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Subject: story's from new mombasa CHAPTER ONE.

Only the unloved and unnatural hate.

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*some of the name's of city's and person's have been changed by order of the UNSC and The Office of Naval Intelligence*


CHAPTER ONE

carver masters sgt 1st class


we are standing in banko square a small part of New Monbasa, part of the town is still not cleared do to the facts that money has still been tight due to money going to bigger and "better" parts of the town many of the resident's are steaming and a local group is protesting at the town hall right now.

carver: I was sitting in the coffie shop I'd been going to the past five years I was posted there it was called "monbasa mocha" I know the name was dumb but it had some f***ing good coffie.
sorry can I swear?

it's fine I'll edit it later

carver: alright well right as I was sitting down and had give dede *smile's*
I know, sounds like something out of some 1950's cafe on route 66! any way I told her what I wanted that day sat down and was looking at my "news paper".
I don't know why they still call it that. the f***ing thing is a super flat paper TV that has WIFI and a GPS! I mean come on! any way I was reading about (pop star who's name is being with held for legal matters)
you know the "I'm on drugs so I'm going in to rehab for two week's get out and say I'm clean." bull-blam!-.
any way the paper turned blank for about one minute then it read brakeing news in big all caps letters and then some blond news girl came on and it looked like she was standing in one of the big orbiting space ships and she was talking about how the covie's were above earth and she was on shoot first one of the many UNSC ships fighting to-.
and that was as far as she got when a bright light came on screen and I heard above me a big boom not very big but about as loud as a firecracker,every one around me was looking in the same place as me.....

at this point he looks around for about a minute and says

carver: you know how they say "the clam before the storm'?
well you could feel it in that crowd and then like a bubble it just popped and all hell broke out kids were crying,ladys were screaming and men were running every were and you know what?
I'll I could do was stand there....I was just so..shocked at what was happening, I mean I know that it was just a matter of time before they got here I just didn't know it'd be then I had this image in my head that I'd be at the base getting ready I was thinking that we would have some warning!...any way after I got over my shock I tryed to get back to the base but every one was in such a panic. I tryed to go the fast way but the crowd was so big that when I got in I got lost.

after about five or ten minute's of this some one yelled "HOLY -blam!- DUCK!!" then there was this big huge blast that knocked me in the head and I blacked out.

he leads me to one part of the square


caver:..this is wear they found me.....

you don't need to show me if you don't want to.


carver:no it's fine...me and dede always had a thing you know?
I told her that....that when I got out we would get marryed.

we are now standing by a grave that just says dede.

they said that when they found me she was...was laying on top of me like..like she was trying to block the stuff that was falling on to me they said that she must of broke her neck .

as we go to leave he tell me that he has bought the coffie shop "mombasa mocha" and has renamed it "dede's

END OF CHAPTER ONE.

well tell me what you think I'm going to be posting this in the gallery forum. if you like it.

[Edited on 07.27.2009 12:21 PM PDT]

  • 07.27.2009 11:35 AM PDT