- Alien Emperor
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- Exalted Legendary Member
I agree the song isn't the best, try finding something different that would make you stand out, my advice would be too go back a few years about 10 or 20 when music was very, very strange. Also I don't know if theres supposed to be sound at the start or not but it would be good to have some kind of quiet introduction.
Finally look at some advanced editing techniques, and watch pleanty of montages. If this is your first thing it's good to come out with a bang:
Overall:
Good points:
- Text at start was nice, introducing name and rank was nice and smooth
- Really good clips, but you don't need to see you gettingt-bagged unless it's resolved
- Good quality, but could be better if you make sure you get the screen sizes perfect for youtub
Stuff to improve:
- Needs a different song, something different
- Try some advanced editing techniques like splitting the frame, adding images
- Be creative, the best montages seem to be the ones that do something different