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Subject: Recovered - War is Coming..

be ready to play everday cory!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Nice Job man, looks good.

  • 02.24.2009 9:49 PM PDT

Posted by: WhiteHawk918
Nice Job man, looks good.

Thanks

  • 02.24.2009 9:52 PM PDT
Subject: War is Coming....Teaser

Personally, I think an actual "skilled" person in Halo 3 is someone who knows how to win with every weapon and combo in the game, not just a single weapon like the BR, Sniper, or even the AR. Of course, that excludes me, as I have yet to get a kill with dual plasma pistols. :D

It looks good. I like how you pulled off a good "helmet cam" effect without resembling Cloverfield, unlike all of the other helmet cams I've seen. It would look even better, though, if the ODSTs wore ODST helmets, and were black/gray instead of green.

  • 02.24.2009 9:58 PM PDT

Posted by: Keybored6522
It looks good. I like how you pulled off a good "helmet cam" effect without resembling Cloverfield, unlike all of the other helmet cams I've seen. It would look even better, though, if the ODSTs wore ODST helmets, and were black/gray instead of green.

There are only 2 ODSTs, the camera man, and his partner, the green guys are just regular soldiers.

  • 02.24.2009 10:04 PM PDT
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I left a comment, 'Kanga272'. But I think it was amazing. Real sense of chaos and it felt like there was a really epic battle going on, you did a great job.

  • 02.24.2009 10:05 PM PDT

^agree with guy above that guy above first guy^

If all the soldiers are supposed to be ODSTs, then I'd agree that they should have the ODST helmet as well as a black/gray color scheme.

As of now, I like the effects and the war looked pretty 'epic', but I'm wondering as to what the story will be. Are we following this soldier throughout the last battles of his life? I'm sure once you have voices included this will be clearer (I hope).

Otherwise, good job and hope so see more :)

[Edited on 02.24.2009 10:08 PM PST]

  • 02.24.2009 10:07 PM PDT

Posted by: JayMakay
I left a comment, 'Kanga272'. But I think it was amazing. Real sense of chaos and it felt like there was a really epic battle going on, you did a great job.

Yeah I got it, and thanks for the sub. Part 1 will be out sometime in march.

  • 02.24.2009 10:08 PM PDT

not bad, if you need voices....:-D

but yea you did put it in the wrong forum. I am a little surprised i havent seen 17 posts yelling at you.

The gallery forum will have more people with the same type of stuff so they might be able to help and give better constructive criticism.

  • 02.24.2009 10:09 PM PDT
Subject: Recovered - War is Coming..

I died once...I respawned 5 seconds later, seeking revenge!!!

very very impressive 5*

  • 02.24.2009 10:09 PM PDT
Subject: War is Coming....Teaser

You got stuck by FalconStickr

so glad to see some michinema going back and looking at the war. I got so sick of seeing stupid lame videos. I cant wait for the finishing product keep me posted on it

  • 02.24.2009 10:11 PM PDT

"Bungie controls everything. You have no rights. Play nice."

For the last time its TURRETS not TORRENTS. A TORRENT is either a peer to peer file sharing protocol or a violently fast stream of water. A TURRET is a self-contained weapons platform housing guns and capable of rotation. And TURRENT isn't even a word.

I liked it, personally I would prefer it if Part 1 remained the way it is. Just throw in soldiers yelling in the background but keep it voiceless until Part 2. The effect it has currently is really good.

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Also, can you please, pretty please, make sure you get good quality voice actors? Don't just record them over Xbox Live, get them to send you voice clips on your computer. I despise it when I watch a machinima and all I hear is crappy quality clips of people tripping over their lines.

  • 02.24.2009 10:12 PM PDT

Posted by: Ricard Julianti
not bad, if you need voices....:-D

but yea you did put it in the wrong forum. I am a little surprised i havent seen 17 posts yelling at you.

The gallery forum will have more people with the same type of stuff so they might be able to help and give better constructive criticism.

Oh ok I am sorry I put it in wrong forum, I guess I figured I used Halo 3 to make it, then it belonged in the Halo 3 forum. So what forum does it belong in?

  • 02.24.2009 10:13 PM PDT

Posted by: JayMakay
Also, can you please, pretty please, make sure you get good quality voice actors? Don't just record them over Xbox Live, get them to send you voice clips on your computer. I despise it when I watch a machinima and all I hear is crappy quality clips of people tripping over their lines.

Don't worry all the voice acting is being done with computer mics from me and some friends. I get tons of questions from the puppeteers if they can voice act, and so i tell them exactly what you just told me.

  • 02.24.2009 10:14 PM PDT

Wow, that's awesome! Nice work! 5* (:

  • 02.24.2009 10:17 PM PDT

Its no problem. there is a forum called

The Gallery

it is in the "more forums" section on the community tab there at the top.

  • 02.24.2009 10:19 PM PDT
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good job i enjoyed it reminded me of clover field

  • 02.24.2009 10:20 PM PDT

That lloks Horrible... I MEAN BAMMIN AWESEOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!...yes...

  • 02.24.2009 10:21 PM PDT

I died once...I respawned 5 seconds later, seeking revenge!!!

are you going to continue the story from a first person perspective? I personally think its refreshing to see it from first person unlike almost all the other machinimas

  • 02.24.2009 10:22 PM PDT
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You should put it in the Gallery forum. I thought it was very good. You really get a good sense of the battle and I like the helmet cam. With voices it'll be even better.

  • 02.24.2009 10:22 PM PDT

I tip my hat to you sir. Hard to find any good machinima's nowadays, this is definately one I'll keep a lookout for. Well done.

  • 02.24.2009 10:26 PM PDT

I wish I was still legendary.

Really very cool!

  • 02.24.2009 10:27 PM PDT

I carve a notch in my wall for every stall,
every fifth mark slants diagonal to symbolize your downfall...-AR

Really enjoyed that, I hope to see quite promising work coming from you.

[Edited on 02.24.2009 10:37 PM PST]

  • 02.24.2009 10:37 PM PDT

There can be only one!!!

I've watched alotta machinamas dude, and this has some of the best choreographed action I've seen yet. Can't wait for more.

Just outta curiosity, how did you get the brute mines to stop blowing up so you could have the epic battle out there.

  • 02.24.2009 10:38 PM PDT

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