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Subject: Bungie Weekly Update: 07/31/09
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Posted by: gamer16tsb
DrAcula7x, you may have found the incomplete sentence, but you failed to correct it.

Incomplete sentence: Perferably one covering grammer and punctuation.

Corrections: 1.A book covering grammer and punctuation would be perferable.
2.In your new found spare time, may we suggest you read a book covering
grammar and punctuation, perferably.

I only hope that these two qualify as correction"s" as stated in the paragraph, and that this counts as written.


"In your new found spare time, may we suggest you read a book? Preferably one covering grammar and punctuation. We strongly feel that this may be a wise and valuable investment of your resources. There will be extra credit awarded if you can identify the incomplete sentence in this paragraph and provide me with written corrections."

The incomplete sentence in the above mentioned paragraph is that "preferably one covering grammar and punctuation." Such a reality is ironic. The gramatical standard would correct that paragraph to be: "In your, new found, spare time, may we suggest that you read a book--preferably one covering grammar and punctuation. We strongly feel that this may be a wise and valuable investment of your resources. There will be extra credit awarded if you can identify the incomplete sentence in this paragraph and provide me with written corrections."

  • 08.05.2009 12:35 AM PDT
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  • 08.05.2009 1:24 AM PDT

I live in Texas and it has been a hot year, i'm talking about 106-110 pretty frequently.

  • 08.05.2009 9:10 AM PDT
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i believe it should be.... "In your new found spare time, may we suggest you read a book (preferably one covering grammar and punctuation)? We strongly feel that this may be a wise and valuable investment of your resources. There will be extra credit awarded if you can identify the incomplete sentence in this paragraph and provide me with written corrections."

  • 08.05.2009 10:22 AM PDT
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the sentance is "Preferably one covering grammar and punctuation."
Correction : "Preferably one that covers grammar and punctuation."


im not banned but thats the answer to your question

  • 08.05.2009 10:24 AM PDT

Posted by: Marty the Elder
MartyTheElder has made awesome Halo 3 ODST soundtracks.


Fix'd

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  • 08.05.2009 11:23 AM PDT

BLAM!!!

In your new found spare time, may we suggest you read a book? Preferably one covering grammar and punctuation. We strongly feel that this may be a wise and valuable investment of your resources. There will be extra credit awarded if you can identify the incomplete sentence in this paragraph and provide me with written corrections.

"Preferably one covering grammar and punctuation" is an incomplete sentence. Possible corrections include, "In your new found spare time, may we suggest you read a book that covers grammar and punctuation?" or "Specifically, you should read one covering grammar and punctuation."

  • 08.05.2009 4:29 PM PDT
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Preferably one covering grammar and punctuation.

Preferably a book covering grammar and punctuation.

  • 08.05.2009 7:30 PM PDT

Many bulls encompass me; strong bulls of Bashan surround me;
they open wide their mouths at me, like a ravening and roaring lion.
I am poured out like water, and all my bones are out of joint;
my heart is like wax; it is melted within my breast;
my strength is dried up like a potsherd, and my tongue sticks to my jaws;
you lay me in the dust of death. -Psalm 22:12-15

Excellent video, really well done! Thank you.

and last!

[Edited on 08.06.2009 9:26 PM PDT]

  • 08.05.2009 8:34 PM PDT

Has been hot this year in central texas even with the air conditioner on. Hey anyone know if in Halo ODST you can play as an ODST marin in multiplayer other than in just firefight and campaign. I like Halo multiplayer online but after awhile playing spartan and elite get tiring hoping you play as marine or ODST marin in massive multiplayer matches and hopefuly unlocks customized armor. ^^

  • 08.08.2009 7:41 AM PDT

that would be kind of hot

  • 08.10.2009 6:25 PM PDT

i know that odst style

  • 08.10.2009 6:25 PM PDT

halo odst halo reach what next?

  • 08.10.2009 6:26 PM PDT

me to and it said it said it comes with muiltyplayer with sergent johnson too

  • 08.10.2009 6:30 PM PDT

its pre order one and all the halo odst copies come out on september 22

[Edited on 08.11.2009 4:42 AM PDT]

  • 08.10.2009 6:31 PM PDT

i live in virgnia

  • 08.10.2009 6:32 PM PDT

i think you need xbox live

  • 08.10.2009 6:34 PM PDT

eary but big update

  • 08.11.2009 4:41 AM PDT

I agree with That

  • 08.11.2009 8:12 AM PDT
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I kind of want to know if they are takning any weapons out of ODST that were in Halo 3, I know about the pistol and the supressed SMG, those are new. Are they taking weapons out and replacing, or keeping all weapons. And one more question, can the ODST hold swords? Swords are good weapons, and that would suck without them

  • 08.12.2009 10:38 AM PDT

Eh im just tired of playing spartan and elite. I like them see make a massiv multiplayer game with all human, covenant, and flood types. ^^ With option of making a map from scratch like in farcry. Shields are nice but even person without shields can cause enough damage, Have variety armor for each soldier and covenant type in addition to vehicles you saw in halo wars. Shame i cant designs games i would make multiplayer shooter like that myself.

  • 08.13.2009 1:37 PM PDT

cool but culd have been better there should be better gameplay and tactic and the armors in multiplayer should actually do somethin besides making the player look good

  • 08.22.2009 4:16 PM PDT

Posted by: Marty the Elder
MartyTheElder is real.


Do you remember this video?

  • 09.06.2009 7:35 AM PDT