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Subject: [Novel] Halo 3: Insurrection (Part 53 available!) ~ 24 July

What a waste....

One word can describe this:

EPIC

  • 07.25.2010 11:54 AM PDT


Posted by: ajw34307
Mind = asploded.

That was written beautifully, Wolvers. The way you described Kelly's death was top-notch, very emotional.


Agreed. I'm a little annoyed that he hasn't posted all of it in one chapter like he said, but it is worth it.

  • 07.25.2010 2:24 PM PDT

Posted by: steadman

Posted by: ajw34307
Mind = asploded.

That was written beautifully, Wolvers. The way you described Kelly's death was top-notch, very emotional.


Agreed. I'm a little annoyed that he hasn't posted all of it in one chapter like he said, but it is worth it.


I never said I'd post it all in one chapter, I said I'd post Chapter 53 and the Epilogue alongside each other. However, I just realised that isn't necessary, and that if I waited any longer before releasing another Chapter then people would start to get very annoyed.

Besides, it would have been too much to post at once.

  • 07.25.2010 2:26 PM PDT

Posted by: Dropship dude
No, acnboy. Spartain Ken 15 is a lesser being. Much like the bacteria that lives in your shi­t.
Posted by: mike120593
My shi­t bacteria takes offense to that comparison.

Don't make me lel. You won't like me when I lel.

Wonderful, amazing Wolvers, you've outdone yourself again.

You conveyed so many different emotions in this section, and appear to have put a phenomenal amount of work into it.

I'll be sad to see Insurrection finished, but extremely happy to see the conclusion of a brilliant story. Full review after the Epilogue comes out, just like AJW.

  • 07.26.2010 1:58 AM PDT

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Posted by: Nocbl2
One word can describe this:

EPIC
No, it can't. But I'll extend my opinion once I've seen the Epilogue.

And in case someone right now is planning to flame me, I never said I meant that negatively...

  • 07.26.2010 3:42 AM PDT
Subject: [Novel] Halo 3: Insurrection (Part 52 available!) ~ 18 June


Posted by: Nocbl2
One word can describe this:

EPIC

No, no words can describe this. This blows the other Halo novels out of the water and I've read them all. I'm starting to believe that Wolverfrog is actually a professional writer secretly writing a fantastic (to say the least) story on Bungie.net

"Now what happens?"
"Now you die."

*Jaw suddenly weighs 20 tons*

  • 07.26.2010 6:30 AM PDT
Subject: [Novel] Halo 3: Insurrection (Part 53 available!) ~ 25 July

Incredibly awesome!

[Edited on 07.26.2010 8:27 AM PDT]

  • 07.26.2010 8:26 AM PDT
Subject: [Novel] Halo 3: Insurrection (Part 52 available!) ~ 18 June

Wolver, you made me want to cry and thats hard to do. This has been the best thing ive ever read to date and i believe it will always reamin that way.

Ive read all halo fiction and this surpasses them all.

Like the others i might have ago at doing a review as well, this is definatly is worth it.

Also, I cannot wait for the Epilouge

  • 07.26.2010 1:55 PM PDT

Im posting another thing
none of my friends know that im a halo nerd and im the tough one of our group like we play xbox but im a secret nerd...when you described kellys death i had goosebumps and actually felt genuianly sad...you need to make this a legit novel

  • 07.26.2010 2:53 PM PDT

Excellent work! From the first chapter you had me hooked. I read this over the course of a couple of nights, and, may I say, I had trouble pulling away from it. It had me totally immersed in the story. The characters were all wonderfully developed, and I liked the way you threw in a lot of old favourites, while created some new ones which helped make the story what is was.

There were diffidently some memorable scenes in the novel, namely, the sniping contest between Johnson and the Jackal, and when the Sharquoi joined the fight, while the Brute Chieftain stood back, stroked his beard, thinking about the creature while watching the carnage.

I have three questions, two being a little trivial.
1. Who won the sniping contest?
2. What happened to Johnsons squad of the Jackal, the 3 Grunts and the Engineer?
3. What possessed you to put 2401 into the story, and how did he get to Onyx?

Great work, once again! Can't wait for the epilogue!

  • 07.26.2010 6:14 PM PDT

Posted by: Rolling Flame
1. Who won the sniping contest?
2. What happened to Johnsons squad of the Jackal, the 3 Grunts and the Engineer?
3. What possessed you to put 2401 into the story, and how did he get to Onyx?

Great work, once again! Can't wait for the epilogue!



1. You'll see
2. You'll see
3. 2401 Pendant Tangerine? I didn't like how he just vanished at Delta Halo with the Gravemind, and we never saw him again. Like 343, he was rebuilt by Mendicant Bias using the mainframe at Onyx, which constantly receives information from all active Monitors when they're at Halo rings. In the same way the Halo rings can be rebuilt, their Monitors also can.

