- last post: 01.01.0001 12:00 AM PDT
I must apologize for being so awfully late, soulguard, I simply didn't have the time to read the new Stage. But now that I have;
Great. Action really is your thing. The only thing I can comment on is lack of descriptions of the environment. All this action was really cool - you're a master at it - but I had a hard time figuring what the hell was going on where. Eric took cover, behind what? I could see all the action happening, but on a blank screen. Right, the desert, but still... I'm only mentioning it.
Posted by:But Melanie was a battle ready Black Ops Spartan; that was what Dr. Smith was calling them. She loved the title, and she was determined to make a name for herself by not dieing in this battle. Melanie wanted to see this war to the end.
Didn't Plato say: "The only soldiers that see war end are the ones that die fighting."
I have an eerie feeling Melanie wont survive. For a moment, I feared for Marks' life as well, simply because he was a target of constant plasma fire from Ghosts, but that turned out all right. And the Chief's appearance was well timed, any sooner and it the battle would have been too much in the favor of the allied forces.
Well done, soulguard. Very well done. Nice. Superb and whatever can be said.
[Edited on 11/29/2005]