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Subject: [Promo] Payback (possible series)
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This is just a small promo of the machinima (hopefully series) that i am working on. the promo you will see is not a comedic one though there will be comedy included in the machinima to appeal to all halo fans.
this is indeed my first machinima so i encourage criticism as long as it isn't "that sucks" or "waste of my time"
if you do have criticism for it please tell me where and what it is. if i get enough positive feedback i will definitely continue this so i hope you all enjoy

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RhC4SfT5jlk


[Edited on 06.11.2009 1:06 PM PDT]

  • 06.11.2009 12:48 PM PDT

It's ok I'd currently rate is above average, but not by much.
You've jumped the first few hurdles though, it's not a terrible idea, the map you created looks good, you've actually got a capture card that works not some video recording either.
However it was hard to tell who was talking, offscreen voices don't really work in Halo as you can't see peoples lips moving, also I have no idea what happened story wise. Oh yeah and The credits were tiny! I could hardly read them
Whats the song you used? It's been bugging me for a while

  • 06.11.2009 2:39 PM PDT
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i will deffinity edit a lot of what was made for the actual series no doubt what was made from the promo was actually improv and i learned i could get some good material from the camera angles i had made but it was only a draft and ill pm you with the name of the song incase you never read what i just said

  • 06.11.2009 3:50 PM PDT