- last post: 01.01.0001 12:00 AM PDT
Posted by: gamer16tsb
DrAcula7x, you may have found the incomplete sentence, but you failed to correct it.
Incomplete sentence: Perferably one covering grammer and punctuation.
Corrections: 1.A book covering grammer and punctuation would be perferable.
2.In your new found spare time, may we suggest you read a book covering
grammar and punctuation, perferably.
I only hope that these two qualify as correction"s" as stated in the paragraph, and that this counts as written.
"In your new found spare time, may we suggest you read a book? Preferably one covering grammar and punctuation. We strongly feel that this may be a wise and valuable investment of your resources. There will be extra credit awarded if you can identify the incomplete sentence in this paragraph and provide me with written corrections."
The incomplete sentence in the above mentioned paragraph is that "preferably one covering grammar and punctuation." Such a reality is ironic. The gramatical standard would correct that paragraph to be: "In your, new found, spare time, may we suggest that you read a book--preferably one covering grammar and punctuation. We strongly feel that this may be a wise and valuable investment of your resources. There will be extra credit awarded if you can identify the incomplete sentence in this paragraph and provide me with written corrections."