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Subject: Halo Fanfic: If I were your hero (Stage 6 posted)
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as I was lying on my bed at the night gazing the stars wondering one thing; Where the hell my roof went.

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Ok, just relax highy.

I will not any more copy it to my posts, so theres no problem anymore.

..,,,,
.(o.0)
((")("))o Where's my beer?

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  • 05.22.2005 12:54 AM PDT
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as I was lying on my bed at the night gazing the stars wondering one thing; Where the hell my roof went.

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Posted by: JcHeat
Yo i read stage 6 the other day just before i went to bed and i was really tired so thats why i forgot to post about how good the chapter was so sorry about that.
Cheers for the PM im enjoying this story I was wondering will we see the Cheif at any stage??


I doubt that, this story is about Rose (ONI) Wesley (ONI) and Eric's (UNSC) journey to save the earth... ?

Will is probably only Spartan in the story, if theres MC or any other that wouldnt be anymore marine story.

But hey, i'm not SG. he could do something very interresting.

  • 05.22.2005 4:24 AM PDT
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knowing soul he will

  • 05.22.2005 8:11 AM PDT
Subject: Halo Fanfic: If I were your hero (Stage 7 Info)

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Hmm, the Chief? What I can say is that the Master Chief will not appear in the story directly. He will, however, be heard from and seen. Think of it as;
"Hey look, another spartan just ran into that building!"
or something like that. I have something HUGE planned with him, but he won't be 'in' the story. Guess you'll have to wait and see.


Update
The story will be quite different this time around. Think of a flash back but still continuing on with the story. In this chapter you will get a very in depth look into Eric, Rose and Wesley's past, but I will still be pushing on with the story. Yes, Will and Red Squad will be in it, and so will Eric and Platoon 9. But the action will only be a side story to each of the Characters history.
I'm looking to post stage 7 on Friday.

Also, MCSpartan219 has started a side story to my fic. And I must add that it is shockingly good. He details the actions of one of my Marines after the events in New Mombasa. I know everyone is flooded with stories to read at this point, but if you can spare to read one more Halo fanfic, this would be the one to read. I'd post the link but I can't find it right now. MC219, can you post the link?
So my new list of favorites are:
Scorptank, Mr_clark, HaloXenon, Kokiri, the Silky Carp and MCSpartan219

and yes, I try to read all of you guys work. But eventually I plan to read EVERY fan fic here, including the older stories by Sir and MC117. Eventually I plan to take a long break from writing sometime in the future, just so that I can read. Anyway, that's all for now.

  • 05.23.2005 7:03 AM PDT
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Ah, finally Soulguard is back.
Phew, I thought something nasty happened to you.... well.... not really, but I did miss you in your thread. It was kind of boring without you around.....
But now you're here *voice from the TSAH 'hidden movie'*

Good to have you back, and I am looking forward to the next Stage, I've been waiting for nearly..... a couple of days now.

And a little something that might help you in your writing (or could save you a lot of work) this site seems to have a auto-blam!- option. Since Marines tend to talk like get your -blam!- self up here and scrap your -blam!- together!
I didn't censore any of those words. The site did that for me.

It could help you since you wouldn't have to censore those words yourself.

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scorp did you think we all inserted blams in our posts for no reason?

but a good thing for soul to remember though or he could post on fanfic . net where there is no censor

and oh yeah watch out if you rack up too many -blam!-'s in one week or month i dunno how long it is you get blacklisted i found that out the hard way a few weeks ago

[Edited on 5/23/2005]

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I knew about the auto censor, but I didn't know about the get too many and being blacklisted. wow... sorry to hear you got the big ole hammer on you Highland.

I actually placed the edits on purpose, so that the "blams" wouldn't show. I like the a$s and c*ck. but I do find it funny that bastard is fine, while $hit isn't. LOL

Oh and just to let you guys know, I have joined the Fanfiction.net community. "If I were your hero" is being updated there as well. I've posted only the first two chapters, and I will post a chapter every 2 days till I'm cought up. just a heads up. Here's a linky : http://www.fanfiction.net/~soulguard.
You guys don't have to post there, unless you feel the need to, but I like the responses here on b.net, cause we can have live discussions.

Scorptank, I'm back logged at work, so I haven't had time to read your story yet, but I will. thanks again for the PM. And no, nothing horrible has happened to me... at least not that I know of. Well... there was that incident with the elephant, the police, a group of Hawaiians, and a fat dog. But no need to discuss that here. LOL.

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Posted by: soulguard
Well... there was that incident with the elephant, the police, a group of Hawaiians, and a fat dog. But no need to discuss that here. LOL.


Have you been smoking pot again?
I told you to not do that.
Do I need to come over to the U.S and whip yo a$$?lol

  • 05.23.2005 10:37 AM PDT
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it's legal in holland isn't it
so why dose it bother you ?

  • 05.23.2005 11:54 AM PDT
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Posted by: highland brute
it's legal in holland isn't it
so why dose it bother you ?


I was joking.
And no, I believe pot is illegal here...... is it a softdrug?
Man, I gotta smoke some more and learn some names...

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it's legal there isn't it you can buy it from vending machines or sunthing we discussed it in social education drugs topic there was a bit about how cann-abis should be legalised and how it is already in holland and a few other countries

(it blams it with out the dash)

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if I were YOUR hero, you'd all be dead because i'm so clumsy.I'd probably shoot a control panel on the forerunner ship causing it to fire and destroy Earth so don't rely on me unless it's team slayer.

