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Subject: The Depths Below [Fan Fic] Part 4 up!

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Here is my attempt at a horror fan fiction.
Part 1: Arrival

The warthog zipped across the frozen landscape.
"200 Kilometers" A voice on the radio said.
Arnold looked at the soldier in the passenger seat of the hog. He was covered in a blanket. Shivering. Arnold heard a car horn and quickly turned his head back to the path. He swerved dodging a rock jutting out from the ground.

100 Kilometers" The voice said again. This time Arnold could see it. He could see the base up ahead. It looked like a little speck in the falling snow. He turned his head to the soldier besides him again. Still shivering in the seat. Arnold turned his head straight again. The base was getting bigger now. He could see the fence. It was torn down in most sections. The base was white with ice. Most likely the cause of no internal heating. That was a bad sign.

Then Arnold was right next to the base. With the 2 other warthogs close behind him. They suddenly came to a close stop. All the marines pilled out and their was a chilling silence. Only the roaring sound of the harsh winds could be heard. Then one of the Marines went up to the warhog and pulled out a radio.

"Redemption, this is ground squad alpha. Do you read me over?"
Their was a low mumbling sound comming from the radio. The marine held it close to his ear. Arnold could see them bright red. The Marine soke again.

"We have reached the objective. Losing one soldier fast. His hog original hog fell though some ice. Requesting futher commands over."
There was another low mumbling sound.
The marine spoke one last time to the radio. "Roger that, over." He set the radio back. "Alright. Lets get this door open." They all looked at the massive door before them.
"Zip, go check out the interface."

A short marine nodded. Then he went to the computer right next to the door. He seemed to fiddle with it. Then he said "Wont budge sir. The interface is frozen solid, Gus."
"Allright. Get the explosives. We have to get through now."

Arnold spoke up "Sir, what about the marine..." Gus quickly cut him off. "Command said to keep him warm. Weve done all we can about that But our main objective now is to get into that base."
"Roger that sir." Arnold said. He pulled out his AR from the warthog. He put a few clips in his belt and looked at the door. The other marines had finnished placing the explosives and had fallen back to a safer location. Arnold did so too.

"All right guys. Lets blow this baby up." Gus said as he pushed a button. A huge bang was heard. It made Arnolds hears throb for a sec. Then they all silently approached the darkness of the base....

Part 2: Down to Hell
All of the marines approached the base. Then they were standing in front of the blackness of the depths below. A marine took one brave step foward, but Gus put a hand in front of him before he could advance.
"Whoa. Slow down soldier. You and..." Gus said as he looked around for another marine. He pointed to the one right next to Arnold. "You. You'll both stay here and watch after the hogs. Don't leave until ordered to. Do you understand?" Gus said to them. The two marines nodded, looking kind of relived. Then Gus took a few steps forward. He was slowly feeling the ground before him before taking another step. He went deep into the blackness.

None of the other marines moved. Until they heard a voice from the deep. "All clear! Move forward." But they still just stood silent. "Get your chicken legs movin and get down here. Now." Gus ordered them. The marines slowly walked forward. Even though the path was said to be safe they still felt the ground before walking. It was getting a little warmer in here. No winds to cause drops in weather. But that gave them little to no comfort. Finally Arnold bumped into another marine in front of him who had stoped.

"Hey. Watch where your going." The marine told Arnold in a very strong commanding voice.

Thats smart, thought Arnold. It was pitch black. Then Gus flipped on his headlight.

"That was a test marines. You failed. You could have flipped on your headlights all along. Come on. Thiers some stairs" Gus pointed to a spiral staircase. The only means of getting lower. But they heard a low sound from below. But they pushed it aside and started to head down. Head down to an unknown hell...

Part 3: Stairs
The stairs. The stairs were, hard, cold, and slippery. It took the marines much time to just get down a quater of the way. One slip could end up knocking down all the marines in front of you like a line of dominoes. Arnold gripped the handrail in one hand, and his AR in another. It was still scary dark. And the heavy breathing of soldiers was just making the whole situation worse on the squad. Then the low moaning slowly built up again. This time louder. Loud enough that the marines had to stop and notice it.

Gus:Marines. Hear that?
Marine: Yes, sir.
Arnold: What is it?
Gus: Probally water....
Another Marine: You dont think the Covenant....
Gus: No, the Covenant are long dead. Almost 50 years since the end of that hell. It must be water dripping down.
Arnold: Like the Moaning Caverns?
Gus: Precisly.
Marine: But its freezing!
Gus: Shhhhhhhh. Come on. No more talking....

