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One day... I am gonna grow wings... A chemical reaction... Hysterical and useless... hystecial and let down and hanging around... crushed like a bug in the ground.

When Spartan III's use the two finger gesture it means welcome.

  • 04.16.2009 6:04 PM PDT
Subject: The Halo 3 Epilogue (The Finale-Part 3) NEW

that was an awesome fight scene. i wish i couldve controlled myself and read it slower but i just flew right through it because it was so exhilarating. im going to have to read through it again tomorrow to take in the full effect.

  • 04.16.2009 8:42 PM PDT

That was fantastic. I could picture the Scarab smashing into the cruiser.

  • 04.16.2009 9:13 PM PDT

All comments are welcome, even the errors. Feel free to point them out folks as it all helps.

The thumb and fore finger over the face plate is also stated as being the spartan smile in Ghosts of Onyx and all the other books.

Glad you liked the fight scene, I enjoyed writing it.

  • 04.17.2009 12:15 AM PDT
Subject: The Halo 3 Epilogue (The Finale-Part 4) BRAND NEW - PAGE 6

By the power of truth, I, while living, have conquered the universe.

again i agree dont make a crapo ending like in halo2

Take that back!

  • 04.17.2009 2:56 AM PDT

Posted by: Dropship dude
No, acnboy. Spartain Ken 15 is a lesser being. Much like the bacteria that lives in your shi­t.
Posted by: mike120593
My shi­t bacteria takes offense to that comparison.

Don't make me lel. You won't like me when I lel.

Posted by: MaxRealflugel
It was carnage but, to a Spartan, damn good fun.

Do I detect a hint of that old Britishness there?

  • 04.17.2009 3:31 AM PDT

Posted by: random no337
Posted by: MaxRealflugel
It was carnage but, to a Spartan, damn good fun.

Do I detect a hint of that old Britishness there?


It crops up from time to time doesn't it Ajw old bean?

  • 04.17.2009 3:49 AM PDT

I play American Football so I enjoy a good hi or 10, so when you were describing the battle with immense detail, I mean this, I was literally laughing my ass of great job Max well worth the wait
Best part yet!

  • 04.17.2009 2:34 PM PDT

By the power of truth, I, while living, have conquered the universe.

ETA on the final part?

Oh and yes, tea and crumpets all the way. Damned good sport ol' chap.

[Edited on 04.17.2009 4:03 PM PDT]

  • 04.17.2009 4:02 PM PDT

^^I watch a lot of Top Gear so can I join in being British, eh screw it I'm trying

I took an old bloke out in me lorry had some fish n' chips down by the old bay we had a good old laugh and uh

Thats about all the British I know
Did I do good?!?!?!?!?1 lol

  • 04.17.2009 6:34 PM PDT

If my purpose in life is to be hated, then I'll make a great boss

AAAAAAA stereotypical old british burns my eyes!
Seriously, no one (exept maybe the queen) talks like that!
Anyway, story is awsome! do we get to know why you were blacklisted?

  • 04.18.2009 4:27 AM PDT

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Posted by: Commander Stroll
Still using a pump-action shotgun over 500 years in the future I see.

omg not realistic stop game production plz

Posted by: Welsh Mullet
AAAAAAA stereotypical old british burns my eyes!
Seriously, no one (exept maybe the queen) talks like that!
Anyway, story is awsome! do we get to know why you were blacklisted?


The Bungie Team don't like it when a Fan-fic has more than 7 units of winsauce. Unfortunately for Max, this fan-fic had over 9,000 units of winsauce.

  • 04.18.2009 6:11 AM PDT

The ban was for an off topic thread that I posted the other week. I basically put up my profile picture from a Halo 3 screen shot with no modifications. "Naughty".

The next and FINAL part will be written sometime next week, but there may be a slight delay to its completion. this is due to a short return trip back to the UK next week, but I'll do my best to get it up on the forum.

The remaining two books as they could be called will be written at a later date due to my own personal effort to finish my real novel. Only after I have finished writing my novel will the remaining Halo stories be written. So watch this space...

