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Subject: [Novel] True Sangheili (Part 30 available!) ~ 26th May

How much of the next chapter is done?

  • 06.07.2011 1:58 PM PDT

Posted by: Commander GX
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Posted by: A stupid game
How much of the next chapter is done?


A Wolver quote from a few days ago.

Posted by: Wolverfrog
Anyway, for the next two weeks I've got about 16 exams and so I hope you understand that I shall definitely not be writing anything in that time.

  • 06.07.2011 2:31 PM PDT

Posted by: Wolverfrog
That's Imperial Admiral Xytan. Not this character, Xatan'ee.


Yer, but there was some convo going on about his name, and I just thought you snatched the name from Xytan...

  • 06.08.2011 12:30 PM PDT

"No one ever dies a virgin because life -blam!-s you in the end."

It took me the whole day to read this, and your work is amazing. That is all.

-thread saved-

  • 06.08.2011 3:12 PM PDT

I wonder what'll happen after Zharn becomes fleetmaster?

  • 06.08.2011 5:16 PM PDT


Posted by: AngrydoG
GAH!


I want the fight!

When he wins i wonder what he will do to the humans he started fighting for in the first place.

  • 06.09.2011 1:18 AM PDT


Posted by: A stupid game

Posted by: AngrydoG
GAH!


I want the fight!

When he wins i wonder what he will do to the humans he started fighting for in the first place.


He'll probably execute them, since if he didn't he'd get killed for heresy or something.

  • 06.09.2011 6:08 AM PDT


Posted by: SangheiliProphet

Posted by: A stupid game

Posted by: AngrydoG
GAH!


I want the fight!

When he wins i wonder what he will do to the humans he started fighting for in the first place.


He'll probably execute them, since if he didn't he'd get killed for heresy or something.

D:<

[Edited on 06.09.2011 8:31 AM PDT]

  • 06.09.2011 8:31 AM PDT


Posted by: AssaultCommand
Posted by: A stupid game

Posted by: SangheiliProphet

Posted by: A stupid game

Posted by: AngrydoG
GAH!


I want the fight!

When he wins i wonder what he will do to the humans he started fighting for in the first place.


He'll probably execute them, since if he didn't he'd get killed for heresy or something.

D:<
Why do you care? It's just a stupid game...

Anyways, I assume he'd have them all locked up, with an excuse like 'questioning' or something like that.

FYI this is not a game it's a fanfic and it would be stupid if he would kill them after fighting for them.

  • 06.09.2011 6:08 PM PDT
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Posted by: chotato
smart, interesting, seems out of place.


Official fan of Assassin's Creed, Call of Duty, (Problem with that?) Halo, and Bungie, also a total gaming junkie.

Just read the new one, didn't expect to read about Savara and Sorran having sex.

  • 06.09.2011 6:51 PM PDT

If you can read this, that means I'm not a Shaolin monk...

yet.

Loving it.

  • 06.10.2011 5:36 PM PDT

Why hello there.

Microwave ovens are quite large.

WORT, WORT,WORT!

-NUMS!

I love the way the characters are coming together, keep up the good work.

  • 06.10.2011 8:38 PM PDT

If you can read this, that means I'm not a Shaolin monk...

yet.


Posted by: me123456789
I love the way the characters are coming together, keep up the good work.

No pun intended, si?

  • 06.12.2011 5:00 PM PDT

Why hello there.

Microwave ovens are quite large.

WORT, WORT,WORT!

-NUMS!

I meant more along the lines of character development.

  • 06.12.2011 8:35 PM PDT
Subject: [Story] Halo: True Sangheili (Prologue and Part one up)

I am the ONE AND ONLY Pyro.

I recommend This
Also,
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l | --------____.`=====.-.~:________\___|================[oo]
|_|||___/___/_/~```|_|_|_|``(o)----------<)

Such epicness has never been seen in anyother fanfic.Its too epic to be true...AWESOME STORY!I spent my whole yesterday evening and today's morning reading this!

  • 06.15.2011 12:40 AM PDT

Oh.

  • 06.15.2011 5:48 AM PDT

-Not an Elite Roleplayer, i fancy the name, Deal with it.-

what? no more true sangheili for two weeks?
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

  • 06.15.2011 3:51 PM PDT

so he'll probably start working on the fanfic again starting today (unless he was secretly working on it during his exams :-D)

  • 06.17.2011 5:33 AM PDT

Why hello there.

Microwave ovens are quite large.

WORT, WORT,WORT!

-NUMS!

He's done with exams now. And he said he wants to finish this this summer.

  • 06.17.2011 9:03 AM PDT

Posted by: Commander GX
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Posted by: me123456789
He's done with exams now. And he said he wants to finish this this summer.


Hallelujah!

  • 06.17.2011 5:02 PM PDT


Posted by: Wolverfrog
Posted by: The Seraphim
In my head, I'm considering your story as Canon, as it fits well with the Halo Story ( With the exception of Thel'Vadamee being a Supreme Commander in 2530, he was only a Major at the time, 2 years after the glassing of Madrigal.


Well, this is more like 2532 (Eridanus II was indeed first glassed in 2530 but in the context of this story it was only a partial glassing as with Harvest, and so the humans thought they would be safe to live there as they believed the Covenant wouldn't return; in 2532, Xatan'ee is finishing the job), but I see your point. I'll try and work something out.


Another thing I noticed this isn't really a problem though is that you make the Covenant feel nearly the same morally as Humans, such as willingly surrendering, no religious zeal etc.

I personally like your style of making the Covenant feel more human, although this shouldn't extend to the entire Covenant forces. If there were Covenant who had surrendered on a planet, the Covenant wouldn't have come back to help them, they would have glassed the planet with them on it. Humans to the majority of the Covenant were Vermin to be exterminated, not equal fighters who were fought in equal warfare.

I personally like the way you have it, as it makes the Covenant seem like they are fighting for the prophets out of fear and that they are not so different from Humans, but it would be nice to see some of the Covenant religious "zealous" fervency in the future.

  • 06.18.2011 9:45 PM PDT

I'm of the opinion that not everyone in the Covenant was a blind zealot. I think, as with any faith, there are those who take said faith a little further than others. There are of course people who believe unconditionally (Xatan'ee, Pel and others) and there are those who believe in the Journey but do not froth at the mouth over it.

I don't think the Covenant hierocracy would kill thousands of soldiers purely because they surrendered in the face of overwhelming odds. Is that not how the Covenant was formed? Through the battering of races until they eventually gave up and joined the Covenant?

Now, I don't completely adhere to canon with this story, maybe. Because if the Covenant was a completely alien culture to ours, there would be no relation to the characters and events. I like the idea of the Covenant being trapped in faith, but not completely besotted by it. There are radicals as with any religion, but most Covenant in my eye are just normal practitioners of the faith. These Covenant tend not to be in the higher echelons of rank, though, and we are very rarely shown the 'common' side of the Covenant in official Halo media so I think I can take some creative liberties.

  • 06.20.2011 1:38 PM PDT