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Subject: Halo Fanfic: If I were your hero
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as I was lying on my bed at the night gazing the stars wondering one thing; Where the hell my roof went.

I am a Zombie.
Proud member of B.net since -04

I apologize for not posting here for awhile.
I've had some major problems at my place with person called knife.

I got drunk at friends party and then way back home, I met this shiny thing called Mr. Knife, And You know what? I had little conversation that ended up with fight, and my hand got nice redline.

Nothing serious, but just annoying. Little trip to Hospital and that's it back to Bar :)

[Edited on 11/23/2005]

  • 11.23.2005 11:15 AM PDT
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Wow....simply amazing. Best chapter yet, and I thought you did a great job describing the chaos, and I didn't think any of it was over the top. Absolutely brilliant. I can't wait for the last chapter.

  • 11.23.2005 1:40 PM PDT
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Posted by: Uberdawg
Posted by: HaloPooper
I think these are good fanics but can't you guys post these in a group u are in?


Soulguard's fanfiction must be seen by all. New Mombasa is the place for that.

Damned good chapter, Soulguard. I too have trouble with fight scenes, but there's no way I could've portrayed what you just did like that. I can only handle small scale, and you portrayed large-scale with immense skill. This is awesome stuff and I can't wait for the next one. Simply put:

Wow.


Took the words right out of my mouth.

  • 11.23.2005 8:42 PM PDT
Subject: Halo Fanfic: If I Were Your Hero (Stage 26 POSTED 11/23)
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Wow, man, this is a great story. Keep working on it.

  • 11.23.2005 9:30 PM PDT
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great chapter, but please dont kill marks or kelly!

  • 11.24.2005 12:32 AM PDT
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wow! I have nothing more to say+ I'm ill and I have to save my strength.
That was great, but where are the other sparans?
don't kill anymore people(except covies/flood)

p.s are you ever online? it always says Soulguard03
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  • 11.24.2005 12:56 AM PDT

He watches every Hodgetwin video they put up...on ALL their channels. He calls them the Hodge Triplets, and considers himself the 3rd triplet. He's started talking and acting like them now. Every other line out of his mouth "Thaaas some BULLLLLL**** maaayne" or "Gotta make dem gainzzzz". He calls his biceps "gains". When he eats post-workout, he talks to his biceps, "Don't worry gains, I'm feeding you. Daddys gonna feed you, gainz *kisses biceps*".

Posted by: poo on a plate
great chapter, but please dont kill marks or kelly!



Yeah, I'm with him. If any of the real Spartans die, I'm going to break things. They're just too cool. Kill all the Black Ops you want, though.

  • 11.24.2005 7:32 AM PDT
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BLOODY BRILLIANT !!!! lovin every moment soul keep it coming

[Edited on 11/24/2005]

  • 11.24.2005 3:30 PM PDT
Subject: Halo Fanfic: If I Were Your Hero (Stage 26 POSTED 11/23)
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Posted by: Uberdawg
Posted by: poo on a plate
great chapter, but please dont kill marks or kelly!



Yeah, I'm with him. If any of the real Spartans die, I'm going to break things. They're just too cool. Kill all the Black Ops you want, though.


What they said.

  • 11.25.2005 7:46 PM PDT
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Posted by: HaloXenon
I apologize for not posting here for awhile.
I've had some major problems at my place with person called knife.

I got drunk at friends party and then way back home, I met this shiny thing called Mr. Knife, And You know what? I had little conversation that ended up with fight, and my hand got nice redline.

Nothing serious, but just annoying. Little trip to Hospital and that's it back to Bar :)


haha...European people :D

Americans reign supreme (besides the Irish) when it come to booze and getting drunk :D

Oh yeah, and I'm no longer banned :D
(don't make cracks about Emos, and how they cut their wrists. Shiska will ban you)

  • 11.26.2005 8:18 AM PDT
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Oh yeah....
Guess who's back...
Back again...
Guess who's back...
Tell a friend...
Pirate's back.
Pirate's back.
Pirate's back.
So that's what foo!

Oh, and thanks for the link while I was banned soul, it was a good chapter :D

[Edited on 11/26/2005]

  • 11.26.2005 8:21 AM PDT

He watches every Hodgetwin video they put up...on ALL their channels. He calls them the Hodge Triplets, and considers himself the 3rd triplet. He's started talking and acting like them now. Every other line out of his mouth "Thaaas some BULLLLLL**** maaayne" or "Gotta make dem gainzzzz". He calls his biceps "gains". When he eats post-workout, he talks to his biceps, "Don't worry gains, I'm feeding you. Daddys gonna feed you, gainz *kisses biceps*".

