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Subject: Broke Back Mongoose [Goosetage]

☆ F4MOUS Frenchy ☆

My new mini-dualtage, feel free to comment.

Youtube - Broke Back Mongoose

  • 04.01.2009 4:25 PM PDT

28, Architect ll Deviantart ll TWP(Formerly Halo 3 in the WorkPLace) - Assistant Director ll SIP ll OTK ll DMH

Those are some really good kills, goosetages are great. One thing the beginning said Wheelmans, implying plural, but it should have been Wheelmen, with an E.

  • 04.01.2009 11:29 PM PDT

☆ F4MOUS Frenchy ☆

Yeah my Bad. For some reason, I just seen that my montage wasn't that cool i was thinking ( Synchronization problems, Not best song used for a montage, Others problems) So i decided to delete this video soon and i'll chance it by a new Version of Broke Back Mongoose's goosetage. I need your help : Tell me what are the good and bad points.

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  • 04.02.2009 9:18 AM PDT

I agree the song isn't the best, try finding something different that would make you stand out, my advice would be too go back a few years about 10 or 20 when music was very, very strange. Also I don't know if theres supposed to be sound at the start or not but it would be good to have some kind of quiet introduction.
Finally look at some advanced editing techniques, and watch pleanty of montages. If this is your first thing it's good to come out with a bang:

Overall:
Good points:
- Text at start was nice, introducing name and rank was nice and smooth
- Really good clips, but you don't need to see you gettingt-bagged unless it's resolved
- Good quality, but could be better if you make sure you get the screen sizes perfect for youtub

Stuff to improve:
- Needs a different song, something different
- Try some advanced editing techniques like splitting the frame, adding images
- Be creative, the best montages seem to be the ones that do something different

  • 04.02.2009 3:12 PM PDT