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Subject: [Novel] True Sangheili (Part 35 available!) ~ 14th October

Hmm, the level of writing skill for this Novel or Fan-fiction is simply phenomenal. Stupendous. There are several words that can describe it. Though I deem them to be DEGRADING.

  • 10.27.2011 8:00 PM PDT

The tide is turning, brothers! Let us take our kingdom back!


Posted by: The Anti Troller
Hmm, the level of writing skill for this Novel or Fan-fiction is simply phenomenal. Stupendous. There are several words that can describe it. Though I deem them to be DEGRADING.
Am I a bad person for doing this?

  • 10.28.2011 12:52 AM PDT

wolver, just one thing. Did you know that restraint had to step down as a high prophet because he regret(who was vice minister at the time) caught him in the sex scandle between restraint and a jackel
just though that you might find some usefull info in this

  • 10.28.2011 2:53 AM PDT

Between Restraint and a Jackal? No, that's wrong. He was on the list of San 'Shyuum who shouldn't reproduce because he's on the roll of celibates and possesses recessive alleles within him.

This story is completely grounded within what happened in Contact Harvest and the events around that time period, mate. Trust me, I've done my research into it.

Be patient, everything will come together eventually.

  • 10.28.2011 3:09 AM PDT


Posted by: SangheiliProphet
Posted by: Illusive66
I had to log on to post this. I have not been here all that long, and I do not post that often. But, I have been lurking for a long while.

YOU MADE ME POST THIS


Greetings. Perhaps it would be better if you did not post, for you seem to be trying to incite what we of the internet call a flame-war. Or, perhaps you are just a jealous child who has written a terrible fanfiction and are now jealous of the Lord of Fanfiction's story.

What the hell is with this? Are you trying to bore me with two dimensional characters, a story which has obviously been made up as it went along and twists so obvious a bat could see them? Your vocabulary is limited and your intelligence is in question.

I find the characters to be very 3 dimensional. And I'm betting most novels are made up as they go along. The twists really aren't that obvious (Well, I knew Ahkrin was going to kill Restraint the moment it was said he was called by the Hierarchs).

I do not believe Wolverfrog's vocabulary is limited at all, and the only person whose intelligence is in question here is yours. The writers intelligence has nothing to do with this, however. I do wish you would try to be less irrelevant.

I read this story out of fascination that a story could actually gather a damned fanbase when other fan fics get no readers at all, its just unfair and retarded.

Fun-Fact: This story gets more readers because, perhaps, people like it more than other stories. That, my friend, is called an opinion. You learn something new every day, don't you?

Another Fun-Fact: You are a jealous child who was probably written a terrible fanfiction. If you want viewers, please, try not to write something like this: "once upon a time m4st3r ch13f kicked ass the end".

Also, I can't help but notice how overly human you make the elites, they're not tea-drinking, chocolate eating brits, they are aliens and they should be portrayed as such. You've somehow managed to make half of your fanbase -blam!-ly attracted to aliens, you are a furry machine and I seriously think you might be attracted to fricking elites too.

While I kind of agree the Sangheili seemed a little to much like humans at times, its better than "WORT WORT WORT".

How dare you accuse any of his fanbase of being attracted to aliens without evidence. You sir, are an abomination! *smacks with leather glove*

I know not why you think Wolver is one of those appalling creatures we call "furries".

Anyway, had to get that off my chest.

Thank you for your opinion. It is important to us. Now if you'll excuse me, I must take out the trash. *throws Illusive66's opinion in a trash compactor*

-Your friend, Sangheili Prophet. :)

Now that that's over with, great chapters Wolverfrog. Keep 'em coming!


just thinning through the inbetween chapter comments
1. who is this guy to insult wolver?
2. wolver can we start you calling you 'The Writer'? it sounds awesome

3. sorry wolver on halopedia the names are confusing, it doesnt say prophit or jackel it says san sung or something sorry didnt mean any confusion

[Edited on 10.28.2011 7:35 AM PDT]

  • 10.28.2011 7:32 AM PDT
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Posted by: ajw34307
Posted by: RogueAssassin27
you said you bleed pure lichor (spelling)


No, Ichor with an "i" not an "l". Ichor is the pure golden blood of the Olympian gods.


harpies
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great work =)

[Edited on 10.28.2011 8:05 AM PDT]

  • 10.28.2011 8:00 AM PDT

By the power of truth, I, while living, have conquered the universe.


Posted by: Furtim elite
Posted by: ajw34307
Posted by: RogueAssassin27
you said you bleed pure lichor (spelling)


No, Ichor with an "i" not an "l". Ichor is the pure golden blood of the Olympian gods.


harpies
+
great work =)


Did you really just dig up a post I probably made like a year ago? Why are you saying "harpies"?

