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Subject: Honour of a Heretic: Shackles of Blasphemy

Posted by: ajw34307
Thanks, I've got a Prequel and Sequel coming up in the duration of this year.
I recognise you Wolverfrog...Hmmmm


Likewise.....are you in the Mirratord? It could also be that you have read my fan fiction- Memoirs of an ODST

  • 01.18.2009 1:27 AM PDT

By the power of truth, I, while living, have conquered the universe.

I am FanFicFactor...Ah yes, Memoirs of an ODST was pretty awesome.

  • 01.18.2009 3:20 AM PDT

Posted by: ajw34307
I am FanFicFactor...Ah yes, Memoirs of an ODST was pretty awesome.


Ah, of course, the group we are in competition with....;)

  • 01.18.2009 3:33 AM PDT

By the power of truth, I, while living, have conquered the universe.

Yes, I'm watching you...Any means for a motive...Muohahahahaha!
But back on topic, I'll be releasing a few more mini-chapters such as the Battle of Jericho VII where Candor was lost and an alternative ending.

  • 01.18.2009 3:57 AM PDT

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Posted by: Hellz Jay
Not sure if this should be in the Gallery section though. I like it though, maybe we could work on web comics for it?:P


I draw! :)

  • 01.18.2009 9:27 AM PDT

By the power of truth, I, while living, have conquered the universe.

Web comics would be awesome for this, unfortunatly I don't have the time and resources to do such a thing.
:(

  • 01.18.2009 11:13 AM PDT

By the power of truth, I, while living, have conquered the universe.

I have begun work on the Prequel and please keep this alive.

  • 01.24.2009 2:19 PM PDT

Posted by: cB4d93
Posted by: Silent Eli
you are a good translator
Idiot can be a hard language to learn, but once you get it down, everything becomes so clear! The whole world will make sense to you.

I found this a very interesting read and it helped inspire some parts of my Rise of a Warrior story, if you want to check it out. It's a long read, but a good one if you ask me.

  • 01.24.2009 6:22 PM PDT

By the power of truth, I, while living, have conquered the universe.

I found this a very interesting read and it helped inspire some parts of my Rise of a Warrior story, if you want to check it out. It's a long read, but a good one if you ask me.


Thanks ever so much! That just made my day :D
I'll check it out and I've finished the prologue for Honour of a Heretic: Genesis so I'll have that up soon.

  • 01.25.2009 5:19 AM PDT

Wow, I like tanks
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I like it, hopefully a bungie member will see this and comment on what he thinks.

  • 01.29.2009 8:45 AM PDT

By the power of truth, I, while living, have conquered the universe.

Cheers, check out the prequel which I'm currently writing.

  • 01.31.2009 3:57 AM PDT
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Posted by: Wolverfrog
its really good

  • 02.03.2009 5:06 PM PDT

By the power of truth, I, while living, have conquered the universe.

Hi xPink mistx, thanks for commenting and see you on Halo ODST

  • 02.04.2009 8:57 AM PDT

By the power of truth, I, while living, have conquered the universe.

Hi guys,
I recently added a soundtrack section where I choose music I like that fits with the scene or theme of the character.
I don't claim ownership of any of the tracks and all the copyright crap that goes round, but really check 'em out.

  • 02.05.2009 12:04 PM PDT

Nice. This deserves more attention.

  • 02.09.2009 8:42 AM PDT

By the power of truth, I, while living, have conquered the universe.

Cheers, I've started the sequel and I m going to rewrite the prequel after I screwed it up a bit...

  • 02.09.2009 1:45 PM PDT

I'm just going to get Memoirs of an ODST done, which'll take me a while, probably a few more months if not more. Then I'm going to take a break and write another, unrelated fan fiction. Then, I'll start the sequel to Memoirs.

  • 02.10.2009 2:51 PM PDT

By the power of truth, I, while living, have conquered the universe.

Great, Memoirs is really good with a different writing sense I've not seen in many other fanfics.
I'll add a little sneaky peek at the next Honour in a while.

  • 02.12.2009 4:10 AM PDT

Halo: Heretic or Hero---An Elite's Story
Choose your own destiny

FanFicFactor
Forged in the Flames of Passion, go forth and represent!

AJ, you've been, by far, the most supportive person I've met on this site. From the moment I saw your story in the General Forum I knew you were a great writer, but you've also been a great friend along the way.

And so, I present a full review of Honour of a Heretic: Shackles of Blasphemy.

The first thing I noticed about this piece was the realistic, flowing dialogue. It makes the story seem real, like you're actually the main character talking casually at some times, but not too casual, so to speak. There are times when speaking like you're talking with your friend is mandatory, while other times it's appropriate to have an uber-awesome catchline, which you did at the right moments all the way through the story.

Another key element to the story was your pinpoint description of the Covenant. We, as fanfiction writers, often overlook the fact that non-avid halo fans will not know of a Prophet's capabilities or what a Sangheili bed looks like (that part you made up, I'm guessing--you still made it flow like it was real though)

Your ending was precious. Cliff hanger to an end of a novel? You, sir, just earned yourself a Halo 2 cookie. I bet every reader that followed the story that far will be looking forward to your closing the gap between the two novels.

One thing I'd like to point out though is that once or twice I didn't really know where I was. I understood the general place (e.g, the Dreadnaught) but I couldn't get a great visual of the room. That and a few minor spelling errors are about the only things I can suggest.

Lastly, the storyline was great. I like the character change from beginning to end, although I wouldn't have minded a few more chapters. Next time :D?

Your a great writer and I can see you going far if it's what you want to do. I wish you luck and hope to see you around here and FanFicFactor until I'm eighty.

Peace,

~Murph

  • 02.21.2009 4:59 PM PDT

I also like Aj, so I shall write a full review tommorow too.

  • 02.21.2009 5:02 PM PDT

DIUTYAUSDPOI

340083 Coagulated Derelict

"Zombies.Gentlemen at times like these our capacity to retaliate must be and has to be massive,to deter all forms of aggression."-JFK

This story is win.

Of course i got early pass....

Anyhow CAN I HAZ SEQUEL?!?!?!

  • 02.21.2009 5:38 PM PDT

By the power of truth, I, while living, have conquered the universe.

I love you guys, no joke. Murph, thank you...Wolverfrog and Mikey, all of you gave me great support and there is no way for me to extend my gratitude.
A sequel is on the way Fall 2009.

  • 02.23.2009 1:13 PM PDT

-eddy!
huh! What? It was the other guy, honest! ;)
'it was a sniper!' looks down at my sniper
uhh yeah? hes got one too. XD

really good story
iv read it twice :)

  • 02.23.2009 2:10 PM PDT

By the power of truth, I, while living, have conquered the universe.

Wow, thanks. I really appreciate any kind of feedback, the sequel is called the Greatest Journey.

  • 02.23.2009 2:12 PM PDT

-eddy!
huh! What? It was the other guy, honest! ;)
'it was a sniper!' looks down at my sniper
uhh yeah? hes got one too. XD

whats the eta on the greatest journey?

  • 02.23.2009 2:13 PM PDT

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