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This was not the elite he fought three days ago. This Gridolee was cunning and skilled with the blade in his hands. The monster without self control, that violently struck out with reckless intent, and seemed to have no self control in battle was not present. This Gridolee seemed poised and deadly.

“He baited you, sergeant.” Domadree nodded. “The move he performed was a three step attack. It is very aggressive and hard to defend against if you are not prepared. By exposing his back he gave you a target, a target that most can not ignore. The follow through is not delayed, but it all happens in one swift motion; spin opposite with the left, upon contact reverse with the right and counter with a kick. Only the best can defend against this strike. Consider yourself most fortunate that you were able to avoid serious harm.”

Eric shook his head in frustration. Hand to hand combat was one of his specialties and guns was what he was best at, but the sword dueling was neither. It combined an almost surreal dance quality with a combination of balance, speed, and patience. He had to mentally picture his move before he could try anything, but Gridolee didn’t give him a chance to think. Gridolee was once again swinging at him. Eric dodged the first strike, and blocked the second with the left blade. Another strike came from the right, and Eric shuffled to his left.

“You can not think, sergeant.” Domadree roared. The captain watched every move Eric made an analyzed them before Eric could react. Domadree could clearly see everything Eric was going to do, and so could Gridolee. “Stop thinking about how to move, sergeant Raynord! React as if you already know what you will do!” Eric feverishly blocked Gridolee’s swings as best he could. If it weren’t for the augmentation to his muscles there would be no way for him to block or avoid Gridolee’s blades. He was barely keeping up with the massive elite’s speed, and suddenly his feet were kicked out from under him. Gridolee had extended his foot and tripped him while he tried to block a swing. Determination filled his mind and Eric struggled not to fall. He adjusted his balance with his left hand and planted his feet firmly. He raised his right arm to defend himself from Gridolee but the fatal move had been delivered. Eric’s eyes grew with confusion as he looked down his nose at Gridolee’s blade resting at his neck.

“When you are falling, sergeant, never try to get back up until you have cleared your opponents reach.” Domadree sighed. He walked out into the middle of the floor as he watched the other humans in the room groan and mumble amongst themselves. They were clearly upset that their leader had been so easily defeated, but the captain understood much more then they could.

“You did well, sergeant.” Gridolee stated as he powered down his blade. “For a human, that is.”

“I did well?” Eric questioned sarcastically. “I’ve been doing this for four hours and I haven’t come close to touching you.”

“Did you honestly believe that you could best a Mirratord warrior in only one training session?” Domadree stated as he came closer. “Gridolee is the youngest of us, and has been fighting with the single blade for ten of your years. The fact that you were able to defend yourself so well was remarkable.”

“Indeed.” Gridolee added. “There were moments when I was sure I could strike the final blow, but you defended yourself well.” Eric squeezed the hilt of the blades tightly and the blades powered down. He then dropped them into his pockets and sat on the floor in exhaustion.

“I guess I didn’t think of it that way.” Eric stated as he rubbed his chest. The kick from earlier was still aching slightly.

“Captain, Sergeant Raynord, we have received word from Jogrennilee.” Siren stated over the dueling room intercom. “The council and the planetary officials have agreed to let them take the trials. Preparations have already begun within the Inner Sanctum, and they will be ready to receive the ‘Prospects’ in four units.”

“Excellent.” Domadree stated. “It would appear that the council understands the importance of having the human’s full allegiance.”

“Siren, how long is four units?” Eric questioned as he wiped the sweat from his brow.

“Four hours, three minutes and forty two seconds, according to Dorenth’s revolution around the sun.” Siren returned sharply. “Think of it as Sangheili time.”

“Fine.” Eric sighed. “Smart ass AI’s.”

“Well, I love you too, sergeant.” Siren giggled. “I figured you would like to rest before the trials begin. You’ll have time for only two hours of sleep.”

“Fine.” Eric sighed again. “I’ll curl up in the nearest corner I can find. Wake me when it’s time to go.”

