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  • 08.13.2008 6:10 PM PDT

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Very nice ending.

  • 08.13.2008 6:40 PM PDT

lol bred but yeah, it got slightly better at the end, but it wasn't bad at the beginning...

  • 08.13.2008 6:48 PM PDT
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you need to get a real book deal about sol murph

the end was amazing

  • 08.13.2008 6:48 PM PDT
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that was soooo goood.

  • 08.13.2008 7:49 PM PDT
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someone from bungie ought to give recon armor...

THE MOST EPIC STORY EVAR!!!!

  • 08.13.2008 8:27 PM PDT

You are the best Sergeant Murph!! You have written one of the best Elite/Halo 2 stories ever!!!! Well done on your story and I agree, your writing did get better at the end. I am looking foward to the sequals and will jion Fan fiction!!!

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  • 08.13.2008 9:21 PM PDT

Posted by: evilcam
That...probably means that Laserking has either an insanely accurate logical method of deriving people's reactions to things, or he possesses pre-cognition. Either way:LASERKING for Mods!

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  • 08.13.2008 9:34 PM PDT

You spelt my name wrong. =) Ah dont worry.

That was a great ending. Look forward to the sequel. thread saved so I can come back and read it again.

  • 08.13.2008 9:45 PM PDT
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wow sergeant murphy just wow. I read this whole thing from chapter one to finale part 3 and i am just in loss of words this is brilliant. Your mind has created one of the best short stories incorporating halo i've ever seen and i think im going to try and make some concept art for burns and anderson. I cannot wait for the sequel and just so you know your whole book was to me more exciting then half of Eric Nylunds "The Fall Of Reach" but dont get me wrong IT WAS AN AMAZING BOOK meaning yours was very very spectacular too!!!


Sergeant Murphy FTWWWWW times 69!

  • 08.14.2008 12:41 AM PDT
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I give my regards to you kind sir,

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Wow that was very very good. Although I did strangely enjoy the first couple of chapters more because they were less... cheesy. But great job anyway. I can't wait for the sequel!

PS Be sure to check out 'The Enemy of My Enemy' in the Fanficfactor forums. This a story that I have enjoyed just as much as 'Heretic or Hero?' So fanficfactor members be sure to take a look!

  • 08.14.2008 1:31 AM PDT
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hey sergeant murphy i drew a pic of what i pictured to be as sergeant anderson but i dont got a scanner so i cant upload it, btw it is just a pic of him standing not an action drawing and i gave him a smg... i also drew a grunt and beside it are a plasma pistol and a needler just for fun haha!

  • 08.14.2008 3:21 AM PDT

You see children, words are like bullets. They hurt like -blam!- and you might die.

That was great. I was looking on my friends recent posts and saw his most recent xomment of "FREAKIN AWESOME" or something to that effect. He doesn't give praise like that often so i thought i'd check it out. It was truly deserving of said praise and more, great job, i read the whole thing in one sitting. Now here i am at 3:30 in the morning. At least you gave me something more to dream about, a sequel.

Thanks Truly *thumbs up*

  • 08.14.2008 3:38 AM PDT
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agreed! it was a master piece
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That was great. I was looking on my friends recent posts and saw his most recent xomment of "FREAKIN AWESOME" or something to that effect. He doesn't give praise like that often so i thought i'd check it out. It was truly deserving of said praise and more, great job, i read the whole thing in one sitting. Now here i am at 3:30 in the morning. At least you gave me something more to dream about, a sequel.

Thanks Truly *thumbs up*

  • 08.14.2008 5:37 AM PDT

This is one of the best stories I have ever read! I can't wait till you write more stories! Keep up the good work!

  • 08.14.2008 8:56 AM PDT
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Yeah nice story and I have a name for the sequel it should be called Heretic or Hero The Fall of the Covenant or you can call it Heretic or Hero Till Battle meets Ends

  • 08.14.2008 10:28 AM PDT
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brilliant ending sarge! i loved this story!

  • 08.14.2008 10:41 AM PDT
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Great ending! Bravo!

  • 08.14.2008 11:38 AM PDT

YOU R AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • 08.14.2008 12:58 PM PDT
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Sorry for posting late, anyway, I really loved your story, all the characters you made in your story were great, and well made.

Just a random thought, I always viewed Anderson in your story as a Marine with same armor as the marines of Halo CE fighting along side the ODST's and the Marines of Halo 2.

  • 08.14.2008 6:54 PM PDT
Subject: Halo: Heretic or Hero?----------------- (Prolouge and chapter 1 &2

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In the first chapter the Elite sounds like a teenager full of angst, not a 8' 6" alien killing machine.

  • 08.16.2008 6:43 PM PDT
Subject: Halo: Heretic or Hero?----------------- (Finale, Part 1)
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EPIC ENDING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
By the way will the next story be in the halo 3 timeline?

  • 08.17.2008 5:08 PM PDT
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very good ending

  • 08.17.2008 5:10 PM PDT

Non Facete Nobis Calcitrare Vestrvm Perinævm!!!

Epic stuff man!! Keep up the good work!

  • 08.17.2008 8:36 PM PDT

Posted by: evilcam
That...probably means that Laserking has either an insanely accurate logical method of deriving people's reactions to things, or he possesses pre-cognition. Either way:LASERKING for Mods!

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Awwwww Yeah!!! Keep it up

  • 08.19.2008 2:08 PM PDT