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hi

as it is illegal to post user created content on the main forum i decided to post my goosetage here:
goosin' bros

this is a goosetage from two brothers: benjamin king 0 and dooms bro.
it contains alot of splatters, some monriding and a fun part!
none of this was staged and all was in matchmaking.

  • 05.29.2009 5:15 AM PDT

Not bad, theres just a few changes I would make. Either remove or split up the last 3 minutes throughout the montage as it's a bit dull.
First two scenes are good. You don't need the text telling people of the angles and drivers and things. However if you want to keep the drivers name try and have it on the video and in a stylized way so it looks nicer than just a normal font.
See if you can find someone who's good with Photoshop or Fireworks or GImp if you want to have a go yourself.
Finnaly try and make it the full screen on the Youtube page so theres no borders but thats just nitpicking
Other than that it's really good good clips,
Oh yeah and the introduction is really long you should try and cut that down

  • 05.29.2009 7:44 AM PDT

hi

ok thanks

  • 05.29.2009 7:59 AM PDT

28, Architect ll Deviantart ll TWP(Formerly Halo 3 in the WorkPLace) - Assistant Director ll SIP ll OTK ll DMH

7/10
I really liked the static camera angles, you can never go wrong with well placed static angles. I also liked how you went from static cam to third person, it's something you don't see to often in montages.

I felt it was kind of long though, 4-7 minutes is good, but above that it becomes difficult to maintain the viewers attention especially with bloopers. Don't get me wrong, bloopers are always fun, but not for too long. As Emperor said, try to work a little more with the text, rather than the basic ones offered in video editing programs.

  • 05.29.2009 8:52 AM PDT

hi

i'll remember the tips you guys give me

  • 05.29.2009 9:39 AM PDT