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When life gives you lemons, ferment them and get drunk.

Part four in edditing

  • 06.19.2009 8:14 AM PDT
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When life gives you lemons, ferment them and get drunk.

Part five in creation. Part four still in edditing.

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  • 06.19.2009 6:56 PM PDT

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i guess its time to switch to third person. first person was too anoying anyway. when the cap shot tom, i got that from when me and my friend were playing combat evolved library legendary. If u get ur shields down and a flood hits u it sticks to you. I didnt notice until i saw my friends screen and i was covered in flood. So i was like get em off me! and he shot me with a shotgun trying to kill em, but it blew me to hell too. we laughed really hard


First person isn't too hard, and if you use it well it can develop into a really good story.What I've been doing lately with Memoirs of an ODST is using First person in some parts and Third Person in others. It works.

  • 06.20.2009 2:46 AM PDT
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When life gives you lemons, ferment them and get drunk.

youv'e got a nice series goin on there. your first person parts are alot better than mine.

  • 06.20.2009 7:17 AM PDT

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