Posted by: grunt pimpa
i think im gonna cry... *sniffles*


awesome.
awesome.
awesome.
awesome.
awesome.
awesome.
awesome.
awesome.
awesome.
awesome.
awesome.
awesome.
awesome.
awesome.
awesome.
awesome.
awesome.
awesome.
awesome.
awesome.



funny thing is. i was reading along still reading. thinking wow this is great. i hope this never ends. and beforee i know it all of a sudden as i scroll down i see author's notes and the bottom of my page.... at that moment. i seriusly felt likee crying. no kidding. because at that moment i realized. i was about to finish the chapter. that last paragraph was pure heaven. best way i can put it. but in a way it was hell.


ive got a good feeling about this next chapter.

ive also got a feeling i will cry once its over. and if you think im kidding your a dumb -blam!-.





wow.wow.............i cant explain how i feel right now. awesome.


wow.



i need a -blam!- pill or something.


damn.



wow.










wow.



holy -blam!-. HOLY -blam!-.


damn.


-blam!- hell this was puree mother -blam!- brilliance. -blam!- thats nice -blam!-.

damn. no other -blam!- -blam!-es could write any kinda -blam!- no weree near as -blam!- good as that -blam!-. holy -blam!-.

nice -blam!- man.


nice god damn -blam!- -blam!-.











WOW.

W.O.W.........!!!!!!!!!!!



i think i speak for everyone when i say that you have written the best piece of fanfic anyone could ever hope to read.




thank you for making my life better soulguard. i owe you one....hundred thousand...........



....and a half...



you deserve a -blam!- medal or someething.




look at me.


i cant stop.



WOW.

W






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if i wasnt so damn hungry it keep going....



oh what the hell one more.




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WWWWWWWWWW~!@@(#&Y@O*&EG#EODUGVBFOILWFBGOIWEUEGO*YGO* RG)@*&OG )!*#&P%RG_)(*P& CY)MN@(P#*$*V@#P(*UVU_M$*U*!@!@@!!!$U)(R!U!@!U)!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!







EDIT: i just counted it. i had 18 -blam!- blams.... holy -blam!-. oh who gives a -blam!- -blam!- -blam!- i -blam!- love this god damn -blam!- so -blam!- much i cant -blam!- help my little -blam!- ass -blam!- self i am likee a little -blam!- pervert except instead of sex i -blam!- am obbsessed with your -blam!- great ass -blam!- youve got here. god -blam!- damn any other -blam!- who even -blam!- tries to get on your mother -blam!- level man.


-blam!-.


holy -blam!- i cant stop man.


god -blam!- damn your little motha -blam!- ass for being such a -blam!- gifted -blam!-. i -blam!- meen hell man what the -blam!- -blam!-. i -blam!- cant get the -blam!- over how -blam!- great this -blam!- -blam!- really -blam!- is. holy -blam!- -blam!- man its likee -blam!- gold. except in words. DAMN! -blam!- hell man. seriusly. -blam!-.


-blam!-!!!!!


i swear im gonna -blam!- send like 20 -blam!- whores over to ur -blam!- house so you can -blam!- em up. you -blam!- deserve it. you deserve anyhting. sum -blam!-.


I'd pay money for a fan like that.

  • 11.27.2005 8:30 PM PDT
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i thought the new chapter was out but noooooo, it was just prowlaz/grunt pimpa being weird.

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  • 11.27.2005 11:30 PM PDT

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For those who are not aware of it, Stage 26 was released last wednesday (p-47). No PM's were sent because I had to dash out of town. PM's will be sent for stage 27 and the conclusion.

It seems that you are all demanding the lives of the spartans/Black Ops/Mariens to be spared. I don't really recall saying I was going to kill anyone, but in war people die, so perhaps it is a bit obvious that deaths will occur.

A lot of you seem quite happy that the chief will be making a grand showing, but I promise that the last stage will NOT focus on him. The chief will serve as a HUGE plot point to this stage, but I have no intentions of going back and telling you how the chief arrived at this point; some information was revealed in stage 25 (Lord Hood made it clear that the chief did some stuff and then escaped back to Earth).

I'm going to take this stage fairly slow, as I said I'm having a struggle with the conclusion, but I plan to work on it fairly often. But becuase of my dire need to catch up on work, I won't post stage 27 this week, look for it next friday and I'll post updates regularly.

HaloXenon, stay clear of new shiny friends, I've found that they can be very hazardous to one's health.

Now I'm off to catch up on Scorptank's story... I feel like I've missed a lot.