The Marines where almost to the bottom now. The moaning had stopped by now. But it was still loud in Arnold's head. Arnold shruddered as the cold came down his back again. They were at the bottom now. The dakness was overwhelming. Even with the headlights, overwhelming. But somehow peacfull. The moaning had come back. But much more softly. Impossible to hear unless you where paying close attention. Which all the marines where.

Arnold touched one of the steel walls. It hurt to touch it. Arnold quickly pulled his hand away and looked forward.

Gus: Ok boys, where to go?
He was looking at a fork in the corridor. Arnold didint want to go either way, but he had no choice. No one spoke up.
Gus: So, I guess im choosing. Im going right, with you, you, and you.
He pointed to three other marines.
Gus: The rest of you, go left. We should meet up back here later.

Gus and his small squad left quickly after that. A marine took a step towards the left. The others soon followed....

Part 4:Hallways
"God, I hate being cramped up like this." complained one of the marines.
"Stop being a -blam!-" Another responded. But the hallway was getting tighter. The walls were getting much closer then before. Arnold wondered if the same thing happened on the other side. Or maybe they were approaching a dead end. Whatever it was, it wasnt comfortable.

This hallway seemed pointless to Arnold. No doors or rooms on either of the sides. It was just getting narrower and narrower. "What for though?" Arnold thought yet again. He bumped into a marine who had stopped ahead of him.

"Hey, dont stop in front of me." Arnold yelled at the marine. Looking up, he saw it. At the end, it was a....door. There was finally a destination. One marine ran to it. Then stopped out of fear. The others started after him, but soon too stopped. The moaning was louder then ever.

Arnold slowly went to the door. He knelt down in front of it, and motioned to one of the marines. Arnold pointed his gun up, as the marines moved to their positions. Then one of the marines. At first he was hesitent. Then he pushed the door hard.

"Ow!" he said in pain. The door had not moved. He tried to push it again, no luck. Finally Arnold told him "Try pulling it."

The marine, dumbfounded, pulled the door and it opened. A big whoosh of air came through the door. A camera in the corner of the wall flickered to life. No one noticed it. Its red light turned green and it zoomed in on Arnold. The marines rushed in, guns pointed. The room was empty. Of people that is. It was full of computers and other tech objects, but no living life form found. The moaning had stopped. And the marines were happy. They had found the control room....





[Edited on 04.22.2009 7:40 PM PDT]

  • 04.19.2009 9:15 PM PDT
Subject: The Depths Below [Fan Fic]
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Good Story. Keep it up!

  • 04.20.2009 8:34 PM PDT

first thing i did was search the word clip

  • 04.20.2009 9:06 PM PDT

Posted by: I Steel Wolf I
first thing i did was search the word clip

  • 04.20.2009 9:08 PM PDT
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Ummm. What do you guys mean?

  • 04.21.2009 5:41 PM PDT

clip=ammo on removable inserters aka M1 garand clips, bolt action 5 round clips

assault rifles use magazines. filled with ammo operated by spring usually

  • 04.21.2009 6:04 PM PDT

Posted by: dodgeball_slayer
Ummm. What do you guys mean?

There's a difference

  • 04.21.2009 6:20 PM PDT

The Spartan Special Ops
-Now with more lolgasms. [lolgasms (R) was created by Vemps, patented by Vemps, and property of the Vemps Corporation]

The SSO is a laid back group for people of all interests. We pride ourselves in our strong community and beastly levels of activity. Whether on the Forums, or the Xbox, it's all about having fun.

Why yes I did just copy the group description

So your not even reading my story because I used a wrong word?

  • 04.21.2009 6:37 PM PDT

That's pretty bad guys. I'm dissapointed in you all.

  • 04.21.2009 10:53 PM PDT

Posted by: gun123456
So your not even reading my story because I used a wrong word?


no, we just want you to use proper terminology in your writing. a quick edit is all you need.

  • 04.21.2009 11:19 PM PDT

The Spartan Special Ops
-Now with more lolgasms. [lolgasms (R) was created by Vemps, patented by Vemps, and property of the Vemps Corporation]

The SSO is a laid back group for people of all interests. We pride ourselves in our strong community and beastly levels of activity. Whether on the Forums, or the Xbox, it's all about having fun.

Why yes I did just copy the group description

I dont think I even mentioned that. Did I mention clip? Where?

  • 04.22.2009 3:46 PM PDT
Subject: The Depths Below [Fan Fic] Part 4 up!

The Spartan Special Ops
-Now with more lolgasms. [lolgasms (R) was created by Vemps, patented by Vemps, and property of the Vemps Corporation]

The SSO is a laid back group for people of all interests. We pride ourselves in our strong community and beastly levels of activity. Whether on the Forums, or the Xbox, it's all about having fun.

Why yes I did just copy the group description

updated

  • 04.22.2009 7:41 PM PDT