  • 10.28.2011 8:12 AM PDT
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well yeah, "harpies" because they supposidly fly arroud in the underworld (human headed chickens or something)

+

"great"- because this is well......great

[Edited on 10.29.2011 5:21 AM PDT]

  • 10.28.2011 1:33 PM PDT

By the power of truth, I, while living, have conquered the universe.

Harpies aren't related to ichor though. o_O

  • 10.29.2011 2:20 PM PDT
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my bad

unless its hades ichor?

just finished reading the last chapter its speachlessly epic!
=)

[Edited on 11.01.2011 4:19 PM PDT]

  • 11.01.2011 4:18 PM PDT
Subject: [Story] Halo: True Sangheili (Prologue and Part one up)

check out my bubble surge pic on my file share!

  • 11.03.2011 4:16 AM PDT

Why hello there.

Microwave ovens are quite large.

WORT, WORT,WORT!

-NUMS!

Just release a new part before Skyrim comes out. I know you'll be playing it like crazy.

  • 11.04.2011 5:29 PM PDT
Subject: [Novel] True Sangheili (Part 35 available!) ~ 14th October

"We live in a special time; the only time where we can observationally verify that we live in a very special time" - Lawrence Krauss.

I was a finalist :P

About to start reading this novel in a few days. I have read Insurrection (and finished it), but I am now currently reading one of my favourite authors books, Matthew Reilly.

I know I don't post much here (more of a lurker). But do note that you have readers you don't know about.

[Edited on 11.05.2011 2:40 AM PDT]

  • 11.05.2011 2:40 AM PDT
Subject: [Novel] True Sangheili (Part 20 available!) ~ 2 May

What a waste....

Hey, was the Spartan being strung up through the streets of High Charity and being broadcast to humanity a reference to a story by someone of the name of Epsarin Hopsarith?

  • 11.06.2011 5:58 PM PDT

I don't know who that is. I just thought it was something the Covenant was likely to do; show its people the Demons die like all the rest, and lower human morale.

But it's not going to be as simple as that. I'm still working on the next chapter, it should be here before long.

  • 11.07.2011 1:08 AM PDT
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Sorry, that's classified.

Before long? Before how long?

and btw, haithar, long time lurker, short time poster here. I've been following this since about, what? A year I think? Anyway. I r here to readz moar. Give meh moar plz!

  • 11.07.2011 2:18 PM PDT

Why hello there.

Microwave ovens are quite large.

WORT, WORT,WORT!

-NUMS!

I paid $9.95 for two hours of internet so i could read this agian on a 2 hour plane ride to Michigan. It was worth it.

  • 11.07.2011 5:54 PM PDT


Posted by: me123456789
I paid $9.95 for two hours of internet so i could read this agian on a 2 hour plane ride to Michigan. It was worth it.
...The evidence is irrefutable.

  • 11.07.2011 6:38 PM PDT


Posted by: me123456789
I paid $9.95 for two hours of internet so i could read this agian on a 2 hour plane ride to Michigan. It was worth it.


You should just copy it into a word document, really. I feel bad that you spent $10 just to read this.

  • 11.08.2011 11:25 AM PDT

Why hello there.

Microwave ovens are quite large.

WORT, WORT,WORT!

-NUMS!

It's all I could do, Airplane WiFi blows. They limit a lot of stuff, its basically just email and IM. I was going to buy it anyways.

  • 11.09.2011 9:41 AM PDT
Subject: [Novel] True Sangheili (Part 35 available!) ~ 14th October

It's been a month! Where is the new chapter?!?

Love your work, I've been stalking for a while, so I thought I'd just let ya know. :)

[Edited on 11.19.2011 3:09 PM PST]

  • 11.16.2011 10:33 AM PDT
Subject: [Novel] True Sangheili (Part 20 available!) ~ 2 May

I've been very busy, not much time to write this lately and it's not a chapter I can just tap away at -- it's pretty complex with lots of threads needing to be tied and new questions needing to be asked to set up the third act.

I'll have to adopt the Valve motif of it'll be here when it's here.

  • 11.18.2011 8:11 AM PDT

Am I supposed to write something funny here?


Posted by: Wolverfrog
I've been very busy, not much time to write this lately and it's not a chapter I can just tap away at -- it's pretty complex with lots of threads needing to be tied and new questions needing to be asked to set up the third act.

I'll have to adopt the Valve motif of it'll be here when it's here.
And you're starting the 3rd act? Not good...

=P

  • 11.18.2011 11:47 AM PDT

No u


Posted by: Wolverfrog
I've been very busy, not much time to write this lately and it's not a chapter I can just tap away at -- it's pretty complex with lots of threads needing to be tied and new questions needing to be asked to set up the third act.

I'll have to adopt the Valve motif of it'll be here when it's here.
Good writing takes time. good for you.

  • 11.18.2011 2:21 PM PDT