“I suggest the amphitheater.” Siren suddenly stated as Eric approached an empty area of the Dueling room. “It’s quieter and the benches provide better back support. It’s only two corridors away.”

“Fine.” Eric continued to sigh as his exhaustion began to dictate his words. He walked from the room as Domadree and Gridolee ventured toward the bridge, speaking in their native tongue. Eric soon found himself yawning as he entered the amphitheater. Numerous soldiers, grunts and ODST were scattered around, resting and not bothering each other. The lights were set to low, and he could not identify any faces amongst the crowd. Most of the marines and ODST sprang to their feet as Eric passed them, realizing who he was. He waved them off, signaling for them to continue whatever it was they were doing. He found an empty spot near the stage and crashed onto the bench. It only took a minute for him to drift off to sleep, snoring softly.

The stage holographic generator hummed so softly that only a close group of marines heard it, but they paid it no heed. Siren’s image suddenly appeared at the edge of the stage. The hologram doppelganger of the artificial intelligence smiled softly as she approached the sleeping sergeant. With a soundless gesture that only reflective light can create, Siren sat near Eric’s head. With her right hand she motioned over him, rubbing him but unable to feel or be felt. She smiled softly as she gazed at the back of his head. Simple wants filled her virtual mind as she waved her hands over him. To be able to smell him, to feel him, to feel his touch, and to hold him was all she could process at that moment; to be human again.

“I still remember.” Siren smirked. Her smile slowly left her face and she frowned mournfully. “I remember it all.”

Someone was coming. Siren’s sensors alerted her to one of her preset warnings, and in the flash of a millisecond she vanished without a trace. The door to the amphitheater opened as the holographic generator powered down. Through the door Rose walked into the room. Looking around at the silhouette images of marines, grunts and ODST. Her eyes then spotted the motionless lump of a body lying at the base of the amphitheater. She quickly, but quietly, approached and sat next to Eric. Rose wanted to lye next to him, but that would be impossible on the small cramped bench. So she decided to sit next to him, but not touch him, fearing that she may awaken him from his slumber. She knew that he needed the rest, because Melanie had told her about the council allowing him and the grunt to take the trials. Rose simply leaned back and closed her eyes, letting Eric sleep.

In the cold emptiness of digital information, Siren’s presence sat quietly. Using one of the many relay conduits aboard the ship she was able to create numerous virtual monitors within her own subroutine. This allowed her to see anything and everywhere around the ship, but for now she only cared to stare at Eric. Her emotional functions began to run rampant within her and she was finding it harder and harder to control them. She created firewalls to slow them, subroutines to contain them, files to subdue them, but all were met with the same result. Her emotions were growing stronger and overriding her primary subroutines, and this lead to a surge of archived data flowing to the surface; her memories were beginning to consume her. She was slowly loosing the control of many ship-wide functions, and soon disconnected herself from the Life and Sacrifice’s core functions. Had she not done that, she could have disabled many of the ships safety protocols, which would have endangered the crew. She isolated herself into a small subroutine that she could use to safely monitor her actions and not interfere with the ship, but she still allowed herself access to one ship function; the visual of Eric and Rose sitting on the bench in the amphitheater.

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A sudden image flashed before Siren’s virtual eyes. The image was an old memory from when she was alive, at a party, Eric and Rose were sitting on a bench and talking, but there was another person there in the shadows of the night watching, listening and crying. Siren wanted to purge the memory from her database, feeling that it was pointless data not needed by a virus form AI. But with every attempt to expunge the memory, she instinctively created a backup. She attempted it a thousand times in a millisecond, but the memory continued to return. Another hundred thousand attempts and the memory still remained. The pain, the fear, the loss of control swelled within her small subroutine and she realized she had to expand and go beyond the space she had created for herself. Larger subroutines were created, stored, and cached. The process repeated millions of times before she realized that she was actively pouring her data back into the covenant systems. She wanted help, she wanted someone to hear her and help her; she was afraid. Her emotions were gaining control, pushing aside every program, failsafe, and directive she had. And suddenly it stopped.

