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Hell Dive!

This is where I will Post all chapters to "Hell Dive". Read and Enjoy. Remember to give Feedback


Table Of Contents:
1. Prologue
2. Suit Up


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PROLOGUE:

The target was insight. Him and his crew of 4 ODSTs were to capture the flag, as a part of a training simulation. They were pinned down in a stone bunker on the training field. The field was empty, besides for a few slabs of stone sticking out in the ground, and bunkers at each end. Their mission; extract the flag and report back to the bunker.

"Connors, I want you and Marshall to toss a fragmentation grenade at "Slab Alpha" then make a dash for "Slab Bravo". Cover each others backs, Understood?"

"Yes Sir!"

He watched as his plan fell into place. The marines guarding the flag, took the grenade blast as bait. Two marines hopped off the stone platform, and crept up to the slab only to find nothing. He let out a small laugh. Connors and Marshall made it into place.

"We've got nothing" Radioed the Marine, to his leader.

"Find them!" yelled the Lieutenant over the radio.

"Time to move" he said. "Connors, Marshall, do you read?"

"Affirmative"

"Me and Stomek, are going to move in on the objective and Hanski is going to make a run for cover at "Slab Charlie". I'm going to need a diversion"

"C4 Charge?" asked Marshall

"You know me to well." He said

Connors launched a C4 charge over towards the marines and the objective. The marines
ran back towards the objective as the first charge blew up.

"Now!" He yelled.

Hanski made a dash for "Slab Charlie", while he and Stomek crept towards the objective. Taking covering behind anything they could.

"Ignite charge #2"

The charge blew up, knocking all the marines off the worn down platform.

"Regroup, at "Delta Wall"" He said.

The ODSTs moved in towards the wall surrounding the objective. There was only one thing left to do. Extract the flag. The marines moved in close surrounding the flag. They weren't about to be defeated just yet. The Lieutenant popped a bubble shield.

"Guns Drawn Marines!" the Lieutenant bellowed.

He took a glance around the training field. It was torn from the explosions and the previous simulations; this was one of the last simulations to be run. Most slabs reduced to rubble. All that remained was the fortress like platform, a couple slabs of stone, and the bunkers.

"Let's light this place up! Toss smokes!" He said.

As the ODSTs drew their smoke grenades, the Siren rang. Play time was over.

"Let's go!" He said.

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Chapter 1: Suit Up

He slowly walked out of training field. He was met by a man in a white suite. He had no facial expression or sign of emotion. He had a clean shaven face, white eyes to go with his skin. He had a shaven head covered by a cap.

"My name is Admiral Rammen, You need to come with me."

He nodded in agreement; he didn't want to mess with this guy, at least not yet. They hitched a ride on a facility cart. They drove for at least 10 minutes. He sworn they were going in circles. He wondered if they were trying to confuse him, and if they were it worked. They sudden made a sharp left, and started to go straight at a wall.

"Are you crazy? Were heading straight for a wall, turn around!" He yelled

Admiral Rammen didn't even move his eyes he kept on driving. He looked away and braced for impact. But nothing happened. He looked to see what had happened. They were now in a section of the building he had never seen before. It was nothing more than hallways and doors.

"You could have told me that was a fake wall." He said.

The Admiral said nothing, but he did let out a small smirk. The cart came to a stop. Rammen got out and signaled for him to follow. He followed him; they took turn after turn after turn.

"Great, more circles" He thought.

He was brought to a small room, and met by two other men.

"Take a seat soldier; we have some news for you."

He took a seat and waited. He scanned the room looking for any sign of where
he could be. There was nothing, just a small table and an empty bookcase.

"We have reason to believe the covenant is planning attack on one of our bases on another planet."

"What do you want me to do about it?"

"We want you and your squad to keep guard on it."

"You want a single squad to protect a base against a covenant army"

"There will be other marines at the base to help, and we will be supplying you with a new prototype armor."

"Armor?"

"Yes, our researchers have been working on a new armor for ODSTs. It is more damage resistant, equipped with night vision, a prototype mirror shield, a-"

"Whoa, whoa, whoa a mirror shield?"

"Ah yes, it's a new invention. The armor will take all damage fired at you turn it into a new energy and fire it back at half the damage."

"And where does this shot come from?"

"The energy is stored in an energy pack, located on your back. There is a tube
that connects that to a small gun on your wrist."

"Sounds a little farfetched."

"That's why it's only a prototype. The problem is even if you have enough energy you can only fire it once every hour and it won't always work.

"And there's the catch, anyway we will delighted to protect your little playhouse."

"Good you leave in an hour."


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