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this story is pretty good yet unprobable but it is a good read, cant wait for chapter five

[Edited on 07.31.2008 9:58 PM PDT]

  • 07.31.2008 9:58 PM PDT

Halo: Heretic or Hero---An Elite's Story
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Chapter 4, Part 2



We're not that Sneaky Anyway.


"Welcome to the UNSC, Private Sol," said Anderson, clapping his hand on my back. He turned and strode away, accompanied by Burns, leaving me out in the open. I felt evryones eyes focused on me.

Just as he made his way into another side room, possibly his private quarters, a soldier, bearing a furious look on his face, approached me, bringing four others with him.

Even as he stood inches from my face, his scowl didn't budge.

"Maybe Sarge is fooled by you. Maybe he thinks your harmless. But in reality, you're a demon. You're a murderer."

"But..."

"Your race is the enemy, whether you think so or not. Just because you saved one of us does not mean we trust you. Your damned race killed my brother!" he yelled, and although he didn't mean or expect it, a tear dripped down his furious face. He wiped it away as quick as he could, still not losing the scowl.

I stood there, hoping he would leave, hoping for the worst to be over. It wasn't.

"You make one move against us, you fire one shot in our direction, I won't hesitate to kill you, no matter what Anderson thinks."

He gave out one more small tear, then shook his head and stormed away with the others.

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Kovalee paced back and forth through the Interrogation room. Surely Solonee would be here within the hour, along with the Humans, to try and rescue their fellow scumbags.

Two of the prisoners were killed when trying to fight off the guards and escape. The other four remained in their cells, tortured and weary. Soon they would be dead, along with the Heretic. For Kovalee, it was payback time.

He walked over to the cells, where the prisoners were being held.

"One of you will come with me. I have a job for you."

An entire Human alliance would soon be trapped within his grasp. His intent was to leave none alive.
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The room was at its loudest, everyone running back and forth, taking weapons of their choice. Anderson gathered about thirty marines, all huddled around him. I joined beside Burns.

"All right. The Covenant barricade is North of here. Hundreds of infantry guarding their territory. We'll get crushed if we try to go through it. The only other options is to break North-East to get around it. We'll have to be extra quiet, though."

"Not such a good idea, Sarge. Our group tried the same thing a few days ago, attempting to steal from their armory. They've placed enormous guns on the peaks. One shot and the Warthog was flipped over the mountain." said a man, leaning against a wall, completely outside of the group.

Anderson pondered this. For a moment, I thought he was going to inquire that we try to take that route, but he didn't. He said something much. much, worse.


"Men, new plan. We're gonna cut clean through the Covenant barricade," said Anderson, to my horror.

"Sir, last time we tried that we lost almost a quarter of our marines!" said Burns. I hoped that would cut though the Sergeant's idea. it didn't.

"Yeah but last time we didn't have a kick-ass Elite with us! Am I right marines?" Many eyes turned to me. Some groaned, others laughed.

Anderson shook his head, then yelled even louder than before " Am I right marines?"

"Sir yes sir!" many said in chorus. The group immediately split, while we all went to our respective Warthogs.

"Nervous, much?" asked Burns, as I climbed into the Warthog, a spare Carbine in my hand. He must have noticed me shaking in fear.

I didn't answer. Just shook. Believe it or not, I had fired maybe, ten shots in my life. I just wasn't the violent type. Hurting people was like hurting myself, in a way. I was once a peacful race. When I put on that red and gold battle armor, that all went away.

When we finally got going in the Warthog, Burns on the wheel, me in the passengers seat, Anderson beside us,we prepared our plans.

"I'm gonna take out those guns before anything. If it's placed on a peak, it should have a clear shot at you." said Anderson.

I looked up. What was I going to do? Hide behind rocks? No. This time I would fight. I would show them I wasn't afraid. Although, deep down, I was like a frightened young boy.
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He could sense that they were coming. The plan was going perfectly. He had sent one of the of the prisoners down to tell their leader about the fake guns, knowing that the man that shot him was ruthless, and wouldn't mind going through our barricade. Solonee would be an easy kill, now.