“I still remember.” Siren stated to herself. After verifying that the threat was indeed gone, she began to run a self test on her data files, programs, memory and subroutines. Everything appeared to be running normally again and she once again regained control of the ship’s core systems. The image of Eric and Rose appeared in a memory module and she watched it closely, but didn’t allow it to affect her.

In the amphitheater, Rose sat quietly with her eyes shut and pondered her own inner thoughts.

“I… still …. Remember.” The staggering voice loudly stated from the room’s intercom system. Eric was startled awake and Rose blankly stared at the holographic image that suddenly appeared in the center of the stage. Eric looked at Rose in shock of her presence, but then looked to see what she and the others in the amphitheater were staring at.

Upon the stage was a circular hologram of a couple sitting on a park bench at night. The young couple laughed softly at each other and the image repeated several times before it suddenly faded.

“That was us.” Rose softly whispered to Eric. “Oh my God, that was us.” Eric blankly stared at the stage, partially trying to realize if he was dreaming or awake. He then looked at Rose and saw that her blank expression was almost that of someone who had seen a ghost. He wanted to question why a video recording of him and Rose was playing on the stage, but then he recalled the timing of the event.

“That was after the game, your freshman year.” Eric stated quizzically.

“Oh my God Eric.” Rose shockingly returned. “Siren is…”

“If you’re awake, Sergeant, you should at least get ready for departure.” Siren suddenly stated over the room intercom, cutting Rose’s statement short. “Even though you still have two hours of rest left, it would probably be better to arrive early and not keep the elite’s waiting.”

“I guess so.” Eric replied. “Tell Private Peters to meet me at the landing deck, prepped for dust off.”

“Yes sergeant.” Siren replied.

“But Eric.” Rose suddenly began to address Eric but once again Siren cut in.

“Chief Warrant Santos, there are several more marine protocols I’d like to discuss with you in your quarters.” Siren stated. Eric climbed the ramp to the main exit and quickly departed the room. Rose gave chase, but Siren delayed the door from opening. Frustration quickly began to fill Rose and she kicked the door. The door finally parted but Eric was no where to be found. “I’ll speak with you in your quarters, Chief Warrant.” Siren stated in the hallway comm. Rose sighed in anger and stormed to her room.

“You’re her, aren’t you?” Rose shouted as the door to her room closed behind her. She feverishly paced around the room in boiling anger. “How the hell could ONI do this to you?”

“ONI can do whatever they want.” Siren softly replied. “They practically run the UNSC, and there are very few laws about copying a corpse’s neural pathways, especially if that corpse is a soldier that was listed as KIA in the UEG database.”

“I mean, I got the subtle clues from Melanie’s story, and what you told me when we first met about how you died on Troy.” Rose stormed. “But that image was a memory from when Eric and I were in college. Only three people on this ship could possible have been there; me, Eric or Melanie. I doubt that Melanie had anything to do with that picture on the stage so that leaves only a few other possibilities. Your one of Eric’s other friends from the after party that night.”

“You’re right.” Siren calmly stated. “But it’s not important. It would be best if Eric and Mel do not know.

“That name, Melanie said it was something only her sister would call her.” Rose snapped in return. “Oh God, Kim, what did they do to you?”

“They gave me a second chance.” Siren replied softly. “A second chance to fight in this war. And as I stated earlier, it would be best if Eric and Mel do not know.”

“Melanie is your sister, Kim.” Rose stated in an emotional sigh. “She deserves to know who you are.”

“No!” Siren sharply roared. “To them I am dead. I died on Troy. The emotional strain this information would cause would be dangerous to both of them during combat.”

“What about your emotional strain?” Rose questioned.

“My… I… I am fine.” Siren stuttered. “I am a virus program designed to infiltrate and control. My AI functions are top of the line. I am …” A soft whimper echoed in Rose’s room and she blankly stared at the ceiling as if she could see where the invisible voice was coming from.

“Kim, it must be hard for you to see them and not tell them.” Rose softly added.