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Posted by: highland brute
it's legal there isn't it you can buy it from vending machines or sunthing we discussed it in social education drugs topic there was a bit about how cann-abis should be legalised and how it is already in holland and a few other countries

(it blams it with out the dash)


I dunno, but from what I see on the news, foreigners think that it's soooo cool.
And many people come to Holland, 'cause we look kinda sexy: we allow soft-drugs.
It's really not that cool when you're Dutch.
Only difference I notice in coffee shops is that people who smoke whatever look kind of
on-edge.

  • 05.24.2005 12:02 AM PDT
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as I was lying on my bed at the night gazing the stars wondering one thing; Where the hell my roof went.

I am a Zombie.
Proud member of B.net since -04

Drugs are stinky bad bad.

But hey would we plz get back to topic?

Stage 7 look into wesleys, erics, and rose's soul?
what willl we find?
a grunt!

  • 05.24.2005 6:00 AM PDT

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I've never done drugs myself, and most of us americans do look at other countries as the "place to be to get high". Very sad, and unintelligent viewpoint from our perspective. I'm sure drug use has it's laws no matter where you go. The most I've ever had is 'contact' (second hand high) from my dorm neighboors in college. Amazing how this conversation started. HAHA.

But HaloXenon is right, this discussion is a sure fire way to get the hammer dropped upon our heads.

HaloXenon
Hmmm perhaps we won't find a grunt. Perhaps Rose is secretly a jackal under the infleunce of ONI, wearing advanced human skin armor, and trying to learn the covenant secrets on forerunner technology!!! Now that would be a plot twist. hehe.

but seriously, It will be quite interesting as each character goes into their own head and explores the many paths in life they had to choose from. Don't worry, the past sequences won't eat up too much of the stage, but it will be enough for you to get a better understanding of the characters inner emotion.

  • 05.24.2005 6:15 AM PDT
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Well lets hope rose is not a jackel. That would really suck if she was i like her.

Well keep up the great work.

  • 05.24.2005 7:25 AM PDT
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Posted by: soulguard

Update
The story will be quite different this time around. Think of a flash back but still continuing on with the story. In this chapter you will get a very in depth look into Eric, Rose and Wesley's past, but I will still be pushing on with the story. Yes, Will and Red Squad will be in it, and so will Eric and Platoon 9. But the action will only be a side story to each of the Characters history.
I'm looking to post stage 7 on Friday.

Also, MCSpartan219 has started a side story to my fic. And I must add that it is shockingly good. He details the actions of one of my Marines after the events in New Mombasa. I know everyone is flooded with stories to read at this point, but if you can spare to read one more Halo fanfic, this would be the one to read. I'd post the link but I can't find it right now. MC219, can you post the link?
So my new list of favorites are:
Scorptank, Mr_clark, HaloXenon, Kokiri, the Silky Carp and MCSpartan219

and yes, I try to read all of you guys work. But eventually I plan to read EVERY fan fic here, including the older stories by Sir and MC117. Eventually I plan to take a long break from writing sometime in the future, just so that I can read. Anyway, that's all for now.


Hey soul. Sorry it took so long. I was gone over the weekend.
Here's the link. Enjoy guys!

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yes, i have personally read MC219 story, standing next to him actually, and i say that it is indeed very well written. the connections between them are adequate to this point also.

  • 05.24.2005 9:29 AM PDT
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as I was lying on my bed at the night gazing the stars wondering one thing; Where the hell my roof went.

I am a Zombie.
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Posted by: soulguard
HaloXenon
Hmmm perhaps we won't find a grunt. Perhaps Rose is secretly a jackal under the infleunce of ONI, wearing advanced human skin armor, and trying to learn the covenant secrets on forerunner technology!!! Now that would be a plot twist. hehe.

but seriously, It will be quite interesting as each character goes into their own head and explores the many paths in life they had to choose from. Don't worry, the past sequences won't eat up too much of the stage, but it will be enough for you to get a better understanding of the characters inner emotion.




Hmm... not grunt. are you sure?

Like Arbiter said in Scorp's story; “you were not the only ones with spies, Human.”



Well i must wait and see. Damn.

You are the Best
and i mean it

[Edited on 5/24/2005]

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please keep me posted on the next chap. by the way gr8 work

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Wonder what's taking so long for the next one...

  • 05.25.2005 2:40 PM PDT

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Midship

big plans, midship, big plans. Answers to questions, more questions created. The rabbit hole, as they say, is getting deeper.

So for the wait guys, but work and research for the story is really taxing me. I'm trying to get the timeline as close to accurate as I can, but also keep things enjoyable and not confusing. So far I'm about 90% complete on the story, but still have to edit and finish researching more info for the story.

This chapter isn't action heavy, but there is a lot of great info on your favorite character. Will takes somewhat of a back seat and attention is focused more on Rose, but Wesly and Eric also have their fun parts. I promise to be done by friday. WOOT!

-soulguard

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Posted by: soulguard
Midship

big plans, midship, big plans. Answers to questions, more questions created. The rabbit hole, as they say, is getting deeper.

So for the wait guys, but work and research for the story is really taxing me. I'm trying to get the timeline as close to accurate as I can, but also keep things enjoyable and not confusing. So far I'm about 90% complete on the story, but still have to edit and finish researching more info for the story.

This chapter isn't action heavy, but there is a lot of great info on your favorite character. Will takes somewhat of a back seat and attention is focused more on Rose, but Wesly and Eric also have their fun parts. I promise to be done by friday. WOOT!

-soulguard


Okay.....
No more 'WOOOT's please....

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stupid rabbits, dont they know when to stop? oh well, i guess it is alright.
still, they story is awesome.

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