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Subject: Need Some Constructive Criticism On My Machinima Trailer

Posted by: Cory Gaelic
your controller sings at you?
mine sings with me
we're doing a duet in the abby theatre on the 35th

Alien Menace Trailer

  • 04.13.2009 3:27 PM PDT

its a state of mind my friend its a state of mind

you need to turn a bit faster to make it look more fluid and the camera shots a bit shorter but other than that im gonna watch the finished video.

  • 04.14.2009 4:32 AM PDT

Good but not really menacing. Have a look at some professional trailers that do similar things as see what you can borrow

  • 04.14.2009 11:40 AM PDT

I am a cynical hippie here me rant about everything in my blog; http://cynicalhippy.blogspot.com/

Check out my machinima @ FWPStudios.webs.com right now only the trailers up and dont be fooled its a comedy. check out my forum and my group. and if you can sign up for any of them.

  • 04.14.2009 11:46 AM PDT

Posted by: Cory Gaelic
your controller sings at you?
mine sings with me
we're doing a duet in the abby theatre on the 35th

Posted by: Epic Fail636
you need to turn a bit faster to make it look more fluid and the camera shots a bit shorter but other than that im gonna watch the finished video.

Okay, thanks!

Posted by: stickman12
Check out my machinima @ FWPStudios.webs.com right now only the trailers up and dont be fooled its a comedy. check out my forum and my group. and if you can sign up for any of them.

No thank you, please advertise in your own thread.

  • 04.14.2009 1:54 PM PDT