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Subject: [Story] Halo: True Sangheili (Part Five is available!)

"Tolerance of intolerance is cowardice." - Ayaan Hirsi Ali

I can't tell you how much I LOVE your stories! KEEP UP THE WORK, IT'S AMAZING!

  • 10.16.2011 8:11 PM PDT

Why hello there.

Microwave ovens are quite large.

WORT, WORT,WORT!

-NUMS!

I want to know who lives and dies. And is Savara pregnant?!

  • 10.18.2011 4:28 PM PDT
Subject: [Novel] True Sangheili (Part 35 available!) ~ 14th October

That was another brilliant chapter. I can't wait the next!

[Edited on 10.18.2011 11:56 PM PDT]

  • 10.18.2011 11:55 PM PDT

You are really starting to write like a pro now, keep up the good work!

  • 10.20.2011 12:06 AM PDT

Good? scratch that, AWESOME work!

  • 10.20.2011 12:07 AM PDT

No u


Posted by: ENDESHA 115117
Good? scratch that, AWESOME work!


You know there is an edit button for a reason...

  • 10.20.2011 9:46 PM PDT

Words cannot describe the sheer epicness of the last chapter.

  • 10.23.2011 5:53 PM PDT

"I believe that the sound of racking the pump of a shotgun is universally recognized as ‘kiss your ass goodbye’."
— Unknown Marine

That last chapter was great Wolvers.

However "Death swung his scythe, and the funeral bells rang."

sounds a bit weak for the ending of the chapter. How could a funeral bell ring, a funeral implies that it was a planned event. Perhaps something like:


The air of life was seared, and the cold death knell tolled.

or

Death reaped his sacred crop, leaving the rest to the brewing storm.

  • 10.24.2011 7:12 PM PDT

No, those are awful suggestions and you should feel bad for suggesting them. Mine works fine; it's metaphoric and foreshadowing the events of the next chapter. A funeral bell didn't literally ring, for God's sake.

:/

Don't tell me how to write my own story.

  • 10.25.2011 7:35 AM PDT
Subject: [Story] Halo: True Sangheili (Prologue and Part one up)
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these are great =)

  • 10.25.2011 10:46 AM PDT
Subject: [Novel] True Sangheili (Part 35 available!) ~ 14th October
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do you have a link to your other works?

  • 10.25.2011 10:58 AM PDT


Posted by: pmatq
do you have a link to your other works?


Links are in the first post of this.

  • 10.25.2011 11:24 AM PDT
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thanks ive been reading for about a hour great story =)

  • 10.25.2011 12:33 PM PDT

By the power of truth, I, while living, have conquered the universe.

Posted by: Ringtail11
That last chapter was great Wolvers.

However "Death swung his scythe, and the funeral bells rang."

sounds a bit weak for the ending of the chapter. How could a funeral bell ring, a funeral implies that it was a planned event. Perhaps something like:


The air of life was seared, and the cold death knell tolled.

or

Death r@ped his sacred crop, leaving the rest to the brewing storm.


Whilst what Wolvers wrote was no literary magnum opus, what you just suggested in its place sounds abysmal...

[Edited on 10.25.2011 1:15 PM PDT]

  • 10.25.2011 1:14 PM PDT
Subject: [Story] True Sangheili (Part 15 is available!) ~ 26/10
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Posted by: AssaultCommand
Get the wallpapers now, while they're hot!

Version 1 | Version 2

Wolverfrog, please don't quit on this story anytime soon. plz?
I like it a lot.

- AssaultCommand


epic!

  • 10.26.2011 2:12 PM PDT
Subject: [Novel] True Sangheili (Part 35 available!) ~ 14th October
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Posted by: SpazDragon1397
THIS LINK IS SO FREAKING RELEVANT!!!

Wait, never mind. Do you know how bored I am now? I'm just going around, Elite Trolling everyone. :P

Anyway, great story man! Dude? Thing? Wort? Ugh...


Everybody just report this idiot.


lol


[Edited on 10.26.2011 3:06 PM PDT]

  • 10.26.2011 2:44 PM PDT
Subject: [Novel] True Sangheili (Part 27 available!) ~ 22nd March
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Posted by: Rovil Taham
my face when i saw new chapter: :D!!
my face when i read new chapter: :D!!!
my face when it ended: :)
my face when i realised there would be no more chapters for awhile: D:
nonetheless i value your chapters as i value diamonds
diamonds are worth heaps,
but i can read your story and be filled with joy
cant read diamonds!


^^

  • 10.26.2011 2:45 PM PDT
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Posted by: AssaultCommand

Posted by: Furtim elite

Posted by: AssaultCommand
Get the wallpapers now, while they're hot!

Version 1 | Version 2

Wolverfrog, please don't quit on this story anytime soon. plz?
I like it a lot.

- AssaultCommand


epic!
Thanks! There might be something good about not getting the pdf version of the first section after all... (have you seen that yet?)
It's below section 1 in the table of contents of the first page. Alternatively, use this link.

nice! who knew section one was that long. thanks

i also just checked out insurrection and wow!

[Edited on 10.27.2011 3:46 AM PDT]

  • 10.27.2011 3:21 AM PDT

The tide is turning, brothers! Let us take our kingdom back!


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Posted by: Ringtail11
Death r@ped his sacred crop, leaving the rest to the brewing storm.


Whilst what Wolvers wrote was no literary magnum opus, what you just suggested in its place sounds abysmal...
I lol'd.

  • 10.27.2011 3:27 AM PDT

"We live in a special time; the only time where we can observationally verify that we live in a very special time" - Lawrence Krauss.

I was a finalist :P

Do you expect this to be in similar length to Halo: Insurrection, or are unsure as of yet?

  • 10.27.2011 4:24 AM PDT


Posted by: Zealot Tony
Do you expect this to be in similar length to Halo: Insurrection, or are unsure as of yet?


True Sangheili currently totals up to about 270 pages in word. Halo 3: Insurrection in its entirety was 337 pages in word. I imagine that by the time this is finished, it'll be a little bit longer but with fewer chapters (as this story has longer chapters on average than Insurrection.)

  • 10.27.2011 5:11 AM PDT

By the power of truth, I, while living, have conquered the universe.


Posted by: Wolverfrog

Posted by: Zealot Tony
Do you expect this to be in similar length to Halo: Insurrection, or are unsure as of yet?


True Sangheili currently totals up to about 270 pages in word. Halo 3: Insurrection in its entirety was 337 pages in word. I imagine that by the time this is finished, it'll be a little bit longer but with fewer chapters (as this story has longer chapters on average than Insurrection.)


Tell that to the Insurrection Epilogue (aka half the story). :P

  • 10.27.2011 5:21 AM PDT

Epiclogue*

  • 10.27.2011 5:36 AM PDT

By the power of truth, I, while living, have conquered the universe.

G@ylogue*

[Edited on 10.27.2011 5:40 AM PDT]

  • 10.27.2011 5:40 AM PDT