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Subject: Part 1 of My Halo 2 saga (hey mods I think you'll like it too)
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I decided I am going to write a little short story on something I dreamed. It what I dreamed a battle In Halo 2 would be. Enjoy (please tell me any grammatical errors I might have done)

The Master Chief doubted his decision. He knew that the Covenant were after something on Earth. Otherwise they would have already glassed the planet. He had been given a direct order to help stem off the covenant at the siege New York. The covenant were hitting it hard, but why? There was no significant reason to it. When ordered to go there to help the defense the Chief had refused. There was something at this place, the Mombasa mine complex, that they wanted. The Chief had a feeling that the covenant were going to hit this place and hit it hard. The logic was that the day before there had been many scout covenant shot close to the place. Maybe they were surveying the field in order to develop the a battle plan. What really gave the Chief chills was that something had been found in those mines right before the Covenant attacked Earth. The people who discovered it also mysteriously disappeared.
“Chief! Do we follow brass’s orders or what?” Sergeant Johnson asked waking up the Chief from his deep thinking.
“We stay. The covenant are going to hit this place and they are going to hit hard,” the Chief responded.
“Get tactical marines!” Sergeant Johnson yelled.

Defending the mine was not going to be a very hard task. The marines had placed turrets all over it, and got ready for action. The defense was going to consist of the Master Chief, about 500 marines, 4 warthogs, and 2 scorpion tanks. Because of the lack of vehicles, the vehicles that were present would be used defensively not offensively. The marines thought they had a chance, that was until a sea of covenant was spotted approaching very fast.
There were thousands of them, tens of thousands. The most numerous were the grunts of course, but the Chief had never seen so many elites before. There were also hundreds of brutes and hunters.
“We’re gonna die, we’re all gonna die!” a marine yelled.
“Get damn head out of your ass soldier, you are a marine of the Earth!” Sergeant Johnson yelled. This was the biggest battle the Master Chief had been in, and he was going to do what he did best, he was going to win.
Twenty ghost boosted ahead of the horde and opened fire as they approached.
“Rockets!” the Chief yelled. Thirty marines fired their rocket launcher all at once. The rockets sailed through the air and headed straight for the ghosts. As this happened two marines were completely mutilated by showers of plasma that the ghosts had been shooting. The fact that the mine complex was on a hill helped the efforts to defend it greatly.
The rockets found their targets. One hit a ghost right in the nose hurling it backwards as it tumbled through the floor. Two more rockets hit their mark, destroying the ghosts and shattering them into a million pieces. One rocket hit an Elite driver, blowing him along with the ghost to pieces. Some rockets missed because of the brilliant maneuvering of the driver. One brute swayed from side to side dodging two rockets, the third got him though, it him right in the tail sending him tumbling forward and into a rock. The impact broke the Brute’s body in two and the ghost was left in tatters. When the smoke cleared only two ghosts were left and before they could go back, two marines homed on them and fired their launcher, each one nailing their targets.
The Chief felt the floor rumble as the covenant army charged, for the first time, in battle felt as hope was slipping away.

Stay tuned for part 2. By the way this is only the beginning of a saga.

Ps. I dont know the story and neither do you so I tried to avoid it as much as possible, the few tidbits i give are just speculation.


[Edited on 7/13/2004 5:43:13 PM]

  • 07.13.2004 4:46 PM PDT
Subject: The Battle at The MIne Complex in Halo 2 Part 1
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uyh right on

  • 07.13.2004 4:51 PM PDT
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nice real nice

  • 07.13.2004 4:58 PM PDT
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I wish my brain would show cool dreams like that. All I get is a wierd beach with all these grunts running into the ocean screaming stuff (I don't remember) and then when I go in the water after them, I feel like I can't breathe. Then I wake up with my head face down on my pillow gasping for breath. This is true, I kid you not. It was like a year ago, but still.

  • 07.13.2004 5:06 PM PDT
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Thanks to the positive response guys, part 2 will be out tommorow so stay tuned, it'll be longer too, and tons more action.

  • 07.13.2004 5:16 PM PDT
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Also i didn't dream all this i based it on the dream. The reason for this simply since we can't play Halo 2 we're gonna have to imagine Halo 2 until Nov. 9th. It's also a blast to write it and share it with you guys.

[Edited on 7/13/2004 5:32:48 PM]

  • 07.13.2004 5:23 PM PDT
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lol by accident 1 in the date or november 9th there huh?didnt mean to strike a 1, rather a !? happens to the best of us ;)
anyways, great story so far actiony actiony wo0t. itd be cool if bungie took up this idea and we didnt know...we were on a level defending a mine when suddenly all this took place.."wait a minute..i rmeber reading about this on july 13th!!"

cant wait for next part

  • 07.13.2004 5:29 PM PDT
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I fixed the date and yeah its very actiony (that was the point). Trust me, tommorow's part is gonna rock, ROLL TANKS ROLL! (hint)

I hope more people read this, I'm doin it for the people. (you think I wanna sit here and type for a long ass time in the summer?)

[Edited on 7/13/2004 5:41:57 PM]

  • 07.13.2004 5:36 PM PDT
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I cant believe Hunters and Brutes in Online Play is beating my thread, oh well whatcha gonna do. last post till someone replys or until part two, thanks you guys who read it I will pm you part 2 after I post it on the forums.

  • 07.13.2004 6:04 PM PDT
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Posted by: EliteAdmiral
I wish my brain would show cool dreams like that. All I get is a wierd beach with all these grunts running into the ocean screaming stuff (I don't remember) and then when I go in the water after them, I feel like I can't breathe. Then I wake up with my head face down on my pillow gasping for breath. This is true, I kid you not. It was like a year ago, but still.


holy crap, i swear on my life, i had a dream just like that 2 nights ago. but when i went in the water my foot got stuck in the sand and i couldnt get up for air. then i wake up gasping for air.

  • 07.13.2004 6:15 PM PDT
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did you like the part 1?

  • 07.13.2004 6:32 PM PDT
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yea part one was great
keep it up man

  • 07.14.2004 8:28 AM PDT
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Last week I posted something like this, except it was like the battle in the Return of the King Halo 2 style.

  • 07.14.2004 8:34 AM PDT
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That was pretty good it sounds alot like most of the open area batles that took place in the books. This story does have a different feel though but still good. Keep it up man!

  • 07.14.2004 8:38 AM PDT
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Oh yeah, that story was really good.

  • 07.14.2004 8:39 AM PDT
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great job man! You said to point out a few grammatical mistakes... well most of them are just agreement problems that you should catch if you read it through. There were only a couple though. keep it coming!

  • 07.14.2004 8:42 AM PDT
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I'm about to finish part 2 stay tuned to the forums.

  • 07.14.2004 8:50 AM PDT
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bumpety bump

  • 07.14.2004 11:07 AM PDT
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please dont bump my thread i might get in trouble.

  • 07.14.2004 11:09 AM PDT
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Bump!

  • 07.14.2004 11:10 AM PDT
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Bumpy the Bumper Car!

  • 07.14.2004 11:10 AM PDT
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Bumpsta fo' shizzle!

  • 07.14.2004 11:10 AM PDT
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I hate compitition. Now I've got 2 people to worry about. What happened to me being the only story teller? Oh yeah, It's good too, so that also worries me.

[Edited on 7/14/2004 11:13:17 AM]

  • 07.14.2004 11:12 AM PDT
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hahaha, cool, cool, i didn't know, well you should read part 2.

  • 07.14.2004 11:25 AM PDT