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Excellent work! From the first chapter you had me hooked. I read this over the course of a couple of nights, and, may I say, I had trouble pulling away from it. It had me totally immersed in the story. The characters were all wonderfully developed, and I liked the way you threw in a lot of old favourites, while created some new ones which helped make the story what is was.
There were diffidently some memorable scenes in the novel, namely, the sniping contest between Johnson and the Jackal, and when the Sharquoi joined the fight, while the Brute Chieftain stood back, stroked his beard, thinking about the creature while watching the carnage.
I have three questions, two being a little trivial.
1. Who won the sniping contest?
2. What happened to Johnsons squad of the Jackal, the 3 Grunts and the Engineer?
3. What possessed you to put 2401 into the story, and how did he get to Onyx?
Great work, once again! Can't wait for the epilogue!