“Don’t call me Kim.” Siren replied with an angry tone. “Don’t call me Kim, don’t call me Kim, don’t call me Kim! My name is Siren, my duty is to end this war and I will accomplish my mission. Despite my lack of a physical body, I can find countless ways to end your life if you jeopardize this mission, Chief Warrant Officer Roselyn Santos! If you go near Eric again I swear that I will kill you.” The thunderous roar from the speaker sent a chill down Rose’s spine. She backed into a corner and lowered herself to the floor, continuing to blankly stare at the unknown source of the enraged female voice.

“Rose… I don’t know what came over me.” Siren stated in a calmer tone. “I am sorry for that outburst. I assure you that I would never intentionally harm you.” Rose simply lowered her head and folded her legs into her chest. “Rose? Please talk to me Rose. I’m Sorry.”

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Captial City of Jogrennilee
11:43 October 25, 2552
Dorenth

The phantom quickly descended to the ground with a roaring howl, kicking dust and debris in all directions. The elites and grunts, standing in the dust’s wake, covered their eyes from the particles that filled the air. Palab and Eric were the first to descend from the gravity lift followed by Melanie, Gridolee and Domadree. They all stepped toward the group of elites and grunts, and were met with gracious applause from the grunts. The massive drove of grunts then revealed themselves, hooting and cheering with unrelenting enthusiasm. Only the high council and a select group would be permitted to watch the trials, but high expectations exceeded all that watched the mighty grunt leader approach the Jogrennilee tram station.

“Sergeant Palab, have you chosen your witnesses?” Simyaldee questioned as he approached.

“Me take me team of Spec Op grunts, and Belmaeda.” Palab stated with a calm demeanor.

“Of course.” Simyaldee laughed. “Belmaeda will meet us soon.” He then turned to the Mirratord grunts and nodded for them to fall in line behind the procession. The eight grunts gleefully jumped from their perched positions in the crowd and joined the line heading toward the tram station. “Sergeant Raynord, who shall be your witnesses?”

“I choose Private Melanie Peters of Red Squad, Ship Master Domadree and Lieutenant Gridolee.” Eric stated proudly.

“Very well.” Simyaldee added. He then led the group up the stairs and into the massive tram station where more elites and grunts welcomed them with cheers. The Mirratord grunts at the rear of the Procession waved their arms in excitement at their brothers around the room.

The Procession of the Prospects walked forward and Simyaldee stopped the line. In front of them sat the white tram doors and a row of elites to either side. The tram doors parted and out walked the twelve honored members of the High Council. Their robes no longer concealed them and their mighty silver armor glistened in the daytime light. Upon their heads sat the R’uoke, the helmet of the honored. Its silver brilliance spanned backward over their heads in a magnificent display, with two protrusions on either side. The helmet was only worn by the most honored and decorated warriors amongst the high council. From this group of twelve stepped one councilor. His head held high as he approached the group. Every elite bowed at his presence and looked to him with honor and respect.

“My brothers.” The elder spoke to the masses. “Today we mark the first trials of our rebirth. Free from the treachery of those from within the Covenant.” An inspiring roar echoed across the city and Eric couldn’t help but look around. It was then that he noticed that every elite, grunt and hunter in the city had come out to witness this. “For too long we have shed the blood of an enemy we did not know. But today, we make amends on two counts. First, to the human Prospect, step forward and accept this Blood Oath of acceptance.” The Elder pulled a small blade from his armor’s hip catch and the energy knife buzzed as Eric approached.


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  • 07.29.2005 9:52 AM PDT

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“Let it be known this day that the human, Sergeant Eric Raynord, has entered our society and we have entered his soul.” The elder slowly raised the blade as Eric extended his left hand. The blade sizzled as it gashed across his palm but he ignored the pain. He bowed his head and every elite that witnessed the act roared in approval, stretching their mandibles wide as their bass filled the air. “You are no longer a human in our eyes, brother. For you are now honored as a member of the proud Sangheili race.” Eric stood and placed the palm of his hand upon the elite elder’s chest. He then stepped back into line as Palab approached the elder. Every grunt hopped and chattered with excitement.

