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Subject: [Novel] True Sangheili (Part 25 available!) ~ 28th January
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Posted by: chotato
smart, interesting, seems out of place.


Official fan of Assassin's Creed, Call of Duty, (Problem with that?) Halo, and Bungie, also a total gaming junkie.

Oh crap fix your post Wolver, you somehow bypassed the profanity filter. Other than that and one spelling mistake, I loved it. But you were wrong, this one chapter will NOT keep content, maybe the others, but I want more.

[Edited on 02.07.2011 12:17 PM PST]

  • 02.01.2011 11:26 AM PDT

Posted by: Ktan Dantaktee
Oh crap fix your post Wolver, you somehow bypassed the profanity filter.


Way to keep it on the down-low... I highly doubt any moderator reads my fan fiction, and I used the profanity in the context of the story because I'm tired of using 'crap' and 'bastard' all the time; it's juvenile.

I use swear words when writing original work when the occasion fits, and I'll do it in fan fiction too when it is called for. If a moderator has a problem with it then I'll gladly edit my posts and desist, but I can't see it being any bother; it's not harming anyone.

And I'll try and get another chapter done soon. I'll be busy for the next few days though as I've got History, Chemistry and English coursework deadlines coming up.

  • 02.01.2011 12:54 PM PDT

bought time if ya ask me
bastards a fun word and all but it gets repetitive.

  • 02.01.2011 3:55 PM PDT

The tide is turning, brothers! Let us take our kingdom back!

Man, I really love your writing. And I really hate to ask this of you, but...

Gods know I deserve it, the way I've treated you.

Would you mind starting this line with the? So it reads, "The gods know I deserve it, the way I've treated you."

Nitpicking with someone of your talent doesn't seem very acceptable, but I had to ask. And keep up the good work, please.

  • 02.02.2011 3:56 AM PDT
Subject: [Novel] True Sangheili (Part 24 available!) ~ 16th December

Chapter 25 was my favorite part so far. Very well done! Cant wait for the next part!

  • 02.02.2011 4:32 AM PDT
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Posted by: chotato
smart, interesting, seems out of place.


Official fan of Assassin's Creed, Call of Duty, (Problem with that?) Halo, and Bungie, also a total gaming junkie.

Yeah I guess. I would report this story, but I'm not THAT stupid.

  • 02.02.2011 6:28 AM PDT

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Great as ever Wolver.

  • 02.02.2011 9:20 AM PDT
Subject: [Novel] True Sangheili (Part 25 available!) ~ 28th January

i like waffles (toaster,potato) POTATO OMG WAFFLES YUM YUM

hi i have just read all of the chapters and only one word comes to mind "legendary" that is my description of the story

  • 02.04.2011 3:06 PM PDT

No new games, catching up with the world, and filling it with the name of SpazDragon, the dragon with a spas-12.

I'm bored without this story!!!

The only thing I have left is to read my forehead, which I haven't gotten to yet!!!

Hopefully my patience will get me through this...

*starts thinking about and wishing for Savara to return somehow...*

  • 02.05.2011 7:37 PM PDT

If you can read this, that means I'm not a Shaolin monk...

yet.


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Posted by: SpazDragon1397
I'm bored without this story!!!

The only thing I have left is to read my forehead, which I haven't gotten to yet!!!

Hopefully my patience will get me through this...

*starts thinking about and wishing for Savara to return somehow...*
We all hope Savara will return, but WF never gives us what we want. :(

Please... khill... Ehden...

  • 02.06.2011 11:52 AM PDT

If you can read this, that means I'm not a Shaolin monk...

yet.


Posted by: AssaultCommand
Everyone who likes the story, share the luv.
Send the above link to your friends and enemies!

Epicz0r.

  • 02.06.2011 11:52 AM PDT
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Posted by: chotato
smart, interesting, seems out of place.


Official fan of Assassin's Creed, Call of Duty, (Problem with that?) Halo, and Bungie, also a total gaming junkie.


Posted by: TheGreenAlloy
Please... khill... Ehden...


The whole time I read that story, I was thinking: "KILL HIM ALREADY! KILL HIM PAINFULLY!"

  • 02.07.2011 12:17 PM PDT

No new games, catching up with the world, and filling it with the name of SpazDragon, the dragon with a spas-12.

People may disagree with the fact that female elites will ever exist shown in true Halo canon.

But they are still in all of our hearts, fanfiction,...and Halo Legends.

Wolverfrog should probably write another story based on the subplot of Savara, show how she grieves at Sorran's "death".

Maybe he should build her back into the plot somehow, and build more character into her.

God, I'm such a female Sangheili fanboy. :P

[Edited on 02.07.2011 4:01 PM PST]

  • 02.07.2011 3:59 PM PDT

Don't worry, I won't leave any plot threads hanging. Everything will diverge into one, eventually. Sorry about the wait, I've been busy. With any luck the next chapter should be up soon, but no promises.

  • 02.07.2011 4:44 PM PDT
Subject: [Story] Halo: True Sangheili (Part Seven is up 6th September!)

-Not an Elite Roleplayer, i fancy the name, Deal with it.-

wolverfrog, you have written the best story i have seen in a long time...

-smiley elite -now an ultra (YAY)- is pleased..

  • 02.08.2011 1:33 AM PDT
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Epic story, Wolver. I've read it since before I was a member here, along with your others. Please make another chapter soon!

-Prophet Of Lies

  • 02.09.2011 8:14 AM PDT

love this novel WF look forward to next chapter :)

  • 02.10.2011 2:17 PM PDT

i like waffles (toaster,potato) POTATO OMG WAFFLES YUM YUM

when is the next chapter i need to know what happens next

  • 02.13.2011 12:45 PM PDT

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Posted by: AssaultCommand
You know, I'm actually wondering how many people ever download the PDFs to read the story :(
I had MoaO before my desktop crashed.

  • 02.16.2011 8:32 AM PDT

whens the next chapter..?
I'm getting withdrawal symptoms :(

  • 02.16.2011 10:37 AM PDT