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Phoenix is dead, long live Phoenix!
Is it?

You KotOR chapter was excellent. just read it.

SoulGuard=Writing genius

  • 05.18.2006 10:49 PM PDT
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Definately good. Keep it up.

  • 05.19.2006 12:57 AM PDT

Phoenix is dead, long live Phoenix!
Is it?

Any News on the next chapter?

  • 05.19.2006 11:57 PM PDT
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nice kotor chapter
hows the gotlk coming?

  • 05.20.2006 12:50 PM PDT

Yeah, I smoke weed. And yeah, I like it. So either torch this bowl with me or leave me alone.

Just remember man.... no matter how good you are, she's STILL thinking of me.

good chapter.. no problem on the help

  • 05.20.2006 2:33 PM PDT
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The next chapter is moving along, for Luminous key. Look for it later this week, perhaps as early as wednesday, late as friday... but certainly this week.

I'm glad everyone is enjoying the story so far. Also, small update on the Official Website. Click the link in my signature below and tell me what think of the "additional content" on the page.

Gotta love those Black Ops... oohhrahh!
~soulguard

  • 05.22.2006 10:33 AM PDT
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Hello soulguard, I finished reading the latest chapter of your KOTOR story. It was OK I guess. A lot things are happening to fast in this chapter that seems like it could have unfolded a lot slower with extra chapters in between chapters 4 and 5 to build up into chapter 5.

**Spoilers**

When Edranus orders Sebrani to kill her own sister Jasmine, I thought that was a great dark and evil turn!

**End Spoilers**

I was hoping that you were going to build up more on this turn of event and have more chapters exploring this Dark Side.

To me chapter 4 was really dark, then in chapter 5 Edranus turns good? WTF?? This seems to quick and easy for me, sorry.

Aside from that I think your writing and stories are great!
I’ve read "If I Where Your Hero", "Stand, Five Feet High", "Guardian of the Luminous Key". They are all great!
Good work man!

I hope this make some sense.

Later…

  • 05.23.2006 10:43 AM PDT

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KotOR did make a very sudden change for our anti-hero in the last chapter. Although I will hint that there is something more going on inside him and that will help explain this sudden change. To think that someone with as dark of a heart as Edranus can suddenly switch sides like that... hmm... makes you wonder why?

lol... I'm glad you are concernd, you are the first to really point it out... but you'll understand it soon. A lot is happening in the story at this point, and it seems to be moving fast, but that is because it is going to be a short story. Not too many chapters left until the end.

Thanks for reading.

~Soulguard

  • 05.23.2006 12:48 PM PDT
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OooohKay!

That makes sense. I thought it was going to be a long story like "If I Where Your Hero" or "Stand, Five Feet High".

"KOTOR: The Hunt" is a short story. I understand now!

Thanks.

  • 05.23.2006 1:47 PM PDT
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what about gotlk is that gonna be a sort story too?

  • 05.24.2006 7:22 AM PDT

“But I will for their sakes remember the covenant of their ancestors, whom I brought forth out of the land of Egypt in the sight of the heathen, that I might be their God..."

http://pages.towson.edu/dnsmith/halo.html

The links you have to jump from your site to go to the fanfiction require a login. I would venture you might have pasted each fanfic storys index page while you were logged in at fanfiction.net. Not a big deal, but it means readers will have to do a manual search for your fanfic writings.

Although it does work if you hit the general link : http://www.fanfiction.net/~soulguard that you have at the top of your site just under the words "Trilogy Books".

It could be me and my crackhead internet browser however.

... two universes discussed in one thread = confusion, abiet briefly.





[Edited on 5/24/2006]

  • 05.24.2006 11:32 AM PDT

Phoenix is dead, long live Phoenix!
Is it?

Any news on the next chapter? of anything.

Oh and will you be starting the third book in the trilogy after Halo 3 comes out? sometime 2007.

[Edited on 5/24/2006]

  • 05.24.2006 11:45 PM PDT

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Whoops, yeah. The problem with the links was that I was logged in. It has been corrected.

GotLK chapter 4 has been posted. However, it is VERY short, but the next chapter promises to be much much MUCH longer. This chapter was more of a transition and a Cascade of emtions. Things will fall back in place next chapter.

Of course, I know you will all have questions, so fell free to ask.