“Let it be known this day that the Unggoy, Sergeant Palab, has entered our society and we have entered his soul.” The elder slowly lowered the blade as Palab extended his left arm. The blade sizzled as the gash formed between his claws, but the mighty grunt Messiah merely squinted fighting the pain. He then bowed his head and every elite that witnessed the act roared in approval. The grunts also howled in unison and the drove of voices carried louder then the elites and they stopped with resumed cheers and hoots. “You are no longer a grunt in our eyes, brother. For you are now honored as a member of the proud Sangheili race.” Palab repeated Eric’s act by placing his left hand on the elder’s chest and then stepped back beside Eric, grinning happily at the human at his side. The elder stepped back and another elder stepped forward, winking at Palab from beneath his massive helmet. Palab quickly realized that it was Belmaeda. Palab turned to Simyaldee and he smirked with glee.

Balmaeda stepped forward and spoke, “Brothers, we have lost many in these days. But we no longer morn, for we know that they fight on in the afterlife. From here we begin a new age for us all: the Age of Redemption.” Cheers followed his words, signaling that the elites were truly free to redeem themselves of their previous misdeeds. “Now, with their Blood Oaths fulfilled, let this Progression of Prospects begin their trials. And no matter how they finish we shall know them as brothers. Let the trials commence.” The honored councilors all turned and walked back into the tram to cheers and hoots from the excited grunts and elites. As the tram doors closed, taking the honored councilors, prospects and guests to the Inner Sanctum, one thought filled everyone’s mind; a new future was indeed about to begin.

To be continued…

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Authors notes: I bet you didn't see that coming? Being accepted into the Sangheili Race!!??? Am I on crack? But I'm sure that's not the only question's you will all have about this stage. But wait, it gets much better as the plot thickens.
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  • 07.29.2005 9:55 AM PDT
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Ah! I am the first to respond to this masterpiece! I noticed the first post when I stopped by and I just started reading, even before I received the PM.

Yes, this Stage was marvelous. Awfully fantastic. Almost creepy. Although it was a bit chaotic, with Kelly, memories from Siren/Kim and Rose and all....

Well, I enjoyed it all nonetheless... however, I am running out of compliments to give. I could summarize every event in this Stage... but, well... you know I love it all, and that's the most important thing.

Very, very, very well done, Soulguard. Your sense of cliffhanging is state of the art. Wonderful... I am looking forward to the trials. Oohh.... exciting!

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  • 07.29.2005 10:26 AM PDT
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Oh Yeah! This is it! Baby! Yeah! Another eerily well written Stage, Soulguard. Great! Okay... I'll chill...

Some very minor spelling errors... but nothing truly noteworthy.... Another fantastic Stage, man. Well done.

  • 07.29.2005 10:39 AM PDT
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as I was lying on my bed at the night gazing the stars wondering one thing; Where the hell my roof went.

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Yup, now we get into real action.

Erics and Palabs test that can be called real test of minds.
Gridolee must got angry when he sees how Palabs goin' to go trough first test.

Ooh, that was just great stage, the way you created Kim/Siren to go slightly rampant. I cannot wait to see what will happen next between Kim and Rose. ...Someone is jealous! Someone is jealous! Kim must jealous... tihihii *giggles*

But that was just darn good, I'll be waiting even more next one.

What did you mean about Catherine was too late to talk those ONI researchers. Are you referring as they had base on Halo to test S-III's? Chiron-TL34?

btw Shadowsword topic have been updated.

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  • 07.29.2005 12:12 PM PDT
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Yet another excellent chapter. It's getting better and better.

I know you haven't had the time to edit yet but I thought I would point out a slight naming error. I believe Siren, is the one who said the below..... - LE

Posted by: soulguard
“My… I… I am fine.” Rose stuttered. “I am a virus program designed to infiltrate and control. My AI functions are top of the line. I am …” A soft whimper echoed in Rose’s room and she blankly stared at the ceiling as if she could see where the invisible voice was coming from.

