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Subject: [Story] Halo 3: Insurrection (Part 34 is now available!) ~ 8/12

Acta Non Verba

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this is awsome!

  • 01.25.2010 1:41 PM PDT

Posted by: AssaultCommand
Damn, too late...
You know CPO Mendez' first name? It's Franklin...

Maybe you can use it for the burial...?


I knew his first name.

And what is this burial you speak of?

  • 01.25.2010 11:56 PM PDT

By the power of truth, I, while living, have conquered the universe.

Posted by: AssaultCommand
He got killed... didn't he?


You know Wolvers, he's never going to kill off Mendez like that.

  • 01.26.2010 8:44 AM PDT
Subject: [Story] Halo 3: Insurrection (Part 38 is now available!) ~ 24/1

Posted by: Dropship dude
No, acnboy. Spartain Ken 15 is a lesser being. Much like the bacteria that lives in your shi­t.
Posted by: mike120593
My shi­t bacteria takes offense to that comparison.

Don't make me lel. You won't like me when I lel.

Posted by: AssaultCommand
Posted by: ajw34307
Posted by: AssaultCommand
He got killed... didn't he?


You know Wolvers, he's never going to kill off Mendez like that.
You know Wolvers, he's never going to do anything we have expected...

Thus, your argument is invalid.
You know Wolvers, he's never going to do anything we haven't expected...

O.o PARADOX!!!

But seriously, you cannot kill Mendez. Spartans never die.

[Edited on 01.26.2010 3:08 PM PST]

  • 01.26.2010 3:07 PM PDT
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Posted by: goldhawk
We should know better, because we are better.

I re-read the chapter and I realized there are PLOT HOLES!
1.Nvm.
2.Where did he get the engineer shield? Pilots of the longsword didn't have it.
3.Mendez was wearing a bullet proof jacket.
Also Firefly Ftw!

[Edited on 01.29.2010 5:29 AM PST]

  • 01.29.2010 5:23 AM PDT
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Do not waste your tears, I was not born to watch the world grow dim. Life is not measured in years, but by the deeds of men.

Posted by: goldhawk
We should know better, because we are better.

Posted by: random no337
Posted by: AssaultCommand
Posted by: ajw34307
Posted by: AssaultCommand
He got killed... didn't he?


You know Wolvers, he's never going to kill off Mendez like that.
You know Wolvers, he's never going to do anything we have expected...

Thus, your argument is invalid.
You know Wolvers, he's never going to do anything we haven't expected...

O.o PARADOX!!!

But seriously, you cannot kill Mendez. Spartans never die.
Ha! They die all the time! MM is proof.

  • 01.29.2010 12:14 PM PDT

Posted by: Xd00999
I re-read the chapter and I realized there are PLOT HOLES!
1.Nvm.
2.Where did he get the engineer shield? Pilots of the longsword didn't have it.
3.Mendez was wearing a bullet proof jacket.
Also Firefly Ftw!


1. 'k
2. They did, it just wasn't equipped.
3. The bullets tore through the jacket; it was close range.

Anyway, it's a fan fiction -- I'm sure you could find a fair few plot holes if you looked hard enough.

  • 01.29.2010 12:49 PM PDT

Acta Non Verba

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spartans never die they just go to heaven!

  • 01.29.2010 1:36 PM PDT
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Posted by: goldhawk
We should know better, because we are better.

Posted by: Wolverfrog
Posted by: Xd00999
I re-read the chapter and I realized there are PLOT HOLES!
1.Nvm.
2.Where did he get the engineer shield? Pilots of the longsword didn't have it.
3.Mendez was wearing a bullet proof jacket.
Also Firefly Ftw!


1. 'k
2. They did, it just wasn't equipped.
3. The bullets tore through the jacket; it was close range.

Anyway, it's a fan fiction -- I'm sure you could find a fair few plot holes if you looked hard enough.
2.Why not?
3.I pictured them around 4-5 meters away from each other.

[Edited on 01.29.2010 3:24 PM PST]

  • 01.29.2010 3:24 PM PDT

Posted by: Xd00999
Posted by: Wolverfrog
Posted by: Xd00999
I re-read the chapter and I realized there are PLOT HOLES!
1.Nvm.
2.Where did he get the engineer shield? Pilots of the longsword didn't have it.
3.Mendez was wearing a bullet proof jacket.
Also Firefly Ftw!


1. 'k
2. They did, it just wasn't equipped.
3. The bullets tore through the jacket; it was close range.

Anyway, it's a fan fiction -- I'm sure you could find a fair few plot holes if you looked hard enough.
2.Why not?
3.I pictured them around 4-5 meters away from each other.


2. Because they were expected a bunch of frightened crew, not a psychopathic Admiral.
3. Well it's kind of my fault then, I should have described the encounter better.

  • 01.30.2010 12:47 AM PDT
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Do not waste your tears, I was not born to watch the world grow dim. Life is not measured in years, but by the deeds of men.

