding Ultra in addition to the boarding action had only infuriated him further. The Arbiter fired his plasma rifle at the captain, several of the shots penetrated the armour and the captain reeled and snorted in both pain and anger.
The Arbiter stepped back; sensing what was coming.
The captain swung his fist at the Arbiter but he was too slow; the Arbiter simply ducked beneath the captain’s sluggish attack. The captain kicked out at his Sangheili opponent, but he could only manage a glancing blow on the Arbiters thigh before he opened up once again with his plasma rifle. The captain stepped back again raising his arms for protection before roaring loudly at the Arbiter. Then he charged.
The Arbiter sidestepped the attack and waited till the captain had past before re-activating his energy sword, and striking the Jiralhanae in the back with a single thrust. The large lifeless body slumped to the floor with a heavy thud.

The Arbiter glanced around to see how the rest of the battle was going. All of the loyalist soldiers were dead, and lying about the floor in a variety of odd poses. Three of his fellow warriors had been slain by the enemy, but the Arbiter was more concerned by the glowing fuel rod cannons of the Mgelekgolo at the end of the corridor. One of them fired directly at the Arbiter, but he moved swiftly out of the way of the flaring bolt. The second one also fired, but this time at the mass of Sangheili among the barricades. Two of them were instantly vaporized, while another four were thrown back by the explosion.
The Arbiter along with the remainder of the boarding party dived behind the protective screen of weapon racks and plasma chargers, which fortunately for the Arbiter were designed to withstand a wide range of climates and atmospheres, along with resilience to direct weapons fire.
Attacking the third position would be a mistake; they would all be cut down before they even reached the enemy. The carbine equipped Sangheili had achieved a total of four kills, all of them the Ultra’s bodyguard. But even they were now pinned down by the thunderous cannon fire.
They were rapidly loosing the momentum of the attack and the upper hand, and that was something that the Arbiter had to change quickly.
Then the firing stopped.

The Arbiter peered over the barricade to see the Ultra shouting at the two Mgelekgolo, he had obviously not ordered them to do so. Instead they seemed to have taken matters into their own hands, or in this case their huge metal shields.
One of the stalkers decided to fire a single shot from his spiker at the Mgelekgolo nearest to him. The creature shrieked, but not from pain and raised itself up, as if accepting or issuing a challenge. The stalker took several steps back before charging towards the Mgelekgolo he had fired at. The large blue creature simply swatted the stalker aside like an annoying insect before firing on the rest of the group.
The Arbiter glanced at Rtas and pulled a pleasing grin with his multi-jawed mouth. Rtas replied the silent conversation with a simple nod.
“Warriors rise up and together we’ll sweep this foulness aside!” roared the Arbiter “Charge!”

The Arbiter and the rest of the Sangheili charged towards the final position in the corridor. The two Mgelekgolo were now wading into the group of Jiralhanae, swinging their huge shields as they did so. After a short sprint they reached the remainder of the enemy position and fought them hand to hand. The opposing Ultra, seeing the Arbiter within reach, charged forward, arms outstretched as if he was going to crush the Sangheili in his armour. But he never reached him. Instead he was killed with a single shot from a fuel rod cannon.
The Arbiter span round to see what the Mgelekgolo had fired at, but all he could see was the smouldering remains of the Ultra’s armour.

After the ship was taken the Arbiter approached the two Mgelekgolo. On seeing him approach they bowed as low as they could, and uttered three simple words. “We are sorry.”
“Apology accepted friends,” replied the Arbiter “Now is the time for peace, not war.”
The two walking tanks appeared to nod in unison and then took their rightful place at the main entrance to the bridge, which was littered with bodies.
“Today we have finally ended this conflict Rtas, but much is still to be done.”
“Agreed Arbiter.” Said Rtas
“Helm, take this ship home where it will be returned to its former glory as a covenant cruiser.” Ordered the Arbiter
Suddenly the collision alarm sounded, filling the bridge with a high pitched whine.
“Status!” demanded Rtas
“A vessel of unknown origin has just emerged from slip-space. Closing fast.” Informed Kelic
“On screen.” Said the Arbiter
The main view screen displayed a craft smaller than the cruiser itself, but the shape was unmistakably familiar. It was a Forerunner vessel.
“Hail them.” Ordered Rtas
“No need sir; they are hailing us.” Answered Kelic

To be continued…

  • 09.25.2008 6:10 AM PDT

This is my Battle Rifle there are many like it, but this one is mine.

the cheif?????!!!!!OMGZ

  • 09.25.2008 1:04 PM PDT

“If I had more skill in what I'm attempting, I wouldn't need so much courage”

max....may we have more? SOON?! pleeeasse.

Great job, keep it going.

  • 09.25.2008 1:58 PM PDT

Where's my -blam!- cheeseburger!?

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Awesome. Just awesome.

  • 09.25.2008 4:48 PM PDT
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So long, Halo. Megszakad a szívem

Max this seems to have died, When I revive it with this post, you will come back and give us OVER 9000!!! chapters.

  • 09.26.2008 2:11 PM PDT

I'm a specialist. One of the best. Your either with me, or against me. You better choose fast, I'm wondering how your emblem would look on the side of my rifle.

I LOVE MAX!! WILL YOU JOIN MY CLAN YOUR AWESOMENESS???

  • 09.26.2008 8:34 PM PDT