  • 04.18.2009 6:38 AM PDT

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Posted by: MaxRealflugel

The remaining two books as they could be called will be written at a later date due to my own personal effort to finish my real novel. Only after I have finished writing my novel will the remaining Halo stories be written. So watch this space...


hmmmm.... well then, ETA on your novel? jk, well not really. =P.
and hate to say i told you so, anyway so please PLEASE dont give us a halo 2 ending!

  • 04.18.2009 9:22 AM PDT

By the power of truth, I, while living, have conquered the universe.

and hate to say i told you so, anyway so please PLEASE dont give us a halo 2 ending!

Ah for -blam!-'s sake!

  • 04.18.2009 12:53 PM PDT

hey max, thought i would congratulate you on a truely epic story, thoroughly enjoyed every part especially the finale. Cannot wait for the final section to complete this incredible journey you have led us through. Better than the actual halo novels in my opinion =) suck it nylund....max for the win

  • 04.18.2009 12:54 PM PDT

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Posted by: ajw34307
and hate to say i told you so, anyway so please PLEASE dont give us a halo 2 ending!

Ah for -blam!-'s sake!



and whats THAT supposed to mean?

  • 04.19.2009 2:58 PM PDT

Hey Max, would you ever make a revised version of this story after its done. I mean like going back and fleshing out the story to add some more detail and story-line into it. I am not saying that the story is not great to begin with, it just would be amazing if you wrote more into it. Do you know what i mean?

  • 04.21.2009 4:01 PM PDT

I know what you mean, but editing an existing storyline is quite time consuming but if at some point I do manage to get the opportunity then I may consider it.

To those who have picked up errors etc with the last part could you please list them all?

  • 04.22.2009 1:04 AM PDT

By the power of truth, I, while living, have conquered the universe.

and whats THAT supposed to mean?

It means exactly what it implicates, Halo 2 was a brilliant game and the story was by far the most in-depth. In my opinion.
The most short minded gamer will just overlook that and say the whole thing was crap, which it wasn't.

  • 04.22.2009 8:26 AM PDT

Posted by: ajw34307
and whats THAT supposed to mean?

It means exactly what it implicates, Halo 2 was a brilliant game and the story was by far the most in-depth. In my opinion.
The most short minded gamer will just overlook that and say the whole thing was crap, which it wasn't.


The whole thing was a masterpiece, Halo 3 paled in comparison to it's might.

  • 04.22.2009 8:48 AM PDT

This is my Battle Rifle there are many like it, but this one is mine.

Posted by: Wolverfrog
Posted by: ajw34307
and whats THAT supposed to mean?

It means exactly what it implicates, Halo 2 was a brilliant game and the story was by far the most in-depth. In my opinion.
The most short minded gamer will just overlook that and say the whole thing was crap, which it wasn't.


The whole thing was a masterpiece, Halo 3 paled in comparison to it's might.


The only bad thing about the Halo 2 story was the ending. Only because it was the ending of something great.

[Edited on 04.22.2009 10:52 PM PDT]

  • 04.22.2009 3:46 PM PDT

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a halo 2 ending!

.......if you read the entire post, oyu would know that I did not say "do not give us a halo 2" i said "do not give us a halo two ending" because i hate cliffhangers, especially when I know that their will be a long time between the a cliffhanger and next bok/movie/whatever. thus when i said "i told you so". If people took more time reading and less time ranting the world would be a better place....

  • 04.23.2009 6:21 AM PDT
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I love the complainers that complain about the complainers complaining.

Awesome Story

  • 04.24.2009 1:38 PM PDT

Posted by: Dropship dude
No, acnboy. Spartain Ken 15 is a lesser being. Much like the bacteria that lives in your shi­t.
Posted by: mike120593
My shi­t bacteria takes offense to that comparison.

Don't make me lel. You won't like me when I lel.

Posted by: The Stig 521
^^I watch a lot of Top Gear so can I join in being British, eh screw it I'm trying

I took an old bloke out in me lorry had some fish n' chips down by the old bay we had a good old laugh and uh

Thats about all the British I know
Did I do good?!?!?!?!?1 lol
Hehe, I love TopGear. I think I can do some resemblance to a british accent...
Oh well.. I love being an Aussie, even though matchmaking almost always = yellow bar

  • 04.25.2009 2:31 AM PDT