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Well its my first fan-fic if you will, anyway its for a LA project, figured id run it by you guys. anyway its a ballad about john. BTW im not expecting perfection, but comments are appreciated that offer constructive criticism. Anyway here it is.

Refrain:

Bred for his country

Bred to fight

Stolen from parents:

But a bishop of light,



Refrain



A Man of few words,

His name is john,

Born as a soilder,

Thought to be only pawn



His mask was his face,

His image stopped at neck,

Turned cold ruthless killer,

To get his race out of check,



Refrain



A master of arms,

Both literal and weapon,

For a coveneant of queens,

Never lived to find deppen



He always kept fighting,

Though his guns were inferior,

All through the war,

He knew his mind was superior,



Refrain



He never used magic,

Through sometimes illusion

He always fought battles

Somehow saved foregone conclusion



Through long struggled years,

He always persisted,

And worked for the day,

Till one move existed,



Checkmate


by the way I hope oyu know how a refrain works, if not ill explain:

its like a chorus, every time I say the word refrain, insert the refrain in there.


  • 04.14.2009 6:09 PM PDT