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hey guys ive recently drawn a smg from ODST and want you opinions on it. it took me under an hour to finish with all the shading and details and what not. some of the imperfections are that the barrel is slightly slanted down wards and the ammo clip is a bit messed up.

so opinions and comments please ^_^

http://damienjones.deviantart.com/art/Halo3-ODST-smg-12658593 5

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  • 06.21.2009 1:23 PM PDT

Good use of tone ^_^

  • 06.21.2009 1:24 PM PDT

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nice job man

  • 06.21.2009 1:25 PM PDT

The only flaw is that it curves down.

9/10

  • 06.21.2009 1:25 PM PDT
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Posted by: Xeena
seh looks like a alen anyway

Posted by: TW InKoGnIto
The only flaw is that it curves down.

9/10


Agreed, But really good job!

  • 06.21.2009 1:26 PM PDT
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Great job 9/10 :D

  • 06.21.2009 1:33 PM PDT

I think thus belongs in gallery forum.]

But really great

  • 06.21.2009 1:34 PM PDT
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Nice one i think its great

  • 06.21.2009 1:58 PM PDT
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This belongs in the Gallery, not here.

Looks pretty good, except for that the silencer is HUGE. You really should size it down a bit. Other than that, looks awesome.

  • 06.21.2009 2:02 PM PDT

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I believe drawings like these go in the Gallery forum. I'd give it a 9.5/10, it's great drawing, but the only problem is that the silencer (or whatever that is) looks too short and 'wobbles', otherwise, fantastic.

  • 06.21.2009 2:04 PM PDT

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Nice shading.

  • 06.21.2009 2:06 PM PDT

Four shots, four kills, reload, repeat. This is the work of a sniper.

Very nice.

  • 06.21.2009 2:10 PM PDT
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Nice one.

  • 06.21.2009 2:15 PM PDT

At the end of an obvious statement you must put an obvious statement mark. It looks like this:

"The sky is blueisuck"
And
"This is a sentenceisuck"

Narwhal.

Straight lines- Artistic kryptonite.

[Edited on 06.21.2009 2:40 PM PDT]

  • 06.21.2009 2:40 PM PDT

really nice-pistol grip looks a little bit to close to the stock tho-maybe you could work on makin more guns, or maybe a hole scene tht would be cool

  • 06.21.2009 2:54 PM PDT

Nice job!

The SMG is one of my favorite weapons.

  • 06.21.2009 3:01 PM PDT

Posted by: TW InKoGnIto
The only flaw is that it curves down.

9/10

but i give it a 9.5/10

  • 06.21.2009 3:13 PM PDT

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I have to send you my drawing of an ODST and you could put that in his hand. That would look cool.

7/10- Just cause it curves. Use a ruler next time and it will be epic!

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  • 06.21.2009 3:17 PM PDT

Me gusta

Good job.

  • 06.21.2009 4:06 PM PDT
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thanks for all the comments guys, i may draw another now to see if i can improove it.

  • 06.22.2009 7:46 AM PDT

i really shouldn't rate it because i dont have any drawing skills at all...and i think anyone that does have drawing skills is awesome

9/10

  • 06.22.2009 7:49 AM PDT

wait...... did you say pancakes !?

its cool
9/10

  • 06.22.2009 8:16 AM PDT

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No offence but I don't think it's that good...
the only part where it looks 3d is the supressor, the rest looks rather flat.

Spend more time on the shading and try to cross hatch, you can see where you've shaded it in chunks like:
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(but obiously not THAT bad :P) Also, try to show a contrast betwen lights & darks, have some pitch black sections, and some completely white ones, that gives a really good effect like it's shiny metal and that it's 3d

[Edited on 06.22.2009 8:19 AM PDT]

  • 06.22.2009 8:17 AM PDT