- last post: 01.01.0001 12:00 AM PDT
Hello soulguard, I finished reading the latest chapter of your KOTOR story. It was OK I guess. A lot things are happening to fast in this chapter that seems like it could have unfolded a lot slower with extra chapters in between chapters 4 and 5 to build up into chapter 5.
**Spoilers**
When Edranus orders Sebrani to kill her own sister Jasmine, I thought that was a great dark and evil turn!
**End Spoilers**
I was hoping that you were going to build up more on this turn of event and have more chapters exploring this Dark Side.
To me chapter 4 was really dark, then in chapter 5 Edranus turns good? WTF?? This seems to quick and easy for me, sorry.
Aside from that I think your writing and stories are great!
I’ve read "If I Where Your Hero", "Stand, Five Feet High", "Guardian of the Luminous Key". They are all great!
Good work man!
I hope this make some sense.
Later…