And yes, once I've played Halo 3, and read the next novel(s), I will begin working on Halo Side Trilogy Book 3!

~Soulguard

[Edited on 5/25/2006]

  • 05.25.2006 12:16 PM PDT
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Hey Soul, glad to see you're still writing. Methinks I'll have to go check out this short story everyone's talking about. And a new website, too? --I've been away for quite some time, I think. ;]

  • 05.25.2006 6:56 PM PDT

Phoenix is dead, long live Phoenix!
Is it?

Yeah you have been away for a while.

I loved the chapter, I was awsome, awsomely deep but also awsomely short.

Cool, I have no idea where you are going, who is good and bad, what that thing that is digging is, (my guess is the seed ship.) or much else.
Can't wait for the next chapter.

~Lamentations Christmas~

  • 05.26.2006 1:23 AM PDT

Yeah, I smoke weed. And yeah, I like it. So either torch this bowl with me or leave me alone.

Just remember man.... no matter how good you are, she's STILL thinking of me.

yeah just read it too... damn soul.. many twists.. i wonder what the grandmaster is talking about, half truths... sounds intriuging... hmm.... i must meditate on this...

  • 05.26.2006 9:45 AM PDT

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Welcome back Etoli... you have been gone awhile.

I actually didn't think you would all care too much for the last chapter, it was short and very "mysterious". I can say I am well pleased that things turned out well.
The Grand Master (notice I didn't write it as Grandmaster) will put the last peice into the puzzle, as Elena, Tisha, and Jacob (along with the Archangels) push toward this tiny village where the Grand Master has her home.

From the next chapter on it will be all downhill, I think there will be 3 more chapters at most. I intend to reveal everything one chapter at a time, including who is the good guys and the bad guys, while also making it clear as to what that "thing" is underground.

I'm going to Las Vegas for a week on vacation, so my writing will be delayed slightly. I will be taking my laptop with me, but I doubt I'll get much done. I will, of course, be able to get online and check in on you kids... from time to time.

Stay Tuned
~soulguard

  • 05.27.2006 8:54 AM PDT
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i bet its the seed ship from the end of IIWYH

and who u callin kids?

im a certified adult (in scotland thats 16)

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  • 05.29.2006 5:24 PM PDT

Phoenix is dead, long live Phoenix!
Is it?

Any news on the next chapter of any of your stories?

  • 05.29.2006 8:46 PM PDT

Yeah, I smoke weed. And yeah, I like it. So either torch this bowl with me or leave me alone.

Just remember man.... no matter how good you are, she's STILL thinking of me.

yes.... im also looking forward to the newest one... you have a way of keeping us on the edge or our seats...

  • 05.30.2006 9:58 AM PDT

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Live from Las Vegas...

Sorry for the "kids" comment, highland. I meant no disrespect.

I haven't done much work at all, even right now it is 2 in the morning (local time Nevada) and I am about to hit the streets for some late night... fun. lol

But I came through to update that I haven't done anything. No work has been done. But I'm sure that when I get home on saturday I will be spending a lot of time recovering from massive amounts of Alcohol and feet tiredness. With that down time I will be working on KotOR. So... I'll go on a limb and say that KotOR will be posted on Monday... while GOTLK will be up on Thursday or Friday of Next week (June 9).

Well... this is a very intoxicated Soulguard, singing off and headed for the Las Vegas strip... trouble will follow.

~soulguard

  • 06.01.2006 1:45 AM PDT

Phoenix is dead, long live Phoenix!
Is it?

Lucky ~blam~

LV aye, mmm.

Have fun, wait, carry on having fun.

Cant wait for those next chapters.

  • 06.01.2006 3:40 PM PDT

Yeah, I smoke weed. And yeah, I like it. So either torch this bowl with me or leave me alone.

Just remember man.... no matter how good you are, she's STILL thinking of me.

lol take it easy.

  • 06.02.2006 10:10 AM PDT
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yeah man relax u deserv it

  • 06.05.2006 2:57 PM PDT

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Still alive and back in action. I won't drag this out any more than I need to.

GotLK is about to get some much needed work done to it, yet I'm still working on KotOR. I plan to post KotOR soon, perhaps not today, but soon. GotLK will be posted sometime next week.

Short sweet and too the point.

Stay Tuned.
~soulguard

  • 06.09.2006 6:18 AM PDT