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Subject: Halo: Heretic or Hero?----------------- (Prolouge and chapter 1 &2
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its sik. beleive me, i WANT recon, and i can tell you you deserve recon alot more than i do

  • 08.07.2008 4:47 PM PDT

Pure Awesomsauce.

  • 08.07.2008 5:36 PM PDT

"I don't have time Phfor this"
I pledge to punch all switches, to admit the existence of no level but total carnage, AND TO NEVER LEAVE A SINGLE BOB ALIVE!

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Pure Awesomsauce.


With Awesomefries

  • 08.07.2008 6:41 PM PDT
Subject: Chapter 10

Halo: Heretic or Hero---An Elite's Story
Choose your own destiny

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[Edited on 08.07.2008 6:49 PM PDT]

  • 08.07.2008 6:48 PM PDT
Subject: Halo: Heretic or Hero?----------------- An elite story

It's not Hip-Hop, its Electro.... prick.

Very cool! I make up my own Halo stories all the time in my head while Im playing, but I never take the time to type them completely out like you have done here. Very nice work :)

  • 08.07.2008 11:03 PM PDT
Subject: Halo: Heretic or Hero?----------------- (Prolouge and chapter 1 &2

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your real creative dude, the story is pretty cool

  • 08.07.2008 11:27 PM PDT
Subject: Halo: Heretic or Hero?----------------- An elite story

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cool

  • 08.07.2008 11:39 PM PDT
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sol beat that hjxzvjvjz thing to da ground with The mc breaking the hjxzvjvjz's arm

  • 08.08.2008 3:13 AM PDT

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awesome man.

  • 08.08.2008 4:02 AM PDT
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Great stuff here, man.

  • 08.08.2008 4:46 AM PDT

The world is full of mysteries, and shares too few of the answers required. An example of which, is how did I end up in the Brute Zone?

Hey, just read all this today, nice story!

I think i might work on a rough cover idea...tell me if you want me to or whether you've got one planned.

[Edited on 08.08.2008 8:02 AM PDT]

  • 08.08.2008 8:02 AM PDT

"I don't have time Phfor this"
I pledge to punch all switches, to admit the existence of no level but total carnage, AND TO NEVER LEAVE A SINGLE BOB ALIVE!

Whens the next chapter coming out its been so long

  • 08.08.2008 4:41 PM PDT

Halo: Heretic or Hero---An Elite's Story
Choose your own destiny

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Forged in the Flames of Passion, go forth and represent!

Posted by: Spartan 11117 2
Whens the next chapter coming out its been so long



tomorow.


sorry i had to babysit a little brat all day haha

  • 08.08.2008 7:18 PM PDT

Posted by: Sergeant Murph
Posted by: Spartan 11117 2
Whens the next chapter coming out its been so long



tomorow.


sorry i had to babysit a little brat all day haha
You better hurry the hell up! :)

  • 08.08.2008 8:29 PM PDT

3 years and only 1 ban, try harder next time noobs.

epic win.

  • 08.08.2008 9:49 PM PDT

ROFL:ROFL:ROFL:ROFL
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OMFG!!!! this thing is the best thing that ever happened to bugie.net. it's a great plot. i like how there is just enough humor and action to make it just like a real book. keep up the *great*awesome*super*terrific*best-thing-ever* work

  • 08.08.2008 10:15 PM PDT
Subject: Halo: Heretic or Hero?----------------- (Prolouge and chapter 1 &2

All our dreams come true, if we have the courage to pursue them.
The friend in my adversity I shall always cherish most. I can better trust those who helped to relieve the gloom of my dark hours than those who are so ready to enjoy with me the sunshine of my prosperity.

Posted by: Harlow
Davey is beyond any shadow of a doubt that red haired F-Blam!- tryhard that would always keep you from seeing the Deku Tree.


[16:45] kalriq: because you're a living legend --<3

Posted by: Sergeant Murph


Because yours is full of canon errors.

Elites don't call themselves Elites, they call themselves "Sangheili", Prophets don't call themselves Prophets, they call themselves "San'Shyuum".

Grunts = Unggoy
Brutes = Jiralhanae
Jackals = Kig-Yar
Drones = Yanme'e
Hunters = Mgalekgolo



Yes I know that but at times during Halo 2, you will hear the Prophets call Sangheili Elites, prophets call Jiralhanae Brutes,you will hear elites say 'by the prophets' and you hear an elite say 'the hunters will aid us' so I think that they are well aware of the english pronounciation of their names.

Conversation OVER



That's because MC's armor is Translating their language to english...if it wasn't you would hear jgfkasdgjhlkajdsgei Sangheilli...blah blah...Jiralhanae...etc.

  • 08.08.2008 11:36 PM PDT

All our dreams come true, if we have the courage to pursue them.
The friend in my adversity I shall always cherish most. I can better trust those who helped to relieve the gloom of my dark hours than those who are so ready to enjoy with me the sunshine of my prosperity.

Posted by: Harlow
Davey is beyond any shadow of a doubt that red haired F-Blam!- tryhard that would always keep you from seeing the Deku Tree.


[16:45] kalriq: because you're a living legend --<3

But I do like it.

:D

  • 08.08.2008 11:37 PM PDT
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Awsome story so far, can't wait for the finale.

  • 08.09.2008 1:14 AM PDT
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wow, I'm suprised everyone liked my cover so much, I think the background gradient needed something else, I dunno, it just felt like something was missing.

Part 10 (was it 10??) was great, I can't wait for the next one

  • 08.09.2008 3:09 AM PDT



That's because MC's armor is Translating their language to english...if it wasn't you would hear jgfkasdgjhlkajdsgei Sangheilli...blah blah...Jiralhanae...etc.


well for the story he's converting the rest of their speech and thoughts to english for us so i don't see why he can't convert what their calling themselves...

  • 08.09.2008 7:30 AM PDT
Subject: Halo: Heretic or Hero?----------------- An elite story

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"I die not in the name of God. I die in the name of men who wish to be him."

This is really great. Keep it up.

  • 08.09.2008 1:57 PM PDT

c|_|Care mug begs to differ.

therewillbecake@aperturescience.com

I call story Editor.

Edit- I also want publicist.

[Edited on 08.09.2008 2:03 PM PDT]

  • 08.09.2008 2:01 PM PDT
Subject: Halo: Heretic or Hero?----------------- (Finale, Part 1)

Halo: Heretic or Hero---An Elite's Story
Choose your own destiny

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[Edited on 08.10.2008 6:37 AM PDT]

  • 08.09.2008 2:35 PM PDT