- last post: 01.01.0001 12:00 AM PDT
Posted by:soulguard
Scorptank: ... I'm beyond words. thanks bud. I still say that your describing yourself, in my humble opinion... you're the best (for god sake, you're Dutch and writing in English... If I could read/understand Dutch and read your work in your "Original Language" I'd assume you were a pro.. uhh I hope you understood that.. it was compliment.) My biggest concern is that some of you may think this is too far fetched for the Halo Universe, and then stop reading before the "simple" truth is revealed. But I'm sured you're slowly starting to put the pieces together... if you think about it, it's simple.. however... complex.
Oh dear, this might just turn into one of those "You go first."
"No, you go first."
"No, no, no, I insist."
"You go first you piece of Maasdammer!"
But in the end we are reviewing the stories, not the writer. And for that matter I might have been a monk from Tibet, your story would still be better.
And yes, 'we' - that is, me... well, I'm finally putting the puzzle together, and it took me long enough. But the plot appears simpler to the writer, than it does to the reader. It always does, that's a basic rule in writing, you, as the writer, understand it all, whereas the reader thinks 'WTF?' But umm... congratulations in advance....
Posted by: Midship
Birthday punches!
Right... wouldn't that be rude? Of course it could be another one of those 'All American Jokes' that go far beyond my comprehension. But then... I am European, and a Dutchie at that, and you're all laughing at me... *sniff* I feel out of place. LOL.