  • 07.27.2010 12:39 AM PDT

GROSSMAN: Do you think of the Culture as a utopia? Would you live in it, if you could?

BANKS: Good grief yes, to both! What's not to like? ...Well, unless you're actually a fascist or a power junkie or sincerely believe that money rather than happiness is what really matters in life. And even people with those bizarre beliefs are catered for in the Culture, albeit in extreme-immersion VR environments.

KOTOR

Oh dear lord, I've been reading this for most of yesterday, and I can't wait for the next bit. Usually I just dismiss fan-fictions as nerds trying to make their invented character better than the chief, whereas you've just used characters from the universe, and added in new ones where necessary, such as that bastard Eden, anyways, love the book, and want moar soon plox

-Orphius

  • 07.27.2010 12:58 AM PDT

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Yeah, regarding Eden, I'm still unsatisfied. I want to see a massacre. I hope you make a sequel. "Massacre on Eden" :-D

Unless you've massacred him in the Epilogue... :-D

  • 07.27.2010 2:50 AM PDT
Subject: [Story] Halo: Insurrection (Part Four now out)

Battlefield 3 MASTER RACE
Mass Effect 3 MASTER RACE
Skyrim MASTER RACE
Coup MASTER RACE
Chrome MASTER RACE
I program games, that's all you need to know.

This is amazing, I read every chapter and it just gets better and better!

  • 07.27.2010 9:45 AM PDT
Subject: [Novel] Halo 3: Insurrection (Part 53 available!) ~ 24 July
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You obviously haven't met my younger brother then.


Posted by: Nocbl2
One word can describe this:

EPIC

  • 07.27.2010 10:21 AM PDT

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I'm away for weeks starting on Saturday. Will the epilogue be posted by then? I'd hate to be distracted while I'm supposed to be enjoying my holidays...

:-D

how big is it so far? (that's what she said)

  • 07.28.2010 12:07 PM PDT


Posted by: DataBase90

how big is it so far? (that's what she said)

Nearly there, give it a minute and I will be ready.
:D

  • 07.28.2010 12:53 PM PDT
Subject: [Novel] Halo 3: Insurrection (Part 53 available!) ~ 25 July

Posted by: DataBase90
I'm away for weeks starting on Saturday. Will the epilogue be posted by then? I'd hate to be distracted w


I just posted 10,000 words! Give me a little respite. It might be, but I don't like giving ETAs because I more often than not break them.

And it's about the same size as Chapter 53 was at the moment. There's a lot to wrap up. It starts off with a classic Halo moment.

[Edited on 07.28.2010 2:19 PM PDT]

  • 07.28.2010 2:18 PM PDT

By the power of truth, I, while living, have conquered the universe.

doode, u r gon haz 2 hurry up, coz i r 2 keen for moar insure erection!

  • 07.28.2010 3:20 PM PDT
Subject: [Story] Halo 3: Insurrection (Part Fifteen out) - Halo 3 Epilogue

Battlefield 3 MASTER RACE
Mass Effect 3 MASTER RACE
Skyrim MASTER RACE
Coup MASTER RACE
Chrome MASTER RACE
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Excellent.

  • 07.29.2010 5:50 AM PDT
Subject: [Novel] Halo 3: Insurrection (Part 53 available!) ~ 25 July


Posted by: Wolverfrog
Posted by: DataBase90
I'm away for weeks starting on Saturday. Will the epilogue be posted by then? I'd hate to be distracted w


I just posted 10,000 words! Give me a little respite. It might be, but I don't like giving ETAs because I more often than not break them.

And it's about the same size as Chapter 53 was at the moment. There's a lot to wrap up. It starts off with a classic Halo moment.


classic halo moment?!u mean a cliffhanger! aaaaawwwww....

  • 07.31.2010 12:27 PM PDT
Subject: [Novel] Halo 3: Insurrection (Part 53 available!) ~ 24 July

wort wort wort

mind=mush

  • 08.01.2010 12:24 AM PDT

What a waste....

THE SUSPENSE IS KILLING ME!!!

  • 08.04.2010 9:32 PM PDT
Subject: [Story] Halo 3: Insurrection (Part 34 is now available!) ~ 8/12
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Emile was here

I just got to part 37, and pardon me but:

I still don't get it. The story changed from rescuing Master Chief to being on Onyx to the Flood attacking Sanghelios. Can someone please explain the story to me? It all seems very...mixed, and never-ending

  • 08.05.2010 5:38 AM PDT
Subject: [Novel] Halo 3: Insurrection (Part 53 available!) ~ 25 July
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Emile was here

Whoa there seems to be a very long time between posts

EDIT: Also, this is just my opinion but I think that the Arbiter deserved to kill K'rash (forgot his name already), the dude that owned the state of Vadam. It was his fight, his job, and his honor to re-take his own state from someone like that.

[Edited on 08.05.2010 7:52 AM PDT]

  • 08.05.2010 5:41 AM PDT