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Subject: My End to Halo 3: ODST, Read It, Trust Me You'll Like It...

Status: Prepared to GTFO

Posted by: The Asian Guy15
This was great...make more


I'm drafting it up actually, right now...

  • 06.15.2009 8:05 PM PDT

http://www.forgehub.com/forum/aesthetic-maps/68563-sphinx.htm l#post850282
http://www.forgehub.com/forum/competitive-maps/69714-coventry .html#post860181
http://www.forgehub.com/forum/competitive-maps/69421-ivory-to wer-h3.html#post857275
http://www.forgehub.com/forum/competitive-maps/69648-hangem-h igh.html#post859461
http://www.bungie.net/Online/Halo3UserContentDetails.aspx?h3f ileid=75416482
http://www.forgehub.com/forum/competitive-maps/69452-blamnati on-h1.html#post857500

it didn't seem like an ending, more like a beginning but good writing nonetheless. I felt in it and was scared at some points

  • 06.15.2009 8:18 PM PDT

Status: Prepared to GTFO

Posted by: Speedmachine202
it didn't seem like an ending, more like a beginning but good writing nonetheless. I felt in it and was scared at some points


In some ways, you're right about the beginning idea, I'm thinking about how I could organize a continuation

  • 06.16.2009 7:18 PM PDT
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Honor. Respect. Loyalty.

Secondary Protocol

Hmm very well written, if you not a member of FFF I suggest you join.

  • 06.16.2009 7:21 PM PDT

Status: Prepared to GTFO


Posted by: I Sangheili I
Hmm very well written, if you not a member of FFF I suggest you join.


FFF?

  • 06.16.2009 7:24 PM PDT
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That was awesome!

  • 06.16.2009 7:25 PM PDT

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O.o

  • 06.16.2009 7:27 PM PDT

a bit too much description, especially with simile with every second. Not to mention that the several paragraphs had nearly no events. 2 things happened, they woke up in a dark ally, and all but the rokie escaped. Try and actually make an ending when you say you are. Also how does killing off everyone but the rokie make a good ending? It concludes nothing.

  • 06.16.2009 7:33 PM PDT

This world can be ugly, but isn't it beautiful?

That was great. Write some more. I especially like how you sent Buck out though. Sounds like something that Malcolm Reynolds would do. Never mind. It is something that Malcolm would do. If you guys don't get what I'm saying, ignore it.

  • 06.16.2009 7:40 PM PDT

Status: Prepared to GTFO

Posted by: Cubs1945
a bit too much description, especially with simile with every second. Not to mention that the several paragraphs had nearly no events. 2 things happened, they woke up in a dark ally, and all but the rokie escaped. Try and actually make an ending when you say you are. Also how does killing off everyone but the rokie make a good ending? It concludes nothing.


Firstly, description is usually a quality that most appreciate, however, I understand that there are more simple people on this planet therefore, It's not my place to criticize you for being so.

Otherwise, I do have authority to criticize for blindly replying to my thread in fact that you kept a closed mind and were content on attempting - likely for the entirety of the duration of the your reading - on criticising the post probably in relation to how many replies it has and how it dosen't arrise any insightful information about the true nature of the game. This is evident by means of how you only acquired that the squad woke up in their predicament.

And lastly, yes this can be an ending (you sound as if you've never beaten any of the Halo games on legendary) by nature of apocalyptal meaning.

For someone like you who dosen't like very descriptive writing, I'll keep it short.

- Apocalypses can be viewed as both an ending and a beginning, thus exampled in my ending.

And might I offer some advice - aside from reading with better intention. It is not wise to flame any as cravty as me on a forum, because we'll make you both look bad, and feel bad, so I don't reccomend repeating this in the future...

[Edited on 06.16.2009 7:52 PM PDT]

  • 06.16.2009 7:46 PM PDT

Death is a natural course of life, you should embrace the lives of the allies I have taken from you.

more pl0x?

  • 06.16.2009 8:53 PM PDT

Status: Prepared to GTFO

I'll try and get up the sequel by friday...



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Posted by: ARC 1795
more pl0x?

  • 06.17.2009 2:29 PM PDT

Work like you don't need the money, love like you've never been hurt, dance like noones watching.
O RLY?
My GT
This represents me.

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Posted by: ClevelandCav19
Was ok, the writing was kind of all over the place. But a good concept.

My thoughts exactly. It didn't flow as smoothly as it could have, but the idea was great.


For those of you whom think this way, lemme explain...

It's written in a presumptive format, or inferred format. You're supposed to try and figure out the unspecified parts.

The unspecified parts didn't change the flow of the writing.

  • 06.17.2009 2:34 PM PDT

dude the game sounds awesome and you made it sound even more awesome i totally buying it!

  • 06.17.2009 2:41 PM PDT

Screw the Rules i have Money!

Have you ever considered become a writer I would highly recommend it with that talent

  • 06.17.2009 3:05 PM PDT

Status: Prepared to GTFO

Posted by: Doctor Iceman
Have you ever considered become a writer I would highly recommend it with that talent


Actually, I have considered it, however, writing is not something that yields high reward - in exception for those of which have intended audiences of -blam!-ly neglected teenage girls (I.E. Twilight and in some ways Harry Potter - regardless, though HP isn't bad). See the word dosen't spread as much when you write science fiction, considering how you seldom ever hear someone say, "Yeah dude, did you read that one book about space/time travel yet?"

- However it's nice to hear some people are interested in stuff other than horny vampires, and that they like my writing...

- Lastly, I have to just say - with no intention to gloat or boast - that I'm going easy on you guys - in my writing - lest half of you would have the capability to understand this, considering that some find the flow a little awkward already...

[Edited on 06.17.2009 3:35 PM PDT]

  • 06.17.2009 3:31 PM PDT

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