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Subject: The Rookie: AR

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Just some Fan Art, feel free to criticize here

  • 06.12.2009 12:51 PM PDT

hi

i like it looks good

  • 06.12.2009 12:53 PM PDT

nice

  • 06.12.2009 12:55 PM PDT

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thanks! any criticism though?

  • 06.12.2009 1:01 PM PDT

For some reason, the head doesn't look right...

But for everything else, it's awesome.

  • 06.12.2009 1:02 PM PDT

Nice.. If I were to atempt to draw something like that I would fail real bad. Stick figures holding hand guns is the best I got.

  • 06.12.2009 1:03 PM PDT

Something about the size of his visor seems off. But other than that is seems really solid.

  • 06.12.2009 1:03 PM PDT

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the body looks a little big for a fit odst but beside that looks great

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  • 06.12.2009 1:07 PM PDT
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one shout one kill. no luck only skill

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awesome.aaa... just edit the head a little

  • 06.12.2009 1:09 PM PDT
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Posted by: ABotelho
For some reason, the head doesn't look right...

But for everything else, it's awesome.

i think its just lopsided or somethin

don't get me wrong, its great, and i could never do that to save my life

  • 06.12.2009 1:11 PM PDT

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oh WOW! I can't believe i didn't see that! thanks guys! The "mouth piece" is crooked, wow CANNOT UNSEE . . . lmao should fix that . . already submitted it to a meheve contest though O__O

  • 06.12.2009 1:16 PM PDT
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Is that a Spartan laser on his back? If so, why is the AR bigger than it?

  • 06.12.2009 1:47 PM PDT

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Posted by: StP Scar
Sounds like a bunch of Justin Bieber wannabes in here. I bet you all wear skinny jeans too.

The visor has two more cuts to the sides, example

  • 06.12.2009 2:04 PM PDT

One of the few and the proud, a Mythic Conqueror, I am.

I was impressed. Criticism, however, would be the way he is holding the gun, it's just not natural looking. The rest is you just need a little practice on shading and work on your proportions a little bit. Pretty good.

  • 06.12.2009 2:07 PM PDT
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Looks great but I'm not a fan of the position he's standing/crouching/kneeling in. Idk it just kinda looks weird (not in a dirty way lol)

Also I couldn't draw like that to save my life so great job!

  • 06.12.2009 2:08 PM PDT
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Posted by: Xeena
seh looks like a alen anyway

Nice, but grenade is too small. Also the helmet might not be skinny enough, vertically that is.

  • 06.12.2009 2:13 PM PDT

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Crouching AR with SPLAZER pistol and nade are the req for the contest I entered it in

  • 06.12.2009 2:42 PM PDT

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Posted by: CJ_Bark
Nice, but grenade is too small. Also the helmet might not be skinny enough, vertically that is.


I think the width is right, Romeo's head it taller and skinnier if thats what your referring to?

  • 06.12.2009 2:43 PM PDT

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Posted by: Chocomog
Is that a Spartan laser on his back? If so, why is the AR bigger than it?


Perspective AND most of the splazer is hidden by his back (its thickest near the handle (I think)

  • 06.12.2009 2:45 PM PDT

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the head seems a tad too round.
other than that, good work!

  • 06.12.2009 2:45 PM PDT

Soffish for everyone!

Art and Halo = my life... pretty much.

Proportions, def need to work on, but the Ar position seems natural? its like halfway to holding behind his back, as if he is holding it up in the air

  • 06.12.2009 2:48 PM PDT

You better close this sig when your done.

Criticism:
Head just looks off
The waist is a little too wide
The grenade is tiny
The stance looks weird

What to change:
His left arm needs to be in a different position
Change the crouch to a standing position, if you can't do that then lower his right arm and have him leaning over more.

Other than that its fantastic. I would love to be able to draw like that.

  • 06.12.2009 2:54 PM PDT

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The head seems off a bit...

  • 06.12.2009 2:54 PM PDT

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ERIKOZZY doesn't normally criticize, but when ERIKOZZY looked at the rookie's legs ERIKOZZY thought his thighs were bare.

  • 06.12.2009 3:06 PM PDT
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This belongs here bud. Great job BTW.

  • 06.12.2009 3:10 PM PDT

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