Posted by: goldhawk
We should know better, because we are better.

Posted by: Wolverfrog
Posted by: Xd00999
Posted by: Wolverfrog
Posted by: Xd00999
I re-read the chapter and I realized there are PLOT HOLES!
1.Nvm.
2.Where did he get the engineer shield? Pilots of the longsword didn't have it.
3.Mendez was wearing a bullet proof jacket.
Also Firefly Ftw!


1. 'k
2. They did, it just wasn't equipped.
3. The bullets tore through the jacket; it was close range.

Anyway, it's a fan fiction -- I'm sure you could find a fair few plot holes if you looked hard enough.
2.Why not?
3.I pictured them around 4-5 meters away from each other.


2. Because they were expected a bunch of frightened crew, not a psychopathic Admiral.
3. Well it's kind of my fault then, I should have described the encounter better.
2.Noobs.
3.Fair enough.

  • 01.30.2010 6:48 AM PDT
Subject: [Story] Halo 3: Insurrection (Part 34 is now available!) ~ 8/12

FIREFLY 4 EVER!

Oh, and, uh, keep up the good work.

  • 01.30.2010 3:30 PM PDT
Subject: [Story] Halo 3: Insurrection (Part 38 is now available!) ~ 24/1

The Razor.

For the honour of the Mirratord.

Wolvers!!!! Fancy running into you here. I had no idea your stories were in the Gallery!! And they are all top topics. Well done, mate. Keep up the great work. Talk to you in the Mirratord.

[Edited on 01.31.2010 1:38 PM PST]

  • 01.31.2010 1:37 PM PDT

Right, I hope this isn't interpreted as a bump.

I'm wondering what to do. I've got three stories, but I don't really want to juggle them all.

However, I'll let you decide.

Should I finish Insurrection, and have it all wrapped up by the end of Febuary at the most?

Or should I write for all three at once, which will take much longer? I also don't have many ideas for Memoris and True Sangheili right now (well, I do for a little later on, but I need a way to get to them first.)

I'd prefer to just finish Insurrection, but if you're all getting sick of it, then I guess I could do Memoirs and TS too.

Thoughts?

  • 02.02.2010 9:10 AM PDT
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Do not waste your tears, I was not born to watch the world grow dim. Life is not measured in years, but by the deeds of men.

Posted by: goldhawk
We should know better, because we are better.

1.Insurrection
2.Seed of Orion
3.True Sangheili
4.Memoirs

  • 02.02.2010 10:23 AM PDT

"I believe that the sound of racking the pump of a shotgun is universally recognized as ‘kiss your ass goodbye’."
— Unknown Marine

start with your most finished novel and work with them chronologically.

  • 02.02.2010 4:50 PM PDT

thisn

  • 02.02.2010 5:46 PM PDT

The Hybrid a FanFic by Tehface

"Look for the signs, the keepers of the flame. They will lead you to war, and perhaps, to victory."

Hmm. A tough decision. The most logical would be Insurrection first, I think. Then it's really up to you. Sure, Sangheili is more "finished" but you shouldn't force yourself to write when you have no plan or idea.

So;
1. Insurrection (cause its almost done, and you have ideas)
2. You could more easily juggle Memoirs and True Sangheili since there are two, and when your ideas ebb and flow.
3. Orion? Are you even finishing it?
4. Super Secret Awesome Saucetastical Story.

  • 02.02.2010 9:06 PM PDT

Orion is indefintely discontinued I'm afraid. Many ideas from it were worked into Memoirs.

But yeah, I'll finish this with a few more chapters and an epic-logue I have all planned out, get a huge weight off my mind, and then juggle TS and Memoirs.

  • 02.02.2010 11:14 PM PDT

Posted by: Dropship dude
No, acnboy. Spartain Ken 15 is a lesser being. Much like the bacteria that lives in your shi­t.
Posted by: mike120593
My shi­t bacteria takes offense to that comparison.

Don't make me lel. You won't like me when I lel.

Posted by: Wolverfrog
Orion is indefintely discontinued I'm afraid. Many ideas from it were worked into Memoirs.

But yeah, I'll finish this with a few more chapters and an epic-logue I have all planned out, get a huge weight off my mind, and then juggle TS and Memoirs.
Sounds good. Will Insurrection end up being longer than Memoirs?

  • 02.03.2010 1:19 AM PDT

Posted by: random no337
Posted by: Wolverfrog
Orion is indefintely discontinued I'm afraid. Many ideas from it were worked into Memoirs.

But yeah, I'll finish this with a few more chapters and an epic-logue I have all planned out, get a huge weight off my mind, and then juggle TS and Memoirs.
Sounds good. Will Insurrection end up being longer than Memoirs?


It already is. About 150 pages compared to Memoirs' 100.

Just not as many chapters.

  • 02.03.2010 8:35 AM PDT