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Subject: Hate's Revenge (Working Title): A script by Bartoneye93

Yeah. I'm back. Whatcha gonna do about it?

Thanks!

Just wanted to start by saying thanks for your initial interest in my little script by selecting this thread. Also, wanted to say thanks in advanced for reading the text that is to come. Lastly, want to say thanks for you feedback, if any.

Here's my Plot, and my prologue scene. Scene 1 Act 1 will be posted after this hits the Gallery. Further scenes will be posted Mondays, Wednesdays, and Fridays if significant interest is accumulated here. Oh, and... Thanks again!


-I plan on making this into a Machinima once I get some A/V cables for my TV-Capture Card-Computer connections.

Prologue, A summary:

After the First and Second Covenant war and the Covenant Civil war, comes a war with our newly-found allies: The Elites. This war wasn't bred of basic differences or beliefs in the "Halo God", this is a war bred of Hate. During the span of the Second Covie War and the Covie Civil War, the three suicidal/homicidal "Prophets" created unrest as well as turmoil for their people; they also brought about their own death. The first prophet, Regret, is assassinated by our hero John 117, in a journey of Epic proportions. The second Prophet is killed when trying to flee by the flood. The third and final Prophet, Truth, was killed in The Covie Civil War when he attempted to use our Heroes, Capt. Elizabeth Keyes and Sergeant Major Johnson, to light the fuse to the grand-daddy of "Halo" stations. Keyes is, regretfully, KIA'd with Johnson to follow suit later on. Truth is killed in a combined assault of thousands of flood soldiers and the Arbiter and the Master Chief, John 117. However, was he truly the last Prophet? Or were the three earlier prophet's just pawns in the game of the fourth and final Prophet, Hate, to be played against the Human race among all others.

Plot:
The fourth Prophet, Hate, is known for his long memories and distorted visions. However, he is also gifted when it comes down to leading other races to fight for his cause and when convincing others to join that cause. Hate is able to convince over 90% of the Elite Population to fight for his cause. The other ten percent, however, were true to the Arbiter to the end and forever will be. There are some that believe that Hate's dismemberment and destruction of the Arbiter was a great political mistake, but he sees it as another way to get what he wants. Hate's plan is to rid the galaxy of all Human life and increase the number of Elites. The last of his kind, Hate feels like the Elites are just as worthy as his own race to continue in the galaxy and can take over the Milky-Way System. Though many agree with him, a handful of Elites want to aid the humans, due to their emotional bond by the Arbiter to Chief, and want to stop Hate. These Elites aid in missions secret, to both sides, and help the Humans out. One eventful day, a large Human defense station is caught in an explosion when attacked by one of Hate's Super-Class warships. Two astronauts are saved by the ejection of the rescue systems on the station but all of their team is killed and eradicated. Landing in a large Ghost Town, the astronauts crash-land within a portion of the city and stumble upon some unexpected occupants.

Prologue Scene:

*The screen is now pointed at the sky on Standoff following two white streaks flying through the air. The scene then changes to a small scanner station in Ghost Town where we see two soldiers.*

Soldier: "Sir! I've picked up something on radar! It's falling out of the sky at incredible speeds!"
Brigadier: "Track it! I want to know if it lands nearby!"
Soldier: "Yes, sir!"

*Screen changes to a group of Elites hidden somewhere.*

Elite Soldier: "What is wrong?"
Elite General: "Something approaches Though I'm not sure what it is."
Elite Soldier: "I now sense it too, I will track it. You need to concentrate on running this operation."
Elite General: "You are right, keep it under surveillance."

*Screen fades out then fades in on a spot on the ground near the large caved-in tunnel pointing towards one of the pipe entrances. Two rockets explode in the distance, dirt flying into the air. Then it fades out again."

  • 06.17.2009 9:32 PM PDT

Yeah. I'm back. Whatcha gonna do about it?

Act 1; Scene 1: Attack of the Elites

*The screen fades/zooms in on a short, wooden fence near some pipes on Ghost Town. Two rockets strike down inside the small area of wooden fencing to simulate the escape pods. As the smoke clears, two Spartans dressed as astronauts step into the open.*

Bartoneye93: "Where'd we land sergeant, what town is this?"
Blake DSG: "I don't know, sir. It could be a section of Mombasa, Voi, or even just a small settlement. The only thing marked on my scanner is 'Ghost Town'."
Bartoneye93: "Can't be Mombasa, it was in a different part of Earth, plus nothing left of it after the Covenant Cruiser jumped while inside the City."
Blake DSG: "Could it be Voi then?"
Bartoneye93: "No, it has to be an uncharted town. Voi was under repair during our re-assignment, remember?"
Blake DSG: "Yeah, you're right. Well, should we continue forward, sir? Or hold tight here and make camp?"
Bartoneye93: "Too early for bunkering down Better keep moving."

*Moving forward, the building to their left has been closed up with wooden planks and barriers. The two continue forward noticing noises coming from around the corner ahead of them. As they round the corner Bart and Blake notice four Elites grouped around a small covenant camp. Up to their right is perched a commander equipped with a brute shot and energy sword.*

Blake: "Sir, Elites Should we approach them?"
Bart: "No, something doesn't feel right to me. We were shot down by an Elite cruiser. These guys could be part of the group that attacked us."
Blake: "Attack of the Elites"
Bart: "Yeah, part 3"
Blake: "Ok, should we double back, then and camp over where we crashed, after all?"
Bart: *nods* "That could be our best option, come on let's go-"

*Bartoneye's sentence is cut short when both Spartans get knocked out. The screen goes black and Scene 1 ends.*

I know the first two scenes are pretty short, they lengthen from scene 2 onwards.

  • 06.17.2009 9:34 PM PDT