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Highland brute; MC spartan 219
I chalk that up to not giving enough sutle hints. I thought about giving away their relationship in the first stage, but decided to just leave some hints. Obviously my hints weren't strong enough.
I was trying to show that Wesley was trying too hard to be formal with Rose, while Rose was trying to suggest to him that he was trying too hard. Don't worry though, there will be a point where more info will be divulged about their relationship... all the details and lies. But that may not happen for at least another 2 stages.
Stage 4 update
Stage 4 is nearing the half way mark. But I've got a long weekend ahead. My final projects are due this week so I may not get the chance to edit till wednesday. So far this stage is shaping up nicely, plenty of action and character advancements. I must say that I'm pretty proud of this chapter just because the details are flowing nicely. While Stage 3 was nice for moving the story along, stage 4 takes it and runs head first into the chaos.
Since I'm not a huge war fan, I'm not the best at capturing battles, all I know is from what I've seen in movies and TV/Books. But even though this stage is only a minor battle, it is setting the pace for what is to come, and it's showing what works and what doesn't. I think you will all like the next chapter, a lot.
If things go well, I will try to have it done before wednesday. But if my work overwhelms me, it may take longer.
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