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I like it... nice and simple, some good gameplay, avoiding fancy editing, and only mildly annoying screamo music :-D
I always like seeing people's first efforts at a montage -- it's never as polished as later work, but gives you good insight as to a person's potential. I suspect that your next one will be excellent!
I would suggest trying some faster editing cuts, and time them with the music. Avoid anything that would give people some kind of epileptic seizure, but try editing it so that each scene is only 3 or 4 seconds long, with a few occasional longer clips in there to give the eyes a rest.
Also, I'm sort of coming to the opinion that music selection is much more important than most people realize. Gangsta rap or screamo music are both very "classic" and it's fine, but try branching out. Also, see if the occasional insertion of in-game sound (for example, keep the music going, but also dub in the announcer's "Killtacular!" over top) doesn't add something.
A nice first effort!!