Kovalee felt the handle on his energy sword. With that weapon, he would clear the name for Elites everywhere.

It didn't suprise him when he heard "They're here! They're here!"

He drew his energy sword and ran to a window. In an upcoming Warthog, Solonee sat, a Carbine in hand. The leader wasn't driving, it was a younger man. Even better.
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I hopped out of the Warthog, not knowing what to do. Their were 'enemies' all around me, shooting furiously at the Humans, and every once in a while, at me.

"Snipers! Take them out!" yelled a marine, just before being felled by a purple beam. Sure enough, there were four jackals standing on top of the tower, picking off lazy marines. Within seconds, the battle was in full force.

"Sol, take them out! Quick!" yelled Burns, ducking behind the Warthog for cover.

Uneasily, I followed orders, aimed my Carbine right for the the Jackals head, and fired.

Down it went, rolling off the slant and down to the battlefield below.

I did the same with the other three. Every time I killed one, I ducked behind the Warthog so that the next didn't see me.

"Nice shots, man!" said Burns, getting up and firing an 'SMG' at an approaching Unggoy.

"The Heretic is mine! Do not let him get away!" sounded a loud, booming voice from inside the tower.

I didn't worry too much. I had my new allies to protect me from whoever that was. I continued firing my Carbine at grunts and Jackals. I didn't kill a Sangheili.

Under the armor, I knew that they were still a peaceful race. That they didn't want to be engaged in battle. I spared their lives, today.

Until it happened.

A figure stepped out of the building, energy sword in hand. His armor was shining silver. I knew who it was the second I made eye contact with him.

"Kovalee," I bellowed, watching him approach. Various people fired at him, but it was as if he didn't care. He just kept approaching me. For some odd reason, I didn't shoot.

"Remember me, Heretic? Remember how you abandoned me?" he said, gritting his teeth. He didn't waste much time. He charged at me, swinging wildly. I jumped to the left just in time. He swung again, this time at my neck. I dropped down, then pushed off my legs, rolling away and out of reach for his third attack.

"You coward! First you give our race a bad name, then you don't help in clearing it?" he snapped, unhappy with his first few misses.

"The prophet's death was not by my doing!" I yelled, attempting to clear my name.

"Liar!" he charged at me again, lunging at my legs. I jumped up and to the side, avoiding yet another attack.

"You are a liar and a coward. You don't deserve to serve the Covenant! You still think we are harmless, am I right? You are so wrong! We are a war species, and thats all we'll ever be!"

The words seemed to fly out of his mouth. That was all I could take. I felt that same rage I had felt on the Phantom, only fifty times worse. I finally stared him in the eyes. All the fighting had stopped, and everyone turned to us. I sprinted directly at Kovalee, then faked left an went right. He fell for it, swinging left.

Catching him off guard, I tackled him, knocking away the sword. He fell to the ground with all my weight on top of him. I threw punches so rapidly I couldn't even feel my hands anymore. Every punch gave me that feeling of hatred, delivering blows to his head.

"You will always... be a... heretic!" he bellowed in between punches. That set me on fire. I went berserk, and tightened my hands around his neck.

"I will kill you!" I screamed, tightening my grasp every few moments. But I didn't get more then 10 seconds without 2 minor elites on top of me, pulling me off their leader. I tried my best to shake them, but with Kovalee squirming and two others, I had to let go.

The fighting started again, this time all directed at Kovalee and myself. I found myself sprawling on the ground, the two minors holding me down for Kovalee to kill me. He raised his sword and started to bring it down. It was the worst feeling I had ever felt, knowing I was about to die, knowing there was not escape.

Until he came by.

Kovalee was pushed from behind. He toppled over me, the sword just missing my face. two Shotgun bullets and the other Elites were dead, revealing Anderson.

"Sol, get to a Warthog, go back to base. Don't look back," he said calmly.

"But..."

"Now, Sol! You're a soldier now, and thats an order!"