-soulguard

  • 11.28.2005 7:40 AM PDT
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yay update woooot,,

and grunt pimpa grow up no need for that kinda post

  • 11.28.2005 10:24 AM PDT

He watches every Hodgetwin video they put up...on ALL their channels. He calls them the Hodge Triplets, and considers himself the 3rd triplet. He's started talking and acting like them now. Every other line out of his mouth "Thaaas some BULLLLLL**** maaayne" or "Gotta make dem gainzzzz". He calls his biceps "gains". When he eats post-workout, he talks to his biceps, "Don't worry gains, I'm feeding you. Daddys gonna feed you, gainz *kisses biceps*".

Posted by: highland brute
yay update woooot,,

and grunt pimpa grow up no need for that kinda post


I suggest you edit that. He'll flame you. Badly.

Thanks for the update, Soulguard. A week from Friday is a long time... but we can handle it since you've been so awesome about getting the other chapters out quickly. One relatively minor wait won't hurt.

  • 11.28.2005 11:35 AM PDT
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he can flame me if he wants its a valid point its got na place in a forum that is civilized

  • 11.28.2005 12:05 PM PDT
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Heh, easy boys. We're here to have a good time and enjoy Soul's exceptional work.

Which, by the way was an excellent last chapter. Good to hear you're hard at work on the conclusion--which is sometimes the most important and sadly not given enough time and consideration by many authors.
But I have no doubt you'll give this story a decent conclusion. It seems you've pulled the loose ends together and are about to tie them together with the last chapter. I was so glad to see that the Chief would be making an appearance in the last chapter! The way you set up the segue into the last chapter with his arrival was brilliant. Loved it.
Looking forward, if not with some sadness, to your finishing chapter. Thanks for the pm's!

  • 11.28.2005 9:09 PM PDT

Hey, this is the first time i've ever posted here, but i've been reading the fic, and i'm lovin it. My only problem is finding the time to read more and not be working on my own. Makes me feel bad that i don't get any time to read...oh well.

Anyways, i'm here to let everyone know that Soulguard's fanfic is up at OFG (the Official Fanfic Group, link in sig), and is waiting to be reviewed by anyone up to the challenge. Vote on the story and give a review. Thus, if you vote, please post what you gave as a score.

I wish i could catch up...damnit.

  • 11.28.2005 10:28 PM PDT
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prowlaz, iv'e read it retard! i thought another chapter was out

  • 11.29.2005 3:41 AM PDT

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Now, now folks.

Moving on. Thanks Sir_brilliant for spreading the word, and for reading, much Appreciated!! Glad you've enjoyed what you have read so far, and I know all about the lack of time to read, if only time could stop...
As Sir_B has pointed out, Stand, Five feet high is now getting the review treatment over at the official fanfic forum. If you have some free time, head on over and leave some words in the review thread.

-soulguard

  • 11.29.2005 5:44 AM PDT
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We must spread peace and joy in this thread, as it is the least corrupted. We shall work hard to do so, and if we don't gremlins will stab your neck while you sleep.

I reviewed Palab's tale in the fanfic thread, and I really just stopped by to tell you that because of personal issues Clark's been away for awhile, and I don't think he'll be back in time to review the story himself.

So I shall pass along his praise, and say that if you want to know what he would have said, just take what I praised you about, double it, then erase any of my small negative thoughts. Of course that would mean he'd give it a 18/10 overall score, but I'm pretty sure he would have done that anyways. He always complained about not getting to read chapters when they were fresh and new, and its even worse with "If I were your hero".

  • 11.29.2005 7:08 AM PDT
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I must apologize for being so awfully late, soulguard, I simply didn't have the time to read the new Stage. But now that I have;

Great. Action really is your thing. The only thing I can comment on is lack of descriptions of the environment. All this action was really cool - you're a master at it - but I had a hard time figuring what the hell was going on where. Eric took cover, behind what? I could see all the action happening, but on a blank screen. Right, the desert, but still... I'm only mentioning it.

Posted by:But Melanie was a battle ready Black Ops Spartan; that was what Dr. Smith was calling them. She loved the title, and she was determined to make a name for herself by not dieing in this battle. Melanie wanted to see this war to the end.
Didn't Plato say: "The only soldiers that see war end are the ones that die fighting."

I have an eerie feeling Melanie wont survive. For a moment, I feared for Marks' life as well, simply because he was a target of constant plasma fire from Ghosts, but that turned out all right. And the Chief's appearance was well timed, any sooner and it the battle would have been too much in the favor of the allied forces.

Well done, soulguard. Very well done. Nice. Superb and whatever can be said.

[Edited on 11/29/2005]

  • 11.29.2005 7:48 AM PDT