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Subject: Halo Fanfic: If I were your hero (Stage 7 Info)
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About the comment on editing, I was being a lemur(sp?), following the other people saying stuff I shouldn't have. Sorry. Those furry balls of fur jump off cliffs just 'cause the one in front of it did. So.... yea good work on teh fic keep it up!

  • 06.07.2005 4:10 PM PDT
Subject: Halo Fanfic: If I were your hero (Stage 8 Info)

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Posted by: Scorptank
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Sorry man... I feel bad now....

*cowers in corner. awaiting replies. fearing to be stoned by ballistic rocks.*



Water under the bridge Scorptank, water under the bridge....

*picks up pebble, attaches ballistic rocket. Aims to the east... presses read button. Rocket launches but pebble falls off and hits me in the head. Rocket runs out of fuel and falls into ocean.*
Oh crickets. LOL. I honestly took it all too seriously, even though I knew you were joking. I never had any bad feelings about it, it was an internal struggle and I think others didn't get the joke. midship, don't worry bout it, some people got the joke, some didn't. But let us all drop it and push on.

Work continues on stage 9. Due to a medical emergency and my softball game, It looks more like monday around 9AM B.net time for the post. I'll keep you all posted.

Push forward soldiers!!
-soulguard



[Edited on 6/7/2005]

  • 06.07.2005 7:22 PM PDT
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Still... I don't understand why you tied the pebble to that ballistic rocket.
I'm sure that thing would have left quite an impression on my head... LOL.

Okay, I'm moving on... tripping all the time, but moving on.... thanks mate.

And Prowlaz, Papa John seems to have quit his fanfic... why? I don't know.

  • 06.08.2005 2:00 AM PDT

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Do to the popularity of the Elite Secret Service, the Mirratord, I created a brief definition for the group. This is also posted in FF.net. Please note that Scorptank's story, Halo 3: Alliances, uses a similar group however there are small differences that he chose to make to fit in his story. With my permision of course. The Mirratord was created by me and is not an official creation of Bungie or MGS.

Mirratord
The highest level of active elite warriors. They are kept secret by the Elite High Council to perform spy missions and "assassinations", for the benefit of the elite society. The elites have little trust in the "hierarchs" abilities to maintain discipline within their own race, so the elite High Council created the Mirratord as a "Secret Service" to deal with traitors within the Prophets ranks. These warriors specialize in the use of dual single blade plasma swords; have stronger energy shields; and the most advanced active camouflage system within the covenant. They are also labaled as Heretics if they are captured or fail in a mission against a prophet, this is simply a farse so that the Mirratord secret is not revealed.



Please note that this is a brief definition. More details will be revealed about the Mirratord as the story progresses.

-soulguard

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  • 06.08.2005 8:09 AM PDT
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cool

  • 06.08.2005 9:28 AM PDT
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got a date?

  • 06.09.2005 8:35 AM PDT
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thats cool. can't wait to learn more.

hey guys, I might not be able to release the next chapter this week. I've been busy at work and relitives have been coming over all this week because of my B-day on the 6th (17...oh yeah!), but I've been working on it when ever i can. So don't lose faith in me!

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  • 06.09.2005 8:41 AM PDT

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Highland Brute; MC219
A date... yeah, it seems that monday will be the date. look for it around 9AM b.net time.

Take your time with the story MC219, I'm sure it will be worth the wait. And Happy birthday!
-soulguard

  • 06.09.2005 9:54 AM PDT
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many happy returns mate

its mine on sunday ill be 15 one year closer to finishin this $HIT excuse for an educational institution(school)

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  • 06.09.2005 11:18 AM PDT
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SG, HBrute

thanks for the support. When i do get it done though, i hope you guys like it. It's a special chapter.

  • 06.09.2005 6:51 PM PDT
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you know, i havent been on for awhile, and this all very odd, so i wont even comment.

  • 06.09.2005 7:29 PM PDT
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it's always like this mate you'll understand eventually

  • 06.10.2005 2:17 PM PDT

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Happy Birthday Highland Brute!!!
:O

  • 06.11.2005 9:44 AM PDT
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it's not sunday yet but thanks anyway

and i have a name it's neil

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  • 06.11.2005 10:31 AM PDT
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NOW ITS MY BIRTHDAY YAY : )

  • 06.12.2005 3:30 AM PDT
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as I was lying on my bed at the night gazing the stars wondering one thing; Where the hell my roof went.

I am a Zombie.
Proud member of B.net since -04

Well congratulations Neil for your 15th anniversary. yeppiih!!

Yeah its been long since i was here last time, bah its also pretty quiet here. i left half week ago and only one page more heere? whats this?

  • 06.12.2005 4:34 AM PDT
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yeah i know it's aful slow

  • 06.12.2005 4:52 AM PDT
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happy birth day neil

  • 06.12.2005 1:26 PM PDT
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thanks

  • 06.12.2005 2:11 PM PDT
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happy birthday neil
great story SG

  • 06.12.2005 6:50 PM PDT
Subject: Halo Fanfic: If I were your hero (Stage 9 update)

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Final Stage 9 update
Stage 9 is getting the final edit as I speak. And it looks like it will be late... perhaps tomorrow or wednesday. Reason is that I began to edit and realized I left a lot of plot holes.

There are a lot of Revelations in this stage. Deep mysteries that many of you may not agree with.

From the birth of the Covenant, to the first attack of Earth... a lot of information is givin, and in this information I realized that something... important... was left out. I had to go back in a re-edit. What this also meant is that I had to add more detail throughout.

This will be the stage to read. If you like this story and want to know EVERYTHING then this is the stage to wait for. Order a pizza, grab a bag of chips, curl up with your blanky, or do whatever it is that you do to make reading fun... because this stage will have your jaw on the floor.

I don't like to boast, but this stage is a gold mine of information about this fan fic. It also goes into detail about my "theory" of the union with the brutes, the prophets goals, and the great journey.

You will love it, I hope. Stage 9 will raise the bar of what you thought would happen, and leave you craving for more.

But let me warn you, there is action but only a little. This is not a flash back, this is more story plot growth. There is A LOT of dialogue. But the stage isn't very long, about average legnth, 10-14 pages or 4-6 posts.

I hope everyone enjoys this stage, it is very revealing and has taken me a long time to put most of these theories together. Of course there will be some who will not like the theories, but I only ask that you have an open mind and just accept that this is a fanfic... I'm not trying to convince anyone that this is how the story of Halo (or the Halo-verse) will unfold.

Once again, sorry for the delay and look for a PM sometime tomorrow, roughly around noon bungie time.
-soulguard

*NOTE*: Head over and read Scorptank's latest chapter today, in the meantime!! Halo 3: Alliances has been (will be) updated!!

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  • 06.13.2005 7:45 AM PDT
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aww crap i won't be able to read it till late wednesday im away on tuesdays

  • 06.13.2005 8:20 AM PDT