- Fos Tis Krisis
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- Intrepid Legendary Member
I hunt for the Prophet of Contentment, the San 'Shyumm that murdered my son, and stole his birthright, his Energy Sword. They call our species Heretics. They claim to all that our tongues sting, our words a vile poison that feeds on the unworthy. I have seen the true face of Heresy. The head of a gallant warrior lay on the ground. His neck scorched and blistered, scarred by his own blade. I shall retrieve the weapon, and drive it through that bastard's heart! Punishment for his sins is nigh.
Needs to be more unique compared to the Battle Rifle. It would make sense if the bullets were projectile, and had slower travel speed than a battle rifle, so you would have to lead more. Anyway, it needs a more Brute-ish name. I know you got Corporeal from the high school band that made the Halo Theme Corpomix... But it needs to be Brute-ish.