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Posted by: Wolverfrog
Posted by: comandercody451
Posted by: Wolverfrog
You shouldn't really start fan fictions with an actions scene, it's not a film. Also, don't use all Caps in a story, and refrain from bugging the profanity filter. Type it up in word, auto correct, proof read, proof read again, edit, and only then do you post it. I didn't "bug the profanity filter". I put the blam in there.
You chose to put blam in your story? Why didn't you just say a word that isn't blocked like crap or bastard? I just liked it that way.