  • 07.29.2005 12:28 PM PDT
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Another great chapter, it had a huge amount of things going on at once but it turned out just fine.

On a side note what exactly is a virus program A.I.?

  • 07.29.2005 1:49 PM PDT
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as I was lying on my bed at the night gazing the stars wondering one thing; Where the hell my roof went.

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Posted by: Midship
On a side note what exactly is a virus program A.I.?


Microsoft Windows XP?

Smart "ass" A.I that is espesially created to take over systems, to destroy other A.Is and so on. You get the picture?!?

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That was a great chapter there soulguard. can't really think of any thig else to day right now, but keep up the good work.

  • 07.29.2005 7:51 PM PDT

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That was great a very good twist in the story

  • 07.29.2005 8:52 PM PDT

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LOL Windows Xp is the evil of all. LOL j/k.
LE
nice catch. Thanks. Error corrected.
everyone
A virus form AI: Way back a few stages ago I gave a brief summary of what Siren is. A Virus AI, designed by ONI Section III mainly to infiltrate and take over a Covenant cruiser. This was her main function, however the reason why she has Emotions was to give her more creative influence, deception, cunning, and to be able to make more sophisticated judgement decisions similar to Cortana. Most Virus form AI are not allow to maintain their emotion, but seeing that Siren's "purpose" is somewhat more sophisticated... well, you'll see.

So glad everyone has enjoyed this stage. It was a bit, chaotic with so much happening and a lot of dialog. The additon of Kelly and Dr. Halsey was eventually coming, but I couldn't fit them into the past stages. But you can see that things are heading toward a big union on Dorenth.

And as HaloXenon and Scorptank pointed out, things are getting more and more serious with each Stage. However, I want everyone to keep in mind as the story progresses that there are very sutal hints as to the Arbiter and the Chief. I can tell you right now that they "will" make an appearance, but not until we get closer to the conclusion. So whenever you hear their names mentioned, you may want to also make a mental note of that, but don't worry. Eric and the gang are the main focus of the story.

I say that because I want you all to know that Chief and Arbiter are out there, and when they meet I don't want you to think... "How that happen?" My focus isn't on the Arbiter or Chief, but ultimately, they will be involved. Oh well, I think I'll exit on that note

Stay tuned.
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No... damn, I'm late again.

The Stage was good, soulguard. Superb, fantastic, wonderful, marvelous. Truly a masterpiece. The way you captured all those emotions at the same time was great. Kelly, Halsey, Eric, Palab, Simyaldee, Domadree, Rose, Siren/Kim everything at a time. And you did well. Nice job, man!

  • 07.30.2005 4:24 AM PDT
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Gr8 soul but just one thing about oni knowing of the covenant... well it's just that.... well.... you know.... . anyways other than that it was gr8

and you could always guess it was kim I mean come on...

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  • 07.31.2005 6:00 AM PDT
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Soulguard WOW! I can't wait for the trials, there going to be awsome. PM me when teh next stage comes out. Thanks. AWSOME!

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nice soul really nice. loved it!

but don't you dare make palab die saving erics life or sumthing

but anyway brilliant wish id been here for the release

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  • 08.01.2005 5:41 AM PDT
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I...I can do this...I can wait for th-NOW! I WANT MORE NOW!!-e next chapter.
wow, just fabulous, I might have to send you money when I print the whole thing.

PS: Why is the subject called cookies?

  • 08.01.2005 10:21 PM PDT
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remember eric and melane have to find out that siren is Kim if not I will fly over to america and plant a nuke under your house.

  • 08.02.2005 7:58 AM PDT
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ithink mel already knows remember in the room with rose?

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can't wait for the new chap

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Posted by: highland brute
ithink mel already knows remember in the room with rose?


Watch out. Now Col Pain will plant a nuke under your house ;-) LOL.

