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Posted by: MongooseRoadkill
Posted by: Gods Prophet
Not too bad. I'm not all that familiar with the original work but I guess it's mostly blurring and some lighting adjustments you've made, correct? I would just say to be a bit wary of the blur tool; like most things, it can be effective in small doses but try not to get too carried away. Also, try to think about where objects are in the scene when blurring and pay attention to what objects would actually be blurred if one was focusing on the point/area you've designated.
I tried again, removed most of the blur and added more focus to the key elements. Better or worse, you tell me =D
Second Attempt
Here is the original work by a Bungie concept artist: ODST
Nice work. The second attempt is much better. Just make sure that you don't make the colours too strong.