I did his bidding and climbed into a Warthog. The controls weren't too complicated, and I was out in a few moments. I did look back, however, to see Anderson fighting off several elite majors. A Phantom took off moments later. I knew Kovalee was on board.

"Who is the coward now?" I screeched, turning back to the controlling wheel. I guided the Warthog back to base, awaiting Anderson's safe return.

End Transmission


Well, that was my favorite chapter so far. Let me know if it was yours!



[Edited on 08.30.2008 7:13 AM PDT]

  • 08.01.2008 5:55 AM PDT
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Awesome stuff man. Could you do me a favor and link the PM next time?

  • 08.01.2008 6:18 AM PDT

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sure ill put the link on next time.

  • 08.01.2008 6:26 AM PDT

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That...probably means that Laserking has either an insanely accurate logical method of deriving people's reactions to things, or he possesses pre-cognition. Either way:LASERKING for Mods!

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Great when is the next coming?

  • 08.01.2008 6:29 AM PDT

Halo: Heretic or Hero---An Elite's Story
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most likely tommorow if not sunday.


I finally reached hot topics :)

  • 08.01.2008 6:31 AM PDT
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congratulations, keep up the great work

  • 08.01.2008 7:55 AM PDT

"I don't have time Phfor this"
I pledge to punch all switches, to admit the existence of no level but total carnage, AND TO NEVER LEAVE A SINGLE BOB ALIVE!

awesomeness elites rule

  • 08.01.2008 8:05 AM PDT
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Your on fire Sergeant Murph, keep it up!

  • 08.01.2008 8:10 AM PDT

"I don't have time Phfor this"
I pledge to punch all switches, to admit the existence of no level but total carnage, AND TO NEVER LEAVE A SINGLE BOB ALIVE!

tomorrow Noooooooooo!!!! I need more story sooner :( *sad face*

  • 08.01.2008 8:25 AM PDT
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It's pretty good but it's badly written imo....

Just so you'll know, their homeplanet is Sanghelios

  • 08.01.2008 8:44 AM PDT
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exelant,i look forword to the next chapter.keep going.

  • 08.01.2008 9:11 AM PDT

Dianna Agron is the epitome of perfection.

Quinntology.

Keep 'em coming. Please.

  • 08.01.2008 10:36 AM PDT
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another great chapter

  • 08.01.2008 10:50 AM PDT

It's amazing I know the author who wrote Halo:The Flood tried to add in an elite story but this is more detailed and exciting if you wrote a book I'd buy it.

  • 08.01.2008 11:24 AM PDT
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dont killsd anderson.. please! i liked this chapter best btw

  • 08.01.2008 12:49 PM PDT
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Win great story can't wait until part 5


*Saves thread*

  • 08.01.2008 1:29 PM PDT
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What an incredible story so far, very realistic, and a good look at elites as not just being some pios zealots of a covenant, anyway, keep it up.

  • 08.01.2008 2:04 PM PDT
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this is crazy The story is heaps cool

  • 08.01.2008 2:37 PM PDT

"Over here, Stalker, I have something that might interest you."

awsome! this is the best elite story yet! FTW!

  • 08.01.2008 2:50 PM PDT

Halo: Heretic or Hero---An Elite's Story
Choose your own destiny

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Forged in the Flames of Passion, go forth and represent!

All right guys, LaserKing9 has given me a really great idea.

He and I are going to create a group specifically dedicated to mine and other FanFics, so whenever your imagination fills up, you can post a story there!


We're not sure what Its gonna be called yet, but send me a message if you think its a good idea.


Thank you everyone for supporting!!!


----------------------------Sarge Murph-------------------------

  • 08.01.2008 2:55 PM PDT
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Make a book cover!1!1 :)

  • 08.01.2008 4:11 PM PDT
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Amazing work


WIN

  • 08.01.2008 5:27 PM PDT

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That...probably means that Laserking has either an insanely accurate logical method of deriving people's reactions to things, or he possesses pre-cognition. Either way:LASERKING for Mods!

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Yep always awesome

  • 08.01.2008 8:55 PM PDT