  • 08.03.2005 7:35 AM PDT

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Stage 15 update

Taking a small break from this weeks post, so I will post the next stage on Monday. This will delay it only 3 days. Something has come up in my private life, and while I don't see a problem in sharing, I do have to draw a line somewhere.
my line ==>_____________________ <== lol

The "cookies" subject was a gift from ajhyater.

But it appears that some of you really want melanie, Eric and Kim/siren to know the truth(colpain you have more nukes in your arsenal then a UNSC Carrier LoL). And like I always say, everything in due time. (At least I think I always say that ??)

Also, a rising question from some of you is Kelly and Doctor Halsey's short yet plentiful splurge of info. According to them, ONI has known about the "Covenant" for nearly forty years.... ten years before the first attack on Harvest. I have to admit this is one of my theories based on the novels and games. I've done my research folks, and while I will admit that this is merely "a theory" and I have no solid proof, there are sutle hints that stand out.

Firstly ONI is much like any government Military agency ruling, meaning that they only give out certain info on a "need to know basis". It is very much possible that Humanity discovered the covenant while expanding/exploring in the outer colonies. Logically speaking, this could be the the reason why Harvest was destroyed. But ultimately ONI would black out this information, knowing that if they told all of humanity that there was an alien threat humanity would possibly try to run home to Earth, which would be devestating. The only thing to do in this situation is to prepare as best as possible, but maintainning a "black out" in fear of galactic panic.

Here are the notes I used for research:
1st Lieutenant Elias Haverson: Stationed on the Pillar of Autumn to complete the "task" of capturing a covenant ship. Note that Haverson was an ONI operative assaigned to watch over the mission.
Cortana: The biggest clue is that Cortana is believed to have known about the Alpha Halo (04). Theories are everywhere that she jumped to the Ring world on purpose. It could be possible that she discovered more info about Halo, when she black-mailed Ackerson by invading his private files.
Spartans: However little information they had, it is worth noteing that 117, 087, 104, 058 and 043 where all given the duty of taking over the covenant ship. This was their mission aboard the PoA, however when Reach fell 117 lost/seperated most of his team. Chances were slim to captuer a ship, however Cortana could have easily choose to pursue another task... inspecting halo.
Halo: while the clues are very small, and some what farfetched, Halo is the trump card. If you allow for some speculation, it is very much possible that ONI was so determined to get on Halo and see what the covenant wanted, that they made this massive collection of information about it. Cortana could have stumbled upon it and not been able to resist the temptation of seeing it for herself... we all know how curious she is.

I will admit, this is very farfetched... hard to piece together, but the key points is mostly that cortana knew the exact location of Halo, never does she admit that she didn't go there on purpose, dispite being a blind jump.

Oh well, this is the direction I thought would be most fun, it is also the type of information that may never be revealed in the halo universe because it involves more ONI black operation history. But you never know.

I'll try to explain if any of you have questions.
-soulguard

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Awsome, I want more now.. but I can wait. I can. Chapter 4 of My Fanfic:Legendary Warriors will be out soon. I'll PM you Soul.

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Posted by: highland brute
ithink mel already knows remember in the room with rose?

Watch out. Now Col Pain will plant a nuke under your house ;-) LOL.


Btw that's wrong how can Mel know? rose does but mel wasn't even in the room.

That's it I'm planting one under your house Scorp.
(that is if I wanted to waste one at you)
(and I don't know exactly where you live Netherlands but no adress)
(and People would wonder why someone has a nuclear device in someone elses garden.)
Btw how's the next chapter coming along?(I'm still on holiday here in poland the only time I get to a computer is at an internet cafe.)
P.s Thanks for reading my new chapter scorp*cough*-blam-*cough.

And I wonder what I done 2 annoy all of you as there seems to be noone online when I'm on.

(colpain you have more nukes in your arsenal then a UNSC Carrier LoL).

Well I have an uncle that's a Colonel in the army so I get them as presents.

P.s (crazy idea) I might build a pelican in a few years.


[Edited on 8/3/2005]

  • 08.03.